【正文】 美國(guó)抗癌協(xié)會(huì)(ACS)決定，每當(dāng)Amy收到一封慰問(wèn)信，就給她增加3美分的治療款。假如你是新華中學(xué)的學(xué)生李華，請(qǐng)你用英文給Amy寫(xiě)一封慰問(wèn)信，主要內(nèi)容包括：自我介紹得知的情況表示鼓勵(lì)打算為她做什么祝她早日康復(fù)注意：。Dear Amy，I’m Li Hua from Xinhua Middle School of ’m sorry to hear that you got the lung cancer which brought you great you should realize that you are young and have a promising great , stand up and fight against the disease!I’m sure you will is reported that the America anticancer association will donate three cents upon every fort letter you I will tell your situation to all my friends and ask them to write to that way, you will get enough money for you to be you can be well ，Li Hua[名師點(diǎn)評(píng)]本文依照要求，涵蓋了所有要點(diǎn)。文章使用了高中常見(jiàn)的句式，如I’m sorry to hear that..., It is reported that...等，都比較好。作者對(duì)定語(yǔ)從句的使用恰到好處地修飾了文章，行文自然而通順，值得學(xué)習(xí)。積累卡片 m sorry to hear that you got the lung cancer which brings you great ，給你帶來(lái)了巨大的痛苦。好處：which引導(dǎo)限制性定語(yǔ)從句。, stand up and fight against the disease!因此，堅(jiān)強(qiáng)地與疾病做斗爭(zhēng)吧!好處：擲地有聲，語(yǔ)言準(zhǔn)確。,句式準(zhǔn)確【江蘇卷高考英語(yǔ)】【試題回放】 2007年4月29日上午10點(diǎn)到11點(diǎn)，全國(guó)億萬(wàn)學(xué)生陽(yáng)光體育活動(dòng)在各地大中小學(xué)校同時(shí)進(jìn)行，江蘇省1，100萬(wàn)學(xué)生積極參與了這項(xiàng)活動(dòng)。教育部倡導(dǎo)學(xué)生：u 每天鍛煉一小時(shí)u 健康工作五十年u 幸福生活一輩子請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以上提示，用英語(yǔ)準(zhǔn)備一份發(fā)言稿，向同學(xué)們講述一下陽(yáng)光體育活動(dòng)的有關(guān)情況，并就高三學(xué)生是否需要每天花一小時(shí)鍛煉，談?wù)勀愕目捶袄碛?。注意：發(fā)言稿應(yīng)包括以上所有信息，要有適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。詞數(shù)：120左右。發(fā)言稿的開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已經(jīng)寫(xiě)好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。參考詞匯：陽(yáng)光體育活動(dòng)——a national student sports program。教育部——the Ministry of EducationGood afternoon, everyone，The national student sports program, waged by the Ministry of Education and aimed at improving students health, was held from 10：.~11: April 29，2007 in many primary and middle schools all over 11 million students in Jiangsu province participated in this Ministry of Education advocates that we do exercises for one hour a day and can work healthily for 50 whole life will be very my opinion, we senior high school students should do exercises for one hour a day even though our spare time is is a basic condition for our we did not do exercises, we wouldn’t be able to get good study every one of you, join the program now!Thank you!【名師點(diǎn)評(píng)】本文的結(jié)構(gòu)十分明晰，同時(shí)句式使用得熟練而準(zhǔn)確。本文分為三段，前兩段敘述，后一段發(fā)表觀點(diǎn)，典型的作文結(jié)構(gòu)。在句式使用上，作者用法多樣，使用了獨(dú)立結(jié)構(gòu)和虛擬語(yǔ)氣，十分出彩。復(fù)雜的句式是本文的特點(diǎn)之一。積累卡片 Ministry of Education advocates that we do exercises for one hour a day and can work healthily for 50 ，能夠健康地活50年。評(píng)析：advocate，其后接虛擬語(yǔ)氣，可以省略情態(tài)動(dòng)詞。 we did not do exercises, we wouldn’t be able to get good study ，我們的學(xué)習(xí)成績(jī)就不會(huì)很好。評(píng)析：虛擬語(yǔ)氣。第二篇：全國(guó)高考英語(yǔ)滿(mǎn)分作文賞析李老師滿(mǎn)分課堂 免費(fèi)答疑解題熱線 053186969606 ：1044738198 希望更多老師加入到公益教學(xué)中。表達(dá)地道【北京卷】【試題回放】李老師滿(mǎn)分課堂 免費(fèi)答疑解題熱線 053186969606 ：1044738198 希望更多老師加入到公益教學(xué)中【名師點(diǎn)評(píng)】這是一篇滿(mǎn)分作文。由于這篇作文的出現(xiàn)，導(dǎo)致了安徽省該年的英語(yǔ)作文分?jǐn)?shù)普遍偏低。仔細(xì)分析了這篇文章，寫(xiě)的的確是好，很地道的美式英語(yǔ)，一些詞語(yǔ)的大膽使用，讓人不得不猜測(cè)此人或者是家人可能有過(guò)國(guó)外生活的經(jīng)歷，否則這么地道標(biāo)準(zhǔn)的英語(yǔ)，可不是一朝一夕所能寫(xiě)出來(lái)的。比如說(shuō)：my cup of tea, apart from that, oral English, last but not least, celebrities, catchy和trendy的大膽運(yùn)用，list, can39。t wait to 簡(jiǎn)直是perfect!況且文章中沒(méi)有一個(gè)錯(cuò)誤，不管是書(shū)寫(xiě)還是語(yǔ)法。英語(yǔ)能夠?qū)W到這種程度，不可謂不讓人佩服。【北京卷】【試題回放】情景作文假設(shè)你是紅星中學(xué)高三一班的學(xué)生李華，為響應(yīng)綠化祖國(guó)的號(hào)召，你班四月十二日去郊區(qū)植樹(shù)，請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下四幅圖的先后順序，介紹植樹(shù)活動(dòng)的全過(guò)程，給某英文雜志的“綠色行動(dòng)”專(zhuān)欄寫(xiě)一篇以“Green Action in Our Class”為題的英文稿件。