【文章內(nèi)容簡介】 to keep I do much better in running and I39。m very proud of feel more confident and I39。m ready for any challenges in the future.【解析】【分析】本篇是材料作文，根據(jù)所給提示寫一篇自己在初中生活中堅持做的事；文中寫明自己是怎么做的并談?wù)勛约旱母惺??！驹斀狻?，用第一人稱寫初中生活中自己堅持做的一件事，根據(jù)提示，描寫“What did you do?用一般過去時，描寫How do you feel?用一般現(xiàn)在時。書寫時要緊扣主題，文句通順?！芭懿健保牟糠衷敿毜孛鑼懥俗约浩鸪跖懿娇偸遣患案?，通過克服困難、不懈地努力，堅持跑步，到現(xiàn)在比以前會跑；結(jié)尾談了這件事對自己的影響；文章結(jié)構(gòu)清晰，前后呼應(yīng)。比如：固定搭配、固定句型It39。s +adj+ for us +to do sth、love doing sth、keep doing 、be good at、 catch up with、be proud of；不定式in order to；try my best to；狀語從句so…that …；比較級do much better in …、feel more confident等；短語多彩、文句表達多樣。 3． 亞洲文明對話大會近期在北京召開，你的印度朋友Danny收看了大會相關(guān)報道，對華夏文明產(chǎn)生了濃厚的興趣，來信向你了解中國文化。假設(shè)你是李華，請根據(jù)以下內(nèi)容提示用英語寫一封回信給Danny。要點內(nèi)容歷史文化歷史悠久，文化各異；傳統(tǒng)節(jié)日，多彩習(xí)俗（舉一例）文明行為相互尊重，以禮相待；互學(xué)共鑒，共同成長（或自擬）身邊文明校園文明（自擬一點）注意：1. 詞數(shù)90詞左右，開頭和結(jié)尾已經(jīng)寫好，不計入總詞數(shù)。2. 回復(fù)必須包括所以要點，可是當(dāng)發(fā)揮，是短文連貫，通順。3. 文中不得提及真實的人名、校名等相關(guān)信息。 參考詞匯: civilized 文明的Dear Danny,I’m glad to receive your letter. Since you are interested in civilization(文明) of China, I would like to share something with you. I hope you can e to China someday to experience the ancient culture of China. Look forward to hear from you soon.All the best,Li Hua【答案】Dear Danny,I’m glad to receive your letter. Since you are interested in civilization(文明) of China, I would like to share something with you.Chinese civilization is one of the oldest and longest civilizations in the world. China is a country of 56 nationalities. Different nations have difficult cultures. In my country, we have many traditional festivals, such as, the Spring Festival, MidAutumn Festival and the Dragon Boat Festival . They are also called “three major Chinese holidays” in China. Here are the customs of eating Zongzi and racing dragonboat on the Dragon Boat Festival.China is a nation of etiquette (禮儀). Chinese people can respect, trust and help each other. We all learn and grow together. Everyone in my school should protect the whole public environment. Climbing the trees, picking the flowers and throwing garbage at random are not allowed there.I hope you can e to China someday to experience the ancient culture of China. Look forward to hearing from you soon.All the best.Li Hua【解析】【分析】本文要求給你的印度朋友Danny寫一篇關(guān)于華夏文明的回信?！驹斀狻课恼滦枰榻B下中國的文化。表格中列舉了三個要點，寫作時注意不要漏寫。平時注意多多積累句型、短語。細心檢查避免疏漏。以圖表展示的作文要以“讀”為主，首先要認真讀懂圖表中的要求，對所給信息加以分析、推斷、篩選、概括，去粗取精；在寫作時目的要明確，要注意內(nèi)容的準(zhǔn)確性和嚴肅性?！军c睛】寫作中注意語義通順，符合邏輯關(guān)系，上下文之間可以適當(dāng)使用連接詞。如but, so, then等。可以適當(dāng)使用高分句子。本篇文章寫的好的句子有：Chinese civilization is one of the oldest and longest civilizations in the world．