【文章內(nèi)容簡(jiǎn)介】 school. I was very sad. Luckily, we kept in touch with each other through s. Besides, I was not good at Chinese writing. I hope I can go to a dream school and make more new friends. I also wish I can do better in all subjects when I am in high school and can go to a good college.【解析】【詳解】這篇作文要求我們以My Life At School為題，寫一篇發(fā)言稿。題目中利用表格的形式，展示了文章的具體內(nèi)容，學(xué)生們可以此為提綱進(jìn)行寫作。審題可知，這篇短文應(yīng)主要使用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)和一般過去時(shí)，注意根據(jù)表達(dá)需要使用正確時(shí)態(tài)，并注意謂語動(dòng)詞的正確形式。內(nèi)容應(yīng)主要包括三部分：首先是初中三年里的美好回憶；然后是不開心的事情；最后展望自己未來的高中生活。表格中有非常具體的提示，但不能逐詞翻譯表格中的短語，應(yīng)把他們變成自己的話，并用英語表達(dá)出來。寫作時(shí)應(yīng)注意：文章中應(yīng)包括表格中的所有信息，不能遺漏要點(diǎn)；第三部分的內(nèi)容中還需要自己發(fā)揮想象力進(jìn)行補(bǔ)充，注意應(yīng)合情合理，與上文很好地銜接。另外注意句式結(jié)構(gòu)要符合英語的表達(dá)習(xí)慣，用完整的句子表達(dá)。句式結(jié)構(gòu)可以簡(jiǎn)單句為基礎(chǔ)，穿插并列句、復(fù)合句以及其他復(fù)雜句式的使用，提升作文檔次。同時(shí)語句之間使用適當(dāng)?shù)倪B接成分，使文意連貫、自然。【點(diǎn)睛】這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，短文作者根據(jù)題目要求，回憶了自己的初中生活，并展望了未來。短文有以下幾個(gè)特點(diǎn)：首先文章內(nèi)容完整，結(jié)構(gòu)清晰。短文分三段，第一段基本是題目中給出的開頭，作者使用一句話引出下文；第二段是主體，介紹了過去美好的回憶以及不開心的事情；最后一段對(duì)未來進(jìn)行了展望。各部分內(nèi)容安排合理，有層次、有條理。其次短文中使用了正確的時(shí)態(tài)和人稱，語法規(guī)范，用詞準(zhǔn)確，注意了動(dòng)詞正確形式的變化。句式結(jié)構(gòu)完整，符合英語的表達(dá)習(xí)慣。語言準(zhǔn)確、得體，表達(dá)自然、流暢。短文中使用了豐富的句型和短語，如The teachers are very friendly and they are ready to help me. The most unforgettable thing is that I got a chance of being an exchange students and spent two months in , we kept in touch with each other through s. Besides, I was not good at Chinese also wish I can do better in all subjects when I am in high school and can go to a good 。3．初中生活即將結(jié)束，學(xué)校英語俱樂部特邀你寫一篇英語短文,給七年級(jí)新生的學(xué)習(xí)生活提幾點(diǎn)建議。內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)如下：1. 初中科目更多，好的學(xué)習(xí)方法很重要；2. 鍛煉身體，保持健康；3. 參加社團(tuán)活動(dòng)，使學(xué)校生活豐富；4. 多讀書，多交朋友；5. 補(bǔ)充一兩點(diǎn)個(gè)人想法。注意：1. 文中不得透露個(gè)人姓名和學(xué)校名稱；2. 詞數(shù)：60－80；3. 內(nèi)容連貫，不要逐條翻譯；4. 短文的開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。參考詞匯：method n. 方法　club n．社團(tuán)　colorful Wele to our school!________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】I will graduate from my school. Therefore I’d like to share something with you. Firstly,because of many subjects in middle school, it is important for you to have your own study methods. In order to be better at study, you must do more exercise to keep healthy. Secondly, you can join in some club activities to make school life more colorful in your spare time. In other words, please keep balance between school life and study. In addition, it is a good choice to make more friends and read more books. At last, if you have problems in school life, please talk with your teachers or parents. They are always there waiting for you. I hope you will have a wonderful school life.