【正文】 ecause of which Sulin and her parents are living a happy and healthy life in the ，正是你們的努力工作讓蘇琳和它的父母在美國(guó)過(guò)著幸福和健康的生活。請(qǐng)你用英語(yǔ)為其寫一篇文字介紹。：?jiǎn)稳碎g(共20間)，100元/天。熱水淋浴。：全天免費(fèi)開放。以使行文連貫。本文最大的特點(diǎn)是應(yīng)用了很多比較復(fù)雜的句式，使文章比較出彩。which引導(dǎo)的非限制性定語(yǔ)從句的使用也很正確。積累卡片英漢互譯好詞 好句All these services can bring great convenience to you and arevery ，并且非常的愉快?！局貞c卷高考英語(yǔ)】【試題回放】據(jù)報(bào)道，7歲的美國(guó)女孩Amy Bruce得知自己身患肺癌(lung cancer)后處于極度的痛苦之中，美國(guó)抗癌協(xié)會(huì)(ACS)決定，每當(dāng)Amy收到一封慰問(wèn)信，就給她增加3美分的治療款。Dear Amy，I’m Li Hua from Xinhua Middle School of ’m sorry to hear that you got the lung cancer which brought you great you should realize that you are young and have a promising great , stand up and fight against the disease!I’m sure you will is reported that the America anticancer association will donate three cents upon every fort letter you I will tell your situation to all my friends and ask them to write to that way, you will get enough money for you to be you can be well ，Li Hua[名師點(diǎn)評(píng)]本文依照要求，涵蓋了所有要點(diǎn)。作者對(duì)定語(yǔ)從句的使用恰到好處地修飾了文章，行文自然而通順，值得學(xué)習(xí)。好處：which引導(dǎo)限制性定語(yǔ)從句。,句式準(zhǔn)確【江蘇卷高考英語(yǔ)】【試題回放】 2007年4月29日上午10點(diǎn)到11點(diǎn)，全國(guó)億萬(wàn)學(xué)生陽(yáng)光體育活動(dòng)在各地大中小學(xué)校同時(shí)進(jìn)行，江蘇省1，100萬(wàn)學(xué)生積極參與了這項(xiàng)活動(dòng)。注意：發(fā)言稿應(yīng)包括以上所有信息，要有適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。發(fā)言稿的開頭和結(jié)尾已經(jīng)寫好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。教育部——the Ministry of EducationGood afternoon, everyone，The national student sports program, waged by the Ministry of Education and aimed at improving students health, was held from 10：.~11: April 29，2007 in many primary and middle schools all over 11 million students in Jiangsu province participated in this Ministry of Education advocates that we do exercises for one hour a day and can work healthily for 50 whole life will be very my opinion, we senior high school students should do exercises for one hour a day even though our spare time is is a basic condition for our we did not do exercises, we wouldn’t be able to get good study every one of you, join the program now!Thank you!【名師點(diǎn)評(píng)】本文的結(jié)構(gòu)十分明晰，同時(shí)句式使用得熟練而準(zhǔn)確。在句式使用上，作者用法多樣，使用了獨(dú)立結(jié)構(gòu)和虛擬語(yǔ)氣，十分出彩。積累卡片 Ministry of Education advocates that we do exercises for one hour a day and can work healthily for 50 ，能夠健康地活50年。 we did not do exercises, we wouldn’t be able to get good study ，我們的學(xué)習(xí)成績(jī)就不會(huì)很好。第二篇：全國(guó)高考英語(yǔ)滿分作文賞析李老師滿分課堂 免費(fèi)答疑解題熱線 053186969606 ：1044738198 希望更多老師加入到公益教學(xué)中。由于這篇作文的出現(xiàn)，導(dǎo)致了安徽省該年的英語(yǔ)作文分?jǐn)?shù)普遍偏低。比如說(shuō)：my cup of tea, apart from that, oral English, last but not least, celebrities, catchy和trendy的大膽運(yùn)用，list, can39。英語(yǔ)能夠?qū)W到這種程度，不可謂不讓人佩服。注意：詞數(shù)不少于60提示詞：郊區(qū) suburbsApril 12 is memorable because our class had a meaningful experience on that the morning, we bicycled to the suburbs to plant trees, talking and laughing all the arrival, we began to work were digging were carrying and planting young were getting the work done, we put up a board reminding people to protect the leaving we took some photos to record our green the lines of trees, we all had a sense of feel it’s our duty to protect and beautify our environment.【名師點(diǎn)評(píng)】本文是設(shè)計(jì)巧妙的提綱要點(diǎn)式作文，與環(huán)保結(jié)合，立意較好?！