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好 處男生女生皆可參加利于培養(yǎng)團隊精神考生自擬(至少1點)偶 像梅西,有足球天賦夢 想考生自擬(至少1點)注意:1. 詞數(shù)90左右。短文的開頭已為你寫好,不計入總詞數(shù);,不要逐詞翻譯,可適當發(fā)揮,使短文連貫、通順;、校名等相關信息。參考詞匯:梅西 MessiDear classmates,I’m very excited to hear that China will build 20,000 footballthemed schools by 2020. Thank you for your attention.【答案】Dear classmates,I’m very excited to hear that China will build 20,000 footballthemed schools by 2020.Football has a very long history.It is liked by people all over the world.The World Cup takes place every four years.Playing football has lots of advantages.First,both boys and girls can take part in it.Second,it helps develop team spirit.What’s more,playing football is good for our health.I’m a football fan.Messi is my hero.He has a gift for playing football.My dream is to bee a famous football player like Messi.I hope China will hold the World Cup some day.Thank you for your attention.【解析】【詳解】試題分析:本題要求按提綱的提示,介紹足球運動并談談自己的夢想。要求仔細閱讀有關提示,弄清試題提供的所有信息,明確本文主要從三個方面來寫:介紹足球運動及其好處;說說自己的偶像;談談自己的夢想。要依據(jù)提示情景或詞語,按照一定邏輯關系來寫。根據(jù)要表達的內(nèi)容確定句子的時態(tài)、語態(tài);語言表達要符合英語習慣。寫作亮點:本文語言精煉,像第二自然段的Football has a very long history. It is liked by people all over the world. The World Cup takes place every four years. it helps develop team spirit. What’s more, playing football is good for our health. 等等句子,簡潔,但是句意表達清楚;同時,本文用了被動語態(tài)、動名詞作主語、不定式作表語等等語法形式,使表達生動;用了first, second等使得短文層次清楚。6.假如你是李華,你們學校準備組織學生本周五去北京世園會參觀。你打算邀請外教 Peter參加。請用英語寫一封電子郵件,告訴他集合的時間和地點,在那里可以做什么,以及參觀時需要準備什么。提示詞語: school gate, nature, culture, food and drink提示問題: ●When and where are you going to meet?●What are you going to do there?●What do you advise Peter to prepare for the visit?Dear Pete,How is it going?I am writing to invite you to visit Beijing International Horticulture Exposition in I39。m looking forward to your early reply.Yours, Li Hua【答案】Dear Peter,How is it going?I am writing to invite you to visit Beijing International Horticulture Exposition. We will meet at the school gate at 7:00 . this Friday. Then we will go to Beijing International Horticulture Exposition together. We can do a lot of things there. We can not only enjoy the special and beautiful plants but also learn different cultures in various indoor or outdoor shows. We plan to stay there for a whole day. You39。d better wear a pair of fortable sports shoes and take some food and drinks with you.I39。m looking forward to your early reply.Yours, Li Hua【解析】【詳解】1. 題干解讀:這是一篇給材料作文,屬于應用文寫作。本文已經(jīng)給出了主要寫作要點,動筆前要先認真閱讀要點,寫作中,應注意描述的全面性,盡量將提示的內(nèi)容利用上;提示的問題就是寫作的基本方向,然后圍繞要點適當發(fā)揮即可。2. 例文點評:文章采取郵件格式,時態(tài)以一般將來時態(tài)為主。語言的表述應該符合語法的結構,語言準確,語意連貫,表達清楚,具有邏輯性。3. 高分亮點:短語:school gate;invite sb. to do;a lot of;plan to do。句型:not only…but also;You39。d better …;I39。m looking forward to…。7.4月23日是“世界讀書日”,你校英語俱樂部正在開展主題為“多讀書,讀好書”的活動。假如你是李華,請你寫一封倡議書,向全體同學發(fā)出號召。內(nèi)容包括:應該讀什么樣的書,以及讀書的意義。提示詞語:story, novel, knowledge, improve, important提示問題:● What kind of books should we read? ● Why do we read?Dear students, the World Reading Day is ing. So I’m here again to call on all of us to read more books and read good books. Li Hua【答案】例文