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ying football.My dream is to bee a famous football player like Messi.I hope China will hold the World Cup some day.Thank you for your attention.【解析】【詳解】試題分析:本題要求按提綱的提示,介紹足球運動并談?wù)勛约旱膲粝?。要求仔細閱讀有關(guān)提示,弄清試題提供的所有信息,明確本文主要從三個方面來寫:介紹足球運動及其好處;說說自己的偶像;談?wù)勛约旱膲粝?。要依?jù)提示情景或詞語,按照一定邏輯關(guān)系來寫。根據(jù)要表達的內(nèi)容確定句子的時態(tài)、語態(tài);語言表達要符合英語習(xí)慣。寫作亮點:本文語言精煉,像第二自然段的Football has a very long history. It is liked by people all over the world. The World Cup takes place every four years. it helps develop team spirit. What’s more, playing football is good for our health. 等等句子,簡潔,但是句意表達清楚;同時,本文用了被動語態(tài)、動名詞作主語、不定式作表語等等語法形式,使表達生動;用了first, second等使得短文層次清楚。5.環(huán)境保護人人有責, 如果我們每一個人都能珍愛美麗地球 保護自然資源,相信我們的家園會越來越美好。某英文網(wǎng)站正在開展以“Going Green”為主題的征文活動。假如你是李華,請用英語寫一篇短文投稿,談?wù)勎覀兠媾R的主要環(huán)境問題是什么,為改善環(huán)境我們能做什么,以及你的期望。提示詞語: pollution, protect, save, recycle, take action提示問題:● What are the main environmental problems we have?● What can we do in our daily life? ● What’s your wish?Now there are many environmental 【答案】例文Now there are many environmental problems. Such as air pollution, water pollution and so on.I believe that there are many things we can do in our daily life, we can save energy by go to school by bike or on foot. We can use less water by turning off the tap while we brush our teeth, and taking shorter showers. When we see litter on the ground, we must pick it up and put it into different bins. I hope everyone can take action. Although each one of us may only do a little, together we can make a big difference. Let’s work together to make a better place to live.【解析】【詳解】題干解讀:該題目屬于說明文寫作,寫作時要把我們面臨的主要環(huán)境問題是什么,為改善環(huán)境我們能做什么,以及你的期望全部包括。例文點評:例文采用的是三段式;用第一人稱來敘述為改善環(huán)境我們能做什么;時態(tài)采用的是一般現(xiàn)在時,描述建議時,描寫具體,條理清晰。高分亮點:短語:save energy;brush our teeth;put it into different bins;take action;make a big difference。句型:When we see litter on the ground, we must pick it up and put it into different bins;Although each one of us may only do a little, together we can make a big difference。【點睛】首先認真審題,看清題目中的要求和要點;然后根據(jù)提示內(nèi)容,列出寫作要點及每個要點中可能要用到的表達,例如save energy;brush our teeth;put it into different bins;take action;make a big difference。以及狀語從句等;然后緊扣要點,動筆寫作,在寫作過程中,要注意句與句、段與段之間的過渡,必要時可適當運用表示轉(zhuǎn)折、因果、并列、比較等關(guān)系的連詞,使文章過渡平穩(wěn),自然流暢;最后,要仔細檢查有無單詞拼寫錯誤、標點符號誤用等,還要檢查語法結(jié)構(gòu)是否合理,有無重復(fù)、啰嗦的語言,大小寫是否正確,詞數(shù)是否符合要求等。6.為了宣傳和弘揚中華優(yōu)秀傳統(tǒng)文化, 某雙語雜志將舉辦征文活動來介紹中國的經(jīng)典故事, “程門立雪(Stand in the snow to wait for Master Cheng respectfully)”是其中一個選題。請你根據(jù)下面的內(nèi)容提示, 用英語寫一篇短文參加此活動。內(nèi)容提示:1. 楊時去拜見老師程頤一老師在睡覺一楊時在雪地等一老師醒來發(fā)現(xiàn)楊時在門口2. 通過介紹這個故事, 發(fā)表你的看法或者觀點。要求:1. 可以適當增加細節(jié), 以使行文連貫:詞數(shù):100左右. 2. 不得在作文中出現(xiàn)學(xué)校的真實名稱、老師和同學(xué)的真實姓名?!敬鸢浮縇ong long ago, there was a man called Yangshi. Once he went to visit his teacher, Chengyi. Unfortunately, Mr. Cheng was sleeping in the room. He didn’t wake up the teacher. So he stood in front of the gate. At that moment, there were snowflakes flying over his head and it was very cold. But yangshi still stood in the snow until Mr. Cheng woke up. When the teacher woke up, the snow was very deep. Yangshi was like a snowman standing at the gate. Finally, the teacher was moved deeply.After reading the story, I think we should respect our teacher. We should study hard.【解析】【詳解】這是一篇材料作文,主要介紹中國的經(jīng)典故事, “程門立雪(Stand in the snow to wait for Master Cheng respectfully)”。目的是宣傳和弘揚中華優(yōu)秀傳統(tǒng)文化。時態(tài)為一般過去時,靈活運用動詞的過去式。作文要包含材料上的所有信息,通過介紹這個故事,發(fā)表看法或者觀點。寫作時,避免漢語式英語。注意固定搭配及主謂一致的問題,例如:There was/ were...注意上下文聯(lián)系緊密,符合邏輯關(guān)系,具有條理性。7.請根據(jù)表格內(nèi)Zhang Ying的一些表現(xiàn)的提示用英語寫一篇短文,把她介紹給你的外國朋友Mary。TimeGood habitsBad habitsIn the morningGet up earlyEat junk food for breakfastIn classAsk some questions