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rent opinions about it.Some people think that________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Nowadays, many middle school students are taking all kinds of afterschool classes at weekends or on holidays. There are two different opinions about it. Some people think that students can get better exam results and go to better senior high schools by taking extra classes. They also believe that students can avoid watching too much TV or playing puter games in this way. But others have a different opinion. They think that students need more time to rest. If they take too many classes, they might feel too stressed. That’s not good for their health. As for me, I don’t think taking extra classes is necessary. Learning hard in class is enough. We just need to go over our lessons after class. We can also teach ourselves as it is very important for us to have a lifelong learning ability.【解析】【分析】整體分析:這是一篇提綱話題作文。是一篇議論文,第一段要寫目前,許多中學(xué)生利用周末和節(jié)假日上課外補(bǔ)習(xí)班,對(duì)此人們有不同的看法。第二段要寫中學(xué)生利用周末和節(jié)假日上課外補(bǔ)習(xí)班贊同者的觀點(diǎn)。第三段要寫中學(xué)生利用周末和節(jié)假日上課外補(bǔ)習(xí)班反對(duì)者的觀點(diǎn)。第四段要表述作者自己的觀點(diǎn)?!驹斀狻浚纯从心男┮??哪些時(shí)態(tài)?人稱?,記敘文?說明文?議論文?看圖?還是應(yīng)用文?,單一還是混合。、短語(yǔ)、句型。,并運(yùn)用適當(dāng)?shù)木湫秃瓦^渡詞銜接。寫完后反復(fù)閱讀修改推敲潤(rùn)色,人稱、時(shí)態(tài)、單復(fù)數(shù)一致等。運(yùn)用自然過渡法和自然銜接法來是文章更為地道、通順、純正。用短語(yǔ)、句型:all kinds of ,Some others,As for me ,Some people think that They also believe thatIf they take too many classes。It is very important for us to have a lifelong learning ?!军c(diǎn)睛】這類作文的寫作方法要注意認(rèn)真審題,可以分四段寫:總體簡(jiǎn)單描述話題;贊成;反對(duì);你的看法。注意過渡性語(yǔ)言的使用。做到:要點(diǎn)要全,表達(dá)要清晰明確,使用短語(yǔ),句型要準(zhǔn)確,注意避免拼寫和語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤。5. 書面表達(dá)暑假即將來臨,對(duì)于如何安排孩子初中畢業(yè)后的第一個(gè)假期,家長(zhǎng)們和孩子自己有著各自的想法。根據(jù)下表提示,寫一篇英語(yǔ)短文,描述他們的不同看法,同時(shí)發(fā)表你自己對(duì)暑假安排的觀點(diǎn)。Parents39。 opinionsGet ready for high school. Do some housework…Kid39。s opinionsHave a good rest. Do some sightseeing…Your opinion…注意](1)表格中的觀點(diǎn)僅供參考,允許適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。(2)開頭已給出,不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。(3)文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名和校名等信息。(4)詞數(shù):不少于80。How will you spend the ing summer vacation? Parents and kids have their own opinions. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】How will you spend the ing summer vacation? Parents and kids have their own opinions.Some parents think kids should get ready for high school in the sum?mer so it39。s important to take summer courses. They also think kids can help do housework to learn some life skills. But the kids disagree. They think it39。s time to take a good rest. They need to hang out with their friends to go sightseeing.In my opinion we can have a talk with our parents. All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy. We need to relax ourselves after working so hard at school. It39。s good for us to do some sports.【解析】【詳解】這是一篇給材料作文,本文已經(jīng)給出了主要寫作要點(diǎn),動(dòng)筆前要先認(rèn)真閱讀要點(diǎn),然后圍繞要點(diǎn)適當(dāng)發(fā)揮.寫作中,應(yīng)注意描述的全面性,盡量將提示的內(nèi)容利用上;結(jié)合材料內(nèi)容,可知本文主要是第三人稱,一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)進(jìn)行敘述.語(yǔ)言的表述應(yīng)該符合語(yǔ)法的結(jié)構(gòu),造句應(yīng)該符合英語(yǔ)的表達(dá)習(xí)慣.適當(dāng)使用連詞,做到上下文聯(lián)系緊密,符合邏輯關(guān)系.【點(diǎn)睛】這篇短文用到了一些好的句型:They also think kids can help do housework to learn some life skills. But the kids disagree. They think it39。s time to take a good rest. They need to hang out with their friends to go 。6.