【解析】試題分析：這是一篇給材料作文，自己即將畢業(yè)，給七年級(jí)新生的學(xué)習(xí)生活提幾點(diǎn)建議。結(jié)合所給的材料，可知本文主要考查一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)和一般將來時(shí)，以第一人稱為主，要注意主謂一致，所寫的句子要符合英語語法，用自己熟悉的單詞和句式來寫。寫作亮點(diǎn)：本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，開頭兩句很自然地過渡到正文上來。用了短語和句式，如：graduate from畢業(yè)于；share sth with sb和某人分享某事；wait for等候等，用來一些過渡詞或短語，如：Firstly, Secondly,In other words, At last等，上下文銜接很自然。4．臨近畢業(yè)，學(xué)校在學(xué)習(xí)小組內(nèi)開展了初中階段自評(píng)和組評(píng)活動(dòng)，假設(shè)你是 Moonlight 小組 的組長(zhǎng)，請(qǐng)根據(jù)下面表格中的信息和提示，為你的組員 Tommy 進(jìn)行綜合素質(zhì)的評(píng)價(jià)，寫一 份素質(zhì)報(bào)告．NameTommyCharacteristics聰明、大方（各舉一例）Hobbies喜歡看書，認(rèn)為看書有很多好處（請(qǐng)列舉2個(gè)好處）Honour他在家?guī)椭黾覄?wù)。在學(xué)校和同學(xué)相處融洽。上學(xué)途中遵守交通規(guī)則（舉一例）。今年，學(xué)校授予了他優(yōu)秀學(xué)生獎(jiǎng)（Award for Best Student）Problems面臨考試，遭受壓力痛苦，他沒有充足的睡眠．Your suggestions（根據(jù)實(shí)際情況提2點(diǎn)建議）…要求：表達(dá)清楚、語法正確、上下文連貫；要點(diǎn)必須包括所有相關(guān)信息，并作適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；詞數(shù)：100 詞左右；不得使用真實(shí)姓名、校名和地名等Tommy is a member of my team called Moonlight.【答案】Tommy is a member of my team called Moonlight. He is clever and he is good at all his lessons. He is so generous that he shares everything with his likes reading because he thinks he can get much knowledge and learn more about the world by reading. And reading has a good effect on children’s growth. At home, he can help his parents do some housework. At school, he gets on well with his classmates. On the way to school, he obeys the traffic rules. He crosses the road when the light is green. Our school presented him with Award for Best Student this year. However, Tommy is stressed when the exam es. And he doesn’t have enough sleep. I think he should go over what he has learned before exams. It’s better for him to manage his time wisely so that he can have enough time to rest.【解析】這篇作文要求我們按照表格里的內(nèi)容介紹一下Tommy的情況，為Tommy寫一篇綜合素質(zhì)的評(píng)價(jià)報(bào)告。在表格中有非常詳細(xì)的關(guān)于Tommy各方面的內(nèi)容，我們需要用正確的英語把這些內(nèi)容有條理的表達(dá)出來。表格中涉及的內(nèi)容較多，寫作時(shí)要注意表達(dá)的條理性。這篇作文應(yīng)主要使用第三人稱來寫。在最后要給Tommy提一些建議，這一部分應(yīng)該用第一人稱。同時(shí)注意表達(dá)的準(zhǔn)確性，尤其是表格中的第五項(xiàng)和第六項(xiàng)內(nèi)容?！玖咙c(diǎn)說明】這是一篇比較優(yōu)秀的范文。這篇作文內(nèi)容完整，包含了表格中的所有內(nèi)容，沒有遺漏要點(diǎn)。表達(dá)準(zhǔn)確，注意了被動(dòng)形式的使用，如He was rewarded by our scho