注意：詞數(shù)不少于60提示詞：郊區(qū) suburbsApril 12 is memorable because our class had a meaningful experience on that the morning, we bicycled to the suburbs to plant trees, talking and laughing all the arrival, we began to work were digging were carrying and planting young were getting the work done, we put up a board reminding people to protect the leaving we took some photos to record our green the lines of trees, we all had a sense of feel it’s our duty to protect and beautify our environment.【名師點(diǎn)評(píng)】本文是設(shè)計(jì)巧妙的提綱要點(diǎn)式作文，與環(huán)保結(jié)合，立意較好。文章思路清晰，要點(diǎn)連貫，在語(yǔ)言的表達(dá)上選詞新穎，同時(shí)運(yùn)用了分詞短語(yǔ)作狀語(yǔ)等較好的句式表達(dá)?！颈本┚怼俊驹囶}回放】開(kāi)放作文請(qǐng)根據(jù)下面提示，寫(xiě)一篇短文，詞數(shù)不少于50In your spoken English class, your teacher shows you the following are asked to describe the picture and explain how you understand an interesting picture!A western young man, sitting at a table, is ready to eat a bowl of is holding two forks the same way as we Chinese hold is trying so hard to pick up the noodles that he is sweating a first glance, I think it’s a bit funny, for we Chinese take for granted that chopsticks are the tools for eating man in the picture is trying to copy he is doing it the hard using one fork will do a better job, In my opinion, we don’t need to copy others’ ways of a simpler way of doing things may be a better way.【名師點(diǎn)評(píng)】本文是開(kāi)放性作文，要求考生把握好圖畫(huà)內(nèi)容，發(fā)散表達(dá)?？忌攸c(diǎn)要看出這個(gè)人是卷發(fā)高鼻的外國(guó)人，要體會(huì)到西式刀叉對(duì)中式食物的矛盾性。行文結(jié)構(gòu)十分明晰，同時(shí)句式使用得熟練而準(zhǔn)確?！救珖?guó)卷】【試題回放】假定你是李華，從小喜愛(ài)大熊貓(panda),一直通過(guò)有關(guān)網(wǎng)站(website)關(guān)注三年前在美國(guó)圣迭哥動(dòng)物園出生的大熊貓“蘇琳”和她的母親“白云”?，F(xiàn)在蘇琳即將三歲。請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下要點(diǎn)給動(dòng)物園工作人員寫(xiě)一封信：李老師滿(mǎn)分課堂 免費(fèi)答疑解題熱線 053186969606 ：1044738198 希望更多老師加入到公益教學(xué)中自我介紹。祝賀蘇琳生日。感謝工作人員。索取蘇琳三歲生日照。注意：詞數(shù)100左右?？梢赃m當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。開(kāi)頭語(yǔ)已為你寫(xiě)好。例文：Dear Sir/Madam，Greetings from China!I’m Li Hua, a student in ’ve been a panda lover since I was a three years ago I was delighted to learn that Baiyun gave birth to her daughter Sulin and I’ve been watching her grow on your website,.Now she’s going to be ’d like to wish her a happy birthday and to express my thanks to you for your hard work, because of which Sulin and her parents are living a happy and healthy life in the the way, could I have a photo of Sulin taken on her third birthday? Thank you very much in truly，Li Hua【名師點(diǎn)評(píng)】本文寫(xiě)作的內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)如下：。這封信格式正確，行文規(guī)范，描述有條不紊，稱(chēng)呼、正文中的開(kāi)頭及結(jié)尾、結(jié)束語(yǔ)均表達(dá)到位。文章行文活潑，感情真摯，語(yǔ)言表述準(zhǔn)確，洋溢著作者因大熊貓得到精心照顧而對(duì)美方人員的感激之情，以及希望自己愿望成真，得到照片的希冀之情。長(zhǎng)短句運(yùn)用合理，結(jié)合了簡(jiǎn)單句和復(fù)合句，流暢自然，不露痕跡，的確是一篇佳作。積累卡片英漢互譯 ，快樂(lè)的 birth to ，生育好句I’d like to wish her a happy birthday and to express my thanks to you for your hard work, because of which Sulin and her parents are living a happy and healthy life in the ，正是你們的努力工作讓蘇琳和它的父母在美國(guó)過(guò)著幸福和健康的生活?！救珖?guó)卷II】【試題回放】一家賓館新開(kāi)業(yè)，為吸引外國(guó)賓客，希望在互聯(lián)網(wǎng)上進(jìn)行宣傳。請(qǐng)你用英語(yǔ)為其 寫(xiě)一篇文字介紹。主要內(nèi)容包括：：距白山入口處500米。：?jiǎn)稳碎g(共20間)，100元/天。雙人間(共15間)，150元/天。熱水淋浴。：餐廳(中、西餐)，咖啡廳(茶、咖啡)。：全天免費(fèi)開(kāi)放。注意：，開(kāi)頭語(yǔ)已為你寫(xiě)好。，以使行文連貫。Wele to Baishan Mountain Hotel!Baishan Mountain Hotel is now open for meters far from the entrance of Baishan Mountain, it provides singleperson room, of which the price is RMB100 yuan per day and the number is 20, and 15 double person rooms, with a price of RMB 15