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would rather spend their spare time on TV or on the Internet. However, reading has many benefits. Through reading we can learn more about the world. Besides, it can help us think better. Last but not least, reading can make our life more colourful. Here are my suggestions. For one thing, teachers are supposed to limit the amount of our homework so that we can have more time to read. For another, it’s a good idea to form reading clubs and learn from each other.【解析】 略3.C解析:例文In my opinion, City A is the better place to spend my summer holiday. Although the temperature there is higher, the hotel is less fortable, and even the food is not as delicious as that in City B, I still choose City A. The most important reason is that I can have a lot of things to do in City A . I can enjoy more beautiful scenery and do more activities. Besides, it takes us only two hours to fly there, which saves us a lot of time. I hope the holiday will be an unforgettable experience.【解析】【詳解】試題分析:本題給出了兩個城市的飛行時常、氣溫、旅館情況。食物等相關(guān)信息,要求考生對每個信息進(jìn)行比較,選擇自己要去的暑假旅游目的地。雖然字?jǐn)?shù)要求不多,但可以很好地考查考生英語寫作的基本功,需要考生對常用的英語句型熟練掌握。熟悉英語的表達(dá)方式。避免漢語式英語。句型不要都用簡單句。另外,一定要注意題目要求,把每一個信息都進(jìn)行比較,不要有漏掉。寫作亮點(diǎn):本篇作文按照題目要求選擇了城市A作為自己暑假旅游的目的地。對于城市A的缺點(diǎn),作者用了“Although”盡管一詞輕輕帶過。對于優(yōu)點(diǎn)則重點(diǎn)突出,因?yàn)樵诔鞘蠥可以做很多事情,作者在這里用了詞組“a lot of ”。在比較的時候,作者用了多種方式,使句子不單調(diào),比如在比較溫度時,直接用比較級“higher”在說旅館時用了“l(fā)ess fortable ”,比較食物時,用了“as…as”等。在說選擇城市A的原因時,用了that引導(dǎo)的賓語從句。本文大部分都是復(fù)雜句,顯示了作者比較熟練的英語寫作水平。4.D解析:I39。m a Dream Teenager Good morning, dear teachers and friends, I am Zhang Ming. It39。s great honor for me to make a speech here. As a fifteenyearold boy, my dream is to be a good teacher. To make my dream e true, I study hard at school and I am good at all my subjects. Also, I am an outgoing and healthy boy who likes football very much, and I really enjoy sports. At school, I always follow the school rules, so I am popular with my classmates and teachers. On weekends, I39。d like to help people. For example, I volunteer to visit sick children in the hospital and cheer them up.In a word, I believe that the man who holds his dream will be able to achieve his dream one day. That39。s all. Thank you!【解析】【詳解】這是一篇圖表作文。學(xué)校開展“夢想少年”的主題演講活動,假如你是張明,要求根據(jù)圖表提示內(nèi)容,以“I39。m a Dream Teenager”為題,寫一篇短文,向大家推介自己。根據(jù)所給出的材料提示可知文章時態(tài)主要用一般現(xiàn)在時,人稱主要為第一、第三人稱。首先認(rèn)真審題,看清題目中的要求和要點(diǎn);然后根據(jù)提示內(nèi)容,列出寫作要點(diǎn)及每個要點(diǎn)中可能要用到的表達(dá);然后緊扣要點(diǎn),動筆寫作。在寫作過程中,要將圖表內(nèi)提示信息用英語正確的表達(dá)出來,要涵蓋圖表中提到的所有要點(diǎn),注意理順要點(diǎn),防止漏寫。同時要注意語言的表述應(yīng)該符合語法的結(jié)構(gòu),造句應(yīng)該符合英語的表達(dá)習(xí)慣;盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式,最好不要寫太長的復(fù)合句;盡量選取簡單的易拼寫的單詞,確保正確率;詞匯、句式要豐富多樣,可以為文章增色添彩。最后要細(xì)心復(fù)核檢查,確保正確無誤。5.A解析:In the program, a customer stood up when a blind woman was cheated badly in a cake shop. I really admire her because she was brave enough to help the woman in need.The other day I saw a little girl crying at a street corner on my way home. I tried my best to make her stop crying. When I knew she was lost, I helped her make a call to her dad and stayed with her until he arrived. I found it pleasant to give others a hand.In my opinion, we are supposed to help each other and be thankful for others’ help. I strongly believe helping others will fill our society with positive energy. As the saying goes, “The rose’s in her hand, the flavor in mine.”(113w)【解析】【詳解】本文屬于話題作文,描述對節(jié)目中挺身而出的顧客的看法、發(fā)生在你身上正能量的事件以及鼓勵大家相互幫助,并讓世界充滿正能量。