颈本┚怼俊驹囶}回放】開放作文請(qǐng)根據(jù)下面提示，寫一篇短文，詞數(shù)不少于50In your spoken English class, your teacher shows you the following are asked to describe the picture and explain how you understand an interesting picture!A western young man, sitting at a table, is ready to eat a bowl of is holding two forks the same way as we Chinese hold is trying so hard to pick up the noodles that he is sweating a first glance, I think it’s a bit funny, for we Chinese take for granted that chopsticks are the tools for eating man in the picture is trying to copy he is doing it the hard using one fork will do a better job, In my opinion, we don’t need to copy others’ ways of a simpler way of doing things may be a better way.【名師點(diǎn)評(píng)】本文是開放性作文，要求考生把握好圖畫內(nèi)容，發(fā)散表達(dá)。行文結(jié)構(gòu)十分明晰，同時(shí)句式使用得熟練而準(zhǔn)確。現(xiàn)在蘇琳即將三歲。祝賀蘇琳生日。索取蘇琳三歲生日照?？梢赃m當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。例文：Dear Sir/Madam，Greetings from China!I’m Li Hua, a student in ’ve been a panda lover since I was a three years ago I was delighted to learn that Baiyun gave birth to her daughter Sulin and I’ve been watching her grow on your website,.Now she’s going to be ’d like to wish her a happy birthday and to express my thanks to you for your hard work, because of which Sulin and her parents are living a happy and healthy life in the the way, could I have a photo of Sulin taken on her third birthday? Thank you very much in truly，Li Hua【名師點(diǎn)評(píng)】本文寫作的內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)如下：。這封信格式正確，行文規(guī)范，描述有條不紊，稱呼、正文中的開頭及結(jié)尾、結(jié)束語(yǔ)均表達(dá)到位。長(zhǎng)短句運(yùn)用合理，結(jié)合了簡(jiǎn)單句和復(fù)合句，流暢自然，不露痕跡，的確是一篇佳作。【全國(guó)卷II】【試題回放】一家賓館新開業(yè)，為吸引外國(guó)賓客，希望在互聯(lián)網(wǎng)上進(jìn)行宣傳。主要內(nèi)容包括：：距白山入口處500米。雙人間(共15間)，150元/天。：餐廳(中、西餐)，咖啡廳(茶、咖啡)。注意：，開頭語(yǔ)已為你寫好。Wele to Baishan Mountain Hotel!Baishan Mountain Hotel is now open for meters far from the entrance of Baishan Mountain, it provides singleperson room, of which the price is RMB100 yuan per day and the number is 20, and 15 double person rooms, with a price of RMB 150 yuan per also provides hot water bath can enjoy both Chinese and western food in the restaurant and drink coffee and tea in the swimming pool is open for free the whole these services can bring great convenience to you and are very e to enjoy yourself!Wele to book rooms in Baishan 免費(fèi)答疑解題熱線 053186969606 ：1044738198 希望更多老師加入到公益教學(xué)中【名師點(diǎn)評(píng)】本文開門見山，首先點(diǎn)明了主旨。開頭使用了獨(dú)立結(jié)構(gòu)交代賓館位置?？偟貋?lái)說(shuō)，文章句式精煉，是篇不錯(cuò)的滿分作文。評(píng)析：bring great convenience，帶來(lái)便利。假如你是新華中學(xué)的學(xué)生李華，請(qǐng)你用英文給Amy寫一封慰問(wèn)信，主要內(nèi)容包括：自我介紹得知的情況表示鼓勵(lì)打算為她做什么祝她早日康復(fù)注意：。文章使用了高中常見的句式，如I’m sorry to hear that..., It is reported that...等，都比較好。積累卡片 m sorry to hear that you got the lung cancer which brings you great ，給你帶來(lái)了巨大的痛苦。, stand up and fight against the disease!因此，堅(jiān)強(qiáng)地與疾病做斗爭(zhēng)吧!李老師滿分課堂 免費(fèi)答疑解題熱線 053186969606 ：1044738198 希望更多老師加入到公益教學(xué)中好處：擲地有聲，語(yǔ)言準(zhǔn)確。教育部倡導(dǎo)學(xué)生：u 每天鍛煉一小時(shí)u 健康工作五十年u 幸福生活一輩子請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以上提示，用英語(yǔ)準(zhǔn)備一份發(fā)言稿，向同學(xué)們講述一下陽(yáng)光體育活動(dòng)的有關(guān)情況，并就高三學(xué)生是否需要每天花一小時(shí)鍛煉，談?wù)勀愕目捶袄碛?。詞數(shù)：120左右。參考詞匯：陽(yáng)光體育活動(dòng)——a national student sports program。本文分為三段，前兩段敘述，后一段發(fā)表觀點(diǎn)，典型的作文結(jié)構(gòu)。復(fù)雜的句式是本文的特點(diǎn)之一。評(píng)析：advocate，其后接虛擬語(yǔ)氣，可以省略情態(tài)動(dòng)詞。評(píng)析：虛擬語(yǔ)氣。Almost all people see that the grass is greener on the other never feel satisfied with what they’ve already 、上癮get into one’s blood說(shuō)來(lái)也怪，很多不好的事往往會(huì)使人上癮。I’m