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will not only get to know currents events both at home and abroad, but also enjoy seeing various world wonders. TV can also entertain us with exciting sports games, lovely wild animals and colorful foreign customs. It is through TV that we feel close to nature and human world. Television can also play an educational role in our daily life. Actually, TV provides people with almost all kinds of educational programs ranging from popular science to foreign language learning. Even housewives, farmers and selftaught students are able to learn what they need from different special programs. However, television can also be harmful. Quite a few parents plain that a number of TV programs about sex and violence have bad effects on their children. Moreover, people who watch TV too much can hardly work or study regularly and efficiently. Therefore, it is sometimes necessary to turn off TV for the good of everyone of us. 第一篇作文好幾次用到 many (a lot of), 給人印象模糊 。 求表達(dá)正確 : behavior information traffic equipment homework damage knowledge progress trouble experience work money advice 看看下面一段文字: A student who ignores regular study and idles away his time daydreaming will bee worried just before the examination. Then he frantically does all the reading in a day or two, or even stays up all night, trying to cramming hundreds of facts into his head. As a result, he es to the examination not only tired out but also confused by a mess of facts. 詞語用得具體 , 還有助于展開細(xì)節(jié) , 使作文不至于總是干巴巴的幾句話 。 此去離縣治還遠(yuǎn) 。 He deems it his duty to help his fellow classmates. 6. 我覺得他不會(huì)同意。 例 : Computer Nowadays puters are widely used in our society. We can see puters everywhere. Many people use puters in schools and colleges. We also use puters in offices, libraries, banks and at home. c. 沒啥可寫。 例 : (2) 作文與詞語 I’m a student of Hunan University. I’m studying in Tumu Department. I like my major very much. 要能正確和恰當(dāng)?shù)赜迷~語表達(dá)意思 , 首先必須意識(shí)到英語詞語和漢語詞語并非是一一對(duì)應(yīng)的 。 I have a feeling that we will win. 只有通過反復(fù)實(shí)踐 , 不斷體會(huì)詞語的含意和用法 , 掌握有關(guān)英語詞語運(yùn)用的一些基本要求 , 才能減少失誤 , 并逐步提高表達(dá)能力 。 英語中也不乏簡(jiǎn)單詞語用得很生動(dòng)的例子 。 第二篇?jiǎng)t以 various, colorful, all ki