【文章內(nèi)容簡(jiǎn)介】 一部分，首先引出本文話(huà)題，并用Here’s the result from one ， 引出調(diào)查結(jié)果；第二部分分別闡述兩種不同觀點(diǎn)About 57 per cent students like to have swimming lessons at school. Because….。 However, 43 percent students are against this plan for some my opinion…。注意闡明觀點(diǎn)列舉理由時(shí)，要注意條理性，比如用到表示次序先后的詞first, second, then；或者句型It can…… It also can…..,besides…..等；本文內(nèi)容完整，寫(xiě)作條理清晰，語(yǔ)言表達(dá)準(zhǔn)確，是一篇不錯(cuò)的文章。4． 書(shū)面表達(dá)暑假即將來(lái)臨,對(duì)于如何安排孩子初中畢業(yè)后的第一個(gè)假期,家長(zhǎng)們和孩子自己有著各自的想法。根據(jù)下表提示,寫(xiě)一篇英語(yǔ)短文,描述他們的不同看法,同時(shí)發(fā)表你自己對(duì)暑假安排的觀點(diǎn)。Parents39。 opinionsGet ready for high school. Do some housework…Kid39。s opinionsHave a good rest. Do some sightseeing…Your opinion…注意](1)表格中的觀點(diǎn)僅供參考,允許適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。(2)開(kāi)頭已給出,不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。(3)文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名和校名等信息。(4)詞數(shù):不少于80。How will you spend the ing summer vacation? Parents and kids have their own opinions. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】How will you spend the ing summer vacation? Parents and kids have their own opinions.Some parents think kids should get ready for high school in the sum?mer so it39。s important to take summer courses. They also think kids can help do housework to learn some life skills. But the kids disagree. They think it39。s time to take a good rest. They need to hang out with their friends to go sightseeing.In my opinion we can have a talk with our parents. All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy. We need to relax ourselves after working so hard at school. It39。s good for us to do some sports.【解析】【詳解】這是一篇給材料作文，本文已經(jīng)給出了主要寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn)，動(dòng)筆前要先認(rèn)真閱讀要點(diǎn)，然后圍繞要點(diǎn)適當(dāng)發(fā)揮．寫(xiě)作中，應(yīng)注意描述的全面性，盡量將提示的內(nèi)容利用上；結(jié)合材料內(nèi)容，可知本文主要是第三人稱(chēng)，一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)進(jìn)行敘述．語(yǔ)言的表述應(yīng)該符合語(yǔ)法的結(jié)構(gòu)，造句應(yīng)該符合英語(yǔ)的表達(dá)習(xí)慣．適當(dāng)使用連詞，做到上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關(guān)系．【點(diǎn)睛】這篇短文用到了一些好的句型：They also think kids can help do housework to learn some life skills. But the kids disagree. They think it39。s time to take a good rest. They need to hang out with their friends to go 。5．旅行是學(xué)習(xí)的最好方式之一。請(qǐng)以“Travelling”為題，根據(jù)以下思維導(dǎo)圖的提示，寫(xiě)一篇短文，并發(fā)表你的看法。注意：1. 要點(diǎn)齊全，適當(dāng)發(fā)揮； 2. 從思維導(dǎo)圖Sayings部分，選擇恰當(dāng)?shù)母窈侠砝迷诙涛闹校?3. 詞數(shù)：100詞左右； 【答案】例文 Travelling is one of the best ways for learning. You may have read or heard about something, but you can never get an exact picture of it until you see it yourself. Seeing is believing. If you are a careful observer, you can learn much during your travel about the geography, biology, and history of the places you visit. You can also create great memories for your lifetime. Furthermore, while travelling, you can meet more people and make more friends. No matter how well educated you are, there is always a lot for you to learn through travelling.【解析】【詳解】這篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短語(yǔ)，為文章增色不少，如one of the best ways，learn much，an exact picture of，a careful observer，seeing is believing，no matter，a lot等。而非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞結(jié)構(gòu)Seeing is believing./ Furthermore, while travelling, you can meet more people and make more you are a careful observer, you can learn much during your travel about the geography, biology, and history of the places you visit./ No matter how well educated you are, there is always a lot for you to learn through ，豐富了短文內(nèi)容，使表達(dá)多樣化，是本文的亮點(diǎn)。在學(xué)習(xí)中注意總結(jié)牢記一些固定句式及短語(yǔ)，寫(xiě)作時(shí)就可以適當(dāng)引用，使文章表達(dá)更有邏輯性，也更富有條理。【點(diǎn)睛】書(shū)面表達(dá)題既不是漢譯英，也不是可任意發(fā)揮的作文。它要求將所規(guī)定的材料內(nèi)容經(jīng)整理后展開(kāi)思維，考查運(yùn)用所學(xué)英語(yǔ)知識(shí)準(zhǔn)確表達(dá)意思的能力。所以，考生不能遺漏要點(diǎn)，要盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞、短語(yǔ)和句式，盡可能使用高級(jí)詞匯和較復(fù)雜的句式結(jié)構(gòu)以便得到較高的分?jǐn)?shù)。6．假如你是王梅，有一個(gè)弟弟/妹妹一直是你的夢(mèng)想，去年你家里添了一個(gè)弟弟/妹妺，你非常開(kāi)心，請(qǐng)根據(jù)內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)，寫(xiě)一封電子郵件給你的筆友李蕾，和她分享你的快樂(lè)，告訴她你的變化。（ brother， sister任選其一）內(nèi)容要點(diǎn): （1）我一直想有個(gè)弟弟、妹妹；（2）去年我的夢(mèng)想實(shí)現(xiàn)了，有了弟弟/妺妹；（3）他/她非?？蓯?ài)，給我們帶來(lái)了歡樂(lè)，伴我成長(zhǎng)，不再孤單；（4）我學(xué)會(huì)了分享和照顧家人；（5）請(qǐng)補(bǔ)充幾點(diǎn)弟弟、妹妹到來(lái)后你的變化。參考詞匯：joy； grow up with 。on one’s initiative主動(dòng)地；help do the housework；study hard； set an example 樹(shù)立榜樣