根據(jù)要表達(dá)的內(nèi)容確定并準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時態(tài),上下文意思連貫,符合邏輯,可適當(dāng)增加內(nèi)容。亮點(diǎn)說明:這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文,很好的完成了試題規(guī)定的任務(wù),語言表達(dá)符合英語習(xí)慣,準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時態(tài)、主謂一致,特別適用一些亮點(diǎn)詞句,如be for, adj enough to do, the other day, try one’s best, make sb do, make a call, give sb a hand, in one’s opinion, be supposed to, be filled with, the rose in her hand, the flavor in mine等。增強(qiáng)邏輯關(guān)系,增加上下文意思連貫,用詞準(zhǔn)確,句子通順,行文連貫。【點(diǎn)睛】寫作時可以從以下幾個方面做起:認(rèn)真審題。審好題是寫好書面表達(dá)的關(guān)鍵。審題時要注意試題的要求,抓住要點(diǎn),詞數(shù)符合要求。構(gòu)思提綱。有了提綱,我們就可以根據(jù)提綱和主題確定相關(guān)的寫作材料。通常書面表達(dá)給出的話題是開放的,而具體的內(nèi)容要求學(xué)生自己發(fā)揮,因此選擇恰當(dāng)?shù)乃夭囊彩鞘苟涛闹行耐怀?、明確的關(guān)鍵。初寫短文。一切都準(zhǔn)備就緒,就可以動筆寫作了,在寫作的過程中我們要注意句子的準(zhǔn)確性、連貫性以及簡潔性。使用的詞語、短語及句型盡量用自己有把握的詞。同時還要注意使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞,使句子銜接自然。修改潤色。修改潤色是獲取高分的必要步驟。這一步我們除了檢查短文的各種錯誤外,還要檢查語法結(jié)構(gòu)是否合理,有無重復(fù)、啰嗦的語言,大小寫是否正確,格式是否正確,詞數(shù)是否符合要求等。6.D解析:Dear Sam,Haven’t written to you for a long time! As you know, family rules are an important part of you Chinese traditional culture. Today I’m writing to tell you something about my family rules.There are many rules that we have to follow. First, you should respect the old and love the young. You are also supposed to be kind to other. Next, it’s a good habit to be honest and keep your words. What’s more, you should keep studying , go to bed and get up on time. You mustn’t stay up too late.In my opinion, every family must keep rules and children shouldn’t develop bad habits, like telling lies and be rude to others. We should be strict with ourselves.The family rules also make a great difference to me. I learn to think about others’ feelings and Chinese traditional culture. What about you? Do you have any family rules? I’m looking forward to hearing from you soon!Yours,Li Hua【解析】【詳解】本文屬于材料作文,向山姆介紹你的家規(guī)并向他展示一個溫情的中國家庭。根據(jù)要表達(dá)的內(nèi)容確定并準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時態(tài),上下文意思連貫,符合邏輯,可適當(dāng)增加內(nèi)容。亮點(diǎn)說明:這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文,很好的完成了試題規(guī)定的任務(wù),語言表達(dá)符合英語習(xí)慣,準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時態(tài)、主謂一致,特別使用一些亮點(diǎn)詞句,如be supposed to, be kind to, keep your words, what’s more, in one’s opinion, develop bad habits, be rude to, be strict with, make a difference to以及it is a good habit to be honest中it作形式主語。增強(qiáng)邏輯關(guān)系,增加上下文意思連貫,用詞準(zhǔn)確,句子通順,行文連貫?!军c(diǎn)睛】寫作時可以從以下幾個方面做起:認(rèn)真審題。審好題是寫好書面表達(dá)的關(guān)鍵。審題時要注意試題的要求,抓住要點(diǎn),詞數(shù)符合要求。構(gòu)思提綱。有了提綱,我們就可以根據(jù)提綱和主題確定相關(guān)的寫作材料。通常書面表達(dá)給出的話題是開放的,而具體的內(nèi)容要求學(xué)生自己發(fā)揮,因此選擇恰當(dāng)?shù)乃夭囊彩鞘苟涛闹行耐怀?、明確的關(guān)鍵。初寫短文。一切都準(zhǔn)備就緒,就可以動筆寫作了,在寫作的過程中我們要注意句子的準(zhǔn)確性、連貫性以及簡潔性。使用的詞語、短語及句型盡量用自己有把握的詞。同時還要注意使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞,使句子銜接自然。修改潤色。修改潤色是獲取高分的必要步驟。這一步我們除了檢查短文的各種錯誤外,還要檢查語法結(jié)構(gòu)是否合理,有無重復(fù)、啰嗦的語言,大小寫是否正確,格式是否正確,詞數(shù)是否符合要求等。7.A解析:I have recently done a survey about how a teenager can have a successful life.Most students believe it’s necessary to study hard. After all, study plays a key role in their life. They also agree they should respect their parents, who look after them every day. Besides, they’re ready to serve the society and in their opinion it’s really meaningful. What’s more, they think each teenager is supposed to make a good plan for future.From my point of view, we need to ma