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in our daily life. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Let’s start reading now!【答案】Reading is very important in our daily life. First of all,reading will/can help us get knowledge from all kinds of books.It can also help to open up a whole new world to us.Second,reading will/can make us clever and happy.It is good for our study and it can help us grow up.Third,reading can help us think more and further and make our life more colourful. However,there is usually so much homework for us to do that we don39。t have enough time for reading.Moreover,some of us don39。t have a good habit of reading but often spend too much time watching TV and searching the Internet. In my opinion,our school can have aReading Weekonce a term.Teachers should encourage students to borrow books from the library.We must spend more time reading some useful books.As a result,we can have a better future. Let39。s start reading now!【解析】亮點說明:這篇習作的層次清晰,內(nèi)容飽滿,表達流暢。文中使用了非常好的短語,例如first of all,all kinds of books,help to do,be good for,more and further,so much,spend too much time doing,search the Internet,in my opinion,as a result等。同時First of all,/ Second,/ Third等時間副詞和However/ Moreover / As a result等結(jié)構(gòu)副詞的運用,既使文章的思路清晰、層次分明,還豐富了習作內(nèi)容,使表達多樣,是本文的最大亮點。點睛:書面表達題既不是漢譯英,也不是可任意發(fā)揮的作文。它要求將所規(guī)定的材料內(nèi)容經(jīng)整理后展開思維,考查運用所學英語知識準確表達意思的能力。所以,考生不能遺漏要點,要盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞、短語和句式,盡可能使用高級詞匯和較復雜的句式結(jié)構(gòu)以便得到較高的分數(shù)。6.書面表達假如你是華,你的英國筆友對中國文化很感興趣,想到中國旅行感受中國文化。你想請他來你的家鄉(xiāng)一安徴一游,請你根據(jù)以下提示用英文給他寫一封電子郵件。1位置:中國東部,安做省南部: :春暖花開,秋季涼爽:山和古村落: :茶、黃梅戲提示詞:黃梅戲 Huangmei Opera注意:,使行文連貫。,不計入總詞數(shù)Dear DaveI know that you are interested in Chinese culture and Im glad you are planning a trip to China. Why not e to Anhui, my home town, to have fun?【答案】Dear Dave,I know you are interested in Chinese culture and I’m glad you are planning a trip to China. Why not e to Anhui, my hometown, to have some fun.Anhui Province lies in the east of China. The best time to e here is in autumn, because it’s really cool and you can just take some light coats. There are many famous places to see. For example, Mt. Huangshan, where you will see wonderful plants and special rocks. Besides, Anhui is also famous for ancient villages such as Xidi, Hongcun and so on. As a fan of Chinese culture, don’t forget to try green tea in Anhui which smells good and tastes better. What’s more, e and watch Huangmei Opera. It’s easy to understand and won’t let you down!Wele to Anhui! I’m looking forward to seeing you here!Yours, Li Hua【解析】【詳解】這篇作文要求我們以李華的身份給自己的筆友Dave寫信,邀請他來你的家鄉(xiāng)—安徽一游,題目中列出了文章的提綱,審題可知,短文應從以下幾個內(nèi)容敘述:首先介紹家鄉(xiāng)的位置;然后介紹來這里最好的時候;接下來是介紹家鄉(xiāng)的景點和文化,并給出建議。短文應使用一般現(xiàn)在時,注意謂語動詞的正確形式。寫作時應合理安排幾個內(nèi)容,分清主次,并注意上下文的連貫。另外,英語的表達習慣和漢語是不同的,因此寫作時不能按照漢語思維逐詞翻譯,應從句子的整體結(jié)構(gòu)出發(fā),寫完整的句子。如可以使用簡單句結(jié)構(gòu),易于掌握,不容易出錯。但為提升文章檔次,也應穿插一些并列句結(jié)構(gòu)或復合句,以及使用一些