【文章內(nèi)容簡介】 【點(diǎn)睛】本文在寫作中使用了很多固定句式，如：The old woman fell to the ground and could not move. I saw this situation and immediately went over to help the old man lift up。所以在學(xué)習(xí)中，我們應(yīng)注意總結(jié),牢記一些固定句式及短語,寫作時就可以適當(dāng)引用,使文章的表達(dá)更有邏輯性,更富有條理.9．（天津中考模擬）書面表達(dá)校園安全問題越來越受到重視，為了確保學(xué)生的安全，學(xué)校制訂了一些規(guī)章制度。請根據(jù)提示內(nèi)容，以“School safety”為題寫一篇100詞左右的英語短文。提示：1. 遵守校規(guī)，按時到校、離校；2. 不接受陌生人的物品；3. 結(jié)伴同行，天黑前到家；4. 遇到麻煩及時告知家長和老師。School safety_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】School safetyMore and more people pay special attention to the school safety nowadays. Here are some rules to keep us safe.First, as students, we should follow the school rules, such as not being late for school and leaving school early. Second, we shouldn’t go with strangers and we shouldn’t accept things from strangers. Third, it’s better for us to have partners on the way home and to school and we must get home before dark. Fourth, if we are in trouble, don’t forget to tell our parents or teachers as soon as possible.I think these rules are good for us. We must obey them.【解析】【詳解】這是一篇話題作文，根據(jù)材料中的相關(guān)信息介紹一下校園安全。所提供的材料中列舉了為了確保學(xué)生的安全，學(xué)校制訂了一些規(guī)章制度。主要從1. 遵守校規(guī)，按時到校、離校；2. 不接受陌生人的物品；3. 結(jié)伴同行，天黑前到家；4. 遇到麻煩及時告知家長和老師。這四個方面去介紹。時態(tài)為一般現(xiàn)在時，人稱為第一人稱。本文是提建議，因此用shouldn’t或should來寫。注意作文中必須包含材料上的所有信息，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。寫作時，避免使用漢語式的英語，盡量使用我們熟悉的句子或短語。語法要正確，表達(dá)要符合英語習(xí)慣，注意時態(tài)、時間狀語的搭配及主謂一致問題。寫作中適當(dāng)使用連詞，注意上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關(guān)系，表達(dá)具有條理性?！靖叻志湫鸵弧縎econd, we shouldn’t go with strangers and we shouldn’t accept things from strangers. 第二，我們不應(yīng)該和陌生人一起去，也不應(yīng)該接受陌生人的東西。本句話是由and連接的并列句。【高分句型二】I think these rules are good for us. 我認(rèn)為這些規(guī)則對我們有好處。句子these rules are good for 。10．（長沙市開福區(qū)青竹湖湘一外國語學(xué)校中考模擬）書面表達(dá)健康的生活習(xí)慣是非常重要的。你認(rèn)為健康的生活習(xí)慣應(yīng)該是怎樣的呢？請根據(jù)以下的信息提示，寫一篇短文。內(nèi)容：健康飲食；早睡早起，不熬夜；參加運(yùn)動，強(qiáng)身健體。要求：必須包括所有要點(diǎn)，可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；80詞左右；文中不得出現(xiàn)你的真實(shí)姓名、學(xué)校名和地名。___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Healthy habitI think healthy habits are important for us. As we all know, healthy life habits will bring us good health. How can we develop healthy habit?First of all, we must keep a balanced diet. Eating too much or too little, or choosing wrong food may cause many illness. Moreover, we should take exercise every day. We can walk to school instead of taking a bus. Doing sports for an hour every day is also a way to keep us strong. Last but not least, we’d better go to bed early and get up early. The body needs enough sleep to work well. Children at our age should have at least eight hours’ sleep every night.As long as we have good healthy habits, it will be easy for us to keep healthy and enjoy the health.【解析】【詳解】本文屬于話題作文，闡述你認(rèn)為健康的生活習(xí)慣是什么樣的。根據(jù)要表達(dá)的內(nèi)容確定并準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯，可適當(dāng)增加內(nèi)容。亮點(diǎn)說明：這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，很好的完成了試題規(guī)定的任務(wù)，語言表達(dá)符合英語習(xí)慣，準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時態(tài)、主謂一致，特別使用一些亮點(diǎn)詞句，如as we know, develop healthy habit, keep a balanced diet, instead of, had better do, at least, as long as, it is adj for sb to do, first of all, moreover以及l(fā)ast but not least。增強(qiáng)邏輯關(guān)系，增加上下文意思連貫，用詞準(zhǔn)確，句子通順，行文連貫?！军c(diǎn)睛】寫作時可以從以下幾個方面做起：認(rèn)真審題。審好題是寫好書面表達(dá)的關(guān)鍵。審題時要注意試題的要求，抓住要點(diǎn)，詞數(shù)符合要求。構(gòu)思提綱。有了提綱，我們就可以根據(jù)提綱和主題確定相關(guān)的寫作材料。通常書面表達(dá)給出的話題是開放的，而具體的內(nèi)容要求學(xué)生自己發(fā)揮，因此選擇恰當(dāng)?shù)乃夭囊彩鞘苟涛闹行耐怀?、明確的關(guān)鍵。初寫短文。一切都準(zhǔn)備就緒，就可以動筆寫作了，在寫作的過程中我們要注意句子的準(zhǔn)確性、連貫性以及簡潔性。使用的詞語、短語及句型盡量用自己有把握的詞。同時還要注意使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞，使句子銜接自然。修改潤色。修改潤色是獲取高分的必要步驟。這一步我們除了檢查短文的各種錯誤外，還要檢查語法結(jié)構(gòu)是否合理，有無重復(fù)、啰嗦的語言，大小寫是否正確，格式是否正確，詞數(shù)是否符合要求等。11．（山東中考模擬）書面表達(dá)（湖南衡陽）榮光學(xué)校九年級（2）班就“環(huán)境問題”召開了一次班會，并且以“Our Environment in Ten Years: for Better or Worse?”為題進(jìn)行了一次討論。許多同學(xué)對未來表示樂觀，但也有些同學(xué)對未來有些擔(dān)心。請根據(jù)表格中的內(nèi)容提示，用英語寫一篇短文。樂觀者的觀點(diǎn)。擔(dān)心者的觀點(diǎn)。你的觀點(diǎn)及你的打算學(xué)生自擬（至少兩點(diǎn)）提示：。、語句通順、連貫，詞數(shù)不少于80.參考詞匯：optimistic government 　　take measures to采取措施　private Our Environment in Ten Years: for Better or Worse?Many students are optimistic about our environment in ten years. 【答案】Our Environment in Ten Years: for Better or Worse?Many students are optimistic（樂觀的）about tour environment in ten years．In fact，they think that more and more people will take part in the environmental protection and our government will take more measures to improve our environment．As a result, our world will be more beautiful and we will have better lives.However，other students are worried about the future．They say a number of trees will be cut down and there will be more and more private cars.．Therefore，we will have even more environmental problems and live in a world with less energy available．But in my opinion，I think we will find ways to solve our problems and everyone will live more happily．【解析】這篇作文要求我們就榮光中學(xué)九年級2班的同學(xué)們對環(huán)境問題所召開的一次班會情況進(jìn)行介紹。這個班會的主題是Our Environment in Ten Years: for Better or Worse?，對于未來的環(huán)境，很多同學(xué)吃樂觀的態(tài)度，而其他同學(xué)感到很擔(dān)心。題目中用表格的形式給我們呈現(xiàn)了這些內(nèi)容，我們需要用