中華文明是世界上最古老、最悠久的文明之一。China is a nation of etiquette(禮儀)，中國是一個禮儀之邦。4．書面表達親子關(guān)系是目前廣受關(guān)注的話題。假設(shè)你是張華，你正在以“如何與父母更好地相處” 為題進行英語自主課程研究。通過搜集資料，你查找到中國青少年研究中心(CYCRC)近日就中美兩國親子關(guān)系進行了問卷調(diào)查，結(jié)果如下表。請你根據(jù)下表選取并整合你認為有用的信息，結(jié)合你的實際經(jīng)歷以How to get along well with parents為題寫一篇感想。ChinaUSKids often talk to their parents%89%Kids think their parents understand them61%%Kids have different ideas from their parents%76%Kids have different ideas from their parents mostly because of…Schoolwork (%)Pocket money (20%)注意事項：；、意思連貫、符合情境；，首尾已經(jīng)在答題卡上給出，不計入總詞數(shù)；4. 內(nèi)容必須寫在答題卡指定的位置?！敬鸢浮縃ow to get along well with parentsMore and more people begin to focus on the parentchild relationship. Here’s my understanding of how to get along well with our parents.CYCRC did a survey in the United States and China. The results showed that % of Chinese children often talk to their parents, far fewer than the Americans. More understanding lies in American parentchild relationship. I think we should not only talk often but open our heart. For example, when I got low marks in exams, I always talked to my parents. They helped me find the reason and encouraged me. I also shared my secrets and worries with them. A good relationship requires efforts from both parents and children. As children, getting well with parents is of great importance to us. We should find a proper way to create a healthy parentchild relationship.【解析】【詳解】這篇作文要求我們以How to get along well with parents為題，就中國青少年研究中心(CYCRC)近日對中美兩國親子關(guān)系問卷調(diào)查的結(jié)果進行介紹，并結(jié)合自己的實際經(jīng)歷，發(fā)表自己的感謝。寫作前，應(yīng)仔細審題，觀察所給表格，弄清楚表格中每一項的內(nèi)容以及它的意義。然后結(jié)合自己的實際情況，對如何與父母良好相處，發(fā)表自己的看法。短文應(yīng)主要以一般現(xiàn)在時為主，第一人稱和第三人稱來敘述。寫作時應(yīng)注意：內(nèi)容應(yīng)密切結(jié)合表格中所給的數(shù)據(jù)以及自己的實際經(jīng)歷，有敘述，有議論。合理安排各部分內(nèi)容之間的關(guān)系，注意分清結(jié)構(gòu)，表達要有條理。其次應(yīng)注意英語表達習(xí)慣和漢語的不同，不能根據(jù)漢語式思維逐詞翻譯，應(yīng)從句式的整體結(jié)構(gòu)出發(fā)，使用適當(dāng)?shù)膯卧~、短語和句型表達。句式結(jié)構(gòu)要完整，可以簡單句為基礎(chǔ)，穿插使用并列句和復(fù)合句以及其他復(fù)雜句式。同時注意語句之間使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B接成分，使行文連貫、自然?！军c睛】這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，短文作者根據(jù)題目要求，介紹了中美兩國親子關(guān)系的對比，并結(jié)合自己的實際對如何與父母相處，發(fā)表了個人看法。短文有以下幾個特點：首先文章內(nèi)容完整，符合題目要求。短文分三段：第一段引出文章的話題parentchild relationship，點明文章主旨Here’s my understanding of how to get along well with our parents；第二段對調(diào)查結(jié)果的第一項內(nèi)容進行了介紹，并結(jié)合自己的經(jīng)歷，講述了如何與父母相處。這是文章的主體部分，敘述非常詳細，內(nèi)容也很充實，所占篇幅也最大；最后一段作者重申主題，點明了良好親子關(guān)系的重要性。其次短文使用了正確的時態(tài)和人稱，語法規(guī)范，用詞準(zhǔn)確，語句通順。句式結(jié)構(gòu)完整，以簡單句為主，也使用了賓語從句