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2023年 1月 30日星期一 上午 10時(shí) 33分 4秒 10:33: 1最具挑戰(zhàn)性的挑戰(zhàn)莫過于提升自我。 2023年 1月 30日星期一 10時(shí) 33分 4秒 10:33:0430 January 2023 1空山新雨后,天氣晚來秋。 上午 10時(shí) 33分 4秒 上午 10時(shí) 33分 10:33: 沒有失敗,只有暫時(shí)停止成功!。 , January 30, 2023 雨中黃葉樹,燈下白頭人。如表示“突破性的” , 考生可以使用形容詞 groundbreaking, 或者名詞 breakthrough。 (2)Shooting developed into a sport only in the late 19th century. 合并: Version 1: Shooting was originated as a means of survival and developed into a sport in the late 19th century.(并列句 ) / Shooting, (which was)originated as a means of survival, didn’ t develop into a sport only until the late 19th century. /It was not until the late 19th century that shooting, (which was originated as a means of survival), developed into a sport.(定語從句 , not...until的句型 ) 句 2~句 3: (1) 1896:第一次成為奧運(yùn)項(xiàng)目 (1) Shooting became an Olympic event officially in 1896. (2) 1904:中斷 。本題目里對奧運(yùn)射擊的項(xiàng)目的陳述 , 是按照時(shí)間順序排列 , 因此在信息點(diǎn)的劃分這步相對容易。 4. What is most amazing is that you can order it to do things like sending messages with your , 你可以利用聲音命令它發(fā)出信息。 5. Students are encouraged to do a lot of related reading, which provides us with a platform for 相關(guān)的讀物 , 提供他們一個(gè)發(fā)展的平臺。射擊的背景和現(xiàn)狀分別是第一句和第五句 , 射擊的發(fā)展中 18961932年的變化可以用兩句話表述 , 1968年婦女第一次獲得參加奧運(yùn)會的權(quán)利可以放在第四句描述。 (3)1928:中斷 (23) Shooting was suspended in 1904 and 1928. (4) 1932:重回奧運(yùn)會 (4) It returned to the Games in 1932. 合并: Shooting became an Olympic event officially in 1896, but it was suspended in 1904 and 1928. It didn’ t return to the Games until 1932. /Shooting became an Olympic event officially in 1896. Then, it was suspended in 1904 and 1928 but finally returned to the Games in 1932. [參考范文 ] Shooting, originated as a means of survival, developed into a sport only in the late 19th century. The sport first appeared in 1896, but none were contested during the 1904 and 1928 Games. The sport returned to the Olympics in 1932. Women were first allowed to pete in the Olympic shooting in 1968. The sport has grown steadily from just three shooting events at the 1896 Olympic Games to 17 today. 4. 連句成文。 表示外形與iphone 3相似的時(shí)候 , 很多考生可以考慮到 be similar to iphone 3 in appearance, 但范文中使用了 retain almost all of the same design features as這個(gè)短語,使文章的語言更加高級和生動。 10:33:0410:33:0410:33