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o enjoy seeing various world wonders. TV can also entertain us with exciting sports games, lovely wild animals and colorful foreign customs. It is through TV that we feel close to nature and human world. Television can also play an educational role in our daily life. Actually, TV provides people with almost all kinds of educational programs ranging from popular science to foreign language learning. Even housewives, farmers and selftaught students are able to learn what they need from different special programs. However, television can also be harmful. Quite a few parents plain that a number of TV programs about sex and violence have bad effects on their children. Moreover, people who watch TV too much can hardly work or study regularly and efficiently. Therefore, it is sometimes necessary to turn off TV for the good of everyone of us. 第一篇作文好幾次用到 many (a lot of), 給人印象模糊 。 求表達(dá)正確 : behavior information traffic equipment homework damage knowledge progress trouble experience work money advice 看看下面一段文字: A student who ignores regular study and idles away his time daydreaming will bee worried just before the examination. Then he frantically does all the reading in a day or two, or even stays up all night, trying to cramming hundreds of facts into his head. As a result, he es to the examination not only tired out but also confused by a mess of facts. 詞語用得具體 , 還有助于展開細(xì)節(jié) , 使作文不至于總是干巴巴的幾句話 。 The school was a red brick house with big windows. The front garden was a gravel square?!?大學(xué)英語 》 精讀課本第二冊(cè)有一篇題為 “ My First Job”的課文 。 ” 一個(gè) “ 挑 ” 字 , 使酒店前掛的旗子活活有了生命 。 此去離縣治還遠(yuǎn) 。 日常用語中 , 則更多使用另一類詞語: try know begin end speech suggestion go before desire ——金圣華 《 橋畔譯談 》 記得有一次在電視上看到這么一幕 (外國(guó)電視劇 ) 情景 , 母親頭發(fā)凌亂 , 兒子見狀 , 叫母親梳理一下 , 屏幕上打出的中文是: “ 可否請(qǐng)你略理云鬢 ? ” 詞語的運(yùn)用主要強(qiáng)凋 “ 得體 ” 。 對(duì)初練寫作的人而言 , 應(yīng)適當(dāng)了解正式文體與非正式文體的差異 , 尤其是詞語的區(qū)別 。 And for many times I figure that I’m the winner. 8. 我覺得我們會(huì)取勝。 He deems it his duty to help his fellow classmates. 6. 我覺得他不會(huì)同意。 3. 你覺得這個(gè)計(jì)劃怎么樣? What do you think of the plan? 4. 他覺得有人在注視著他們。例如 , 漢語的 “ 覺得 ” 可用英語的 feel、 find、think等詞語來表達(dá) , 但具體怎么