【正文】 ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________How about you? I am looking forward to hearing from you. Yours Li Ming【答案】例文Hello!Dear Amy, thank you for caring.Now I am working hard for the senior high school entrance examination. I have got good results in most of my subjects, but I am not happy with myself. I think I must spend more time on my studies.My parents are really strict with me. However, they care for me as well. Once upon a time, I failed in my physics exam and felt stressed and sad. They had a close munication with me and helped me solve my problems and cheer up again.My teachers are also ready to help us. They hope that we can realize our dreams. They tell us to try our best and not to give up. Life is always full of ups and downs. It39。s important not to be afraid of any kind of difficulty. How about you? I am looking forward to hearing from you. Yours Li Ming【解析】【詳解】本文屬于材料作文，告訴艾米目前你在全力以赴為中考而學(xué)習(xí)，并與她交流一下目前的學(xué)習(xí)和生活情況。根據(jù)要表達(dá)的內(nèi)容確定并準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯，可適當(dāng)增加內(nèi)容。亮點說明：這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，很好的完成了試題規(guī)定的任務(wù)，語言表達(dá)符合英語習(xí)慣，準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時態(tài)、主謂一致，特別使用一些亮點詞句，如get good results, spend+時間+on sth, be strict with, however, care for, as well, once upon a time, help sb do, cheer up, be ready to, tell sb to do, try one’s best to do, be full of以及it is adj to do sth等，增強(qiáng)邏輯關(guān)系，增加上下文意思連貫，用詞準(zhǔn)確，句子通順，行文連貫。【點睛】寫作時可以從以下幾個方面做起：認(rèn)真審題。審好題是寫好書面表達(dá)的關(guān)鍵。審題時要注意試題的要求，抓住要點，詞數(shù)符合要求。構(gòu)思提綱。有了提綱，我們就可以根據(jù)提綱和主題確定相關(guān)的寫作材料。通常書面表達(dá)給出的話題是開放的，而具體的內(nèi)容要求學(xué)生自己發(fā)揮，因此選擇恰當(dāng)?shù)乃夭囊彩鞘苟涛闹行耐怀?、明確的關(guān)鍵。初寫短文。一切都準(zhǔn)備就緒，就可以動筆寫作了，在寫作的過程中我們要注意句子的準(zhǔn)確性、連貫性以及簡潔性。使用的詞語、短語及句型盡量用自己有把握的詞。同時還要注意使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞，使句子銜接自然。修改潤色。修改潤色是獲取高分的必要步驟。這一步我們除了檢查短文的各種錯誤外，還要檢查語法結(jié)構(gòu)是否合理，有無重復(fù)、啰嗦的語言，大小寫是否正確，格式是否正確，詞數(shù)是否符合要求等。6．（陜西中考模擬） 下周一下午輪到你在英語課上做課堂報告, 你打算把你爸爸最近網(wǎng)購的音樂機(jī)器人（music robot）介紹給同學(xué)們。下圖是關(guān)于這個音樂機(jī)器人的廣告, 請你根據(jù)所提供的信息寫一份發(fā)言稿。我是能聽會說的小音樂機(jī)器人,只要你對我說歌曲的名字, 我就能唱給你聽。我還有其他本領(lǐng)……參考詞匯:small, clever, ask it about weather, problems in study, remind you of important dates, convenient要求:1. 參考提示, 可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；2. 語句涌順, 意思連貫, 書寫工整；3. 文中不得出現(xiàn)個人真實信息；Good morning, everyone! Here, I’d like to introduce the music robot my father bought online. _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Good morning, everyone! Here, I39。d like to introduce the music robot my father bought online. It is small, so you can even carry it in your backpack. After you connect it to the Internet and speak to it, it can provide different kinds of services. For example, you just say, Ding Dong, I want to listen to SHE39。s songs ,and it will play their songs immediately. You can also ask it about weather or even your problems in study. Besides, it can remind you of important dates and so on.I am so amazed at my music robot because it makes my life more enjoyable and convenient. I really love it!【解析】【分析】這篇書面表達(dá)主要描述爸爸最近給“我”買的音樂機(jī)器人。【詳解】這是篇材料作文。內(nèi)容上首先要介紹這個音樂機(jī)器人，其次表達(dá)為什么“我”要介紹這個機(jī)器人，也就是對它的喜愛。在寫作時，首先要選擇自己熟悉的短語或者句型，在能力范圍之內(nèi)，選擇句式時要賦予變化，這樣才可以更好的駕馭。同時也要選擇合適的連接詞，把各個要點組織成一個完整的整體。7．（黑龍江中考模擬）假如你是 Lin lei，與朋友Mary約好一起去歷史博物館，但因故不能赴約。請給她寫封電子郵件，內(nèi)容包括：（1）表示歉意；（2）說明原因；（3）另約時間。____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Dear Mary,I’m very sorry to say that I cannot go to the history museum with you on Saturday morning. I have to go to see my friend in the hospital that morning. I hope the change will not cause you too much trouble.Shall we go on Sunday morning? If it’s convenient for you, let’s meet at 8: 30 outside the school gate. If not, let me know what time suits you best I should be available any time after school next week.Yours,Lin Lei【解析】【詳解】這是一篇書信作文，根據(jù)材料中的相關(guān)信息向Mary解釋一下你不能赴約的原因。主要從表示歉意；說明原因；另約時間這三個方面去介紹。時態(tài)為一般現(xiàn)在時，人稱為第一人稱。注意作文中必須包含材料上的所有信息，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。寫作時，避免使用漢語式的英語，盡量使用我們熟悉的句子或短語。語法要正確，表達(dá)要符合英語習(xí)慣，注意時態(tài)、時間狀語的搭配及主謂一致問題。寫作中適當(dāng)使用連詞，注意上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關(guān)系，表達(dá)具有條理性?！靖叻志湫鸵弧縄’m very sorry to say that I cannot go to the history museum with you on Saturday morning. 很抱歉，我星期六早上不能和你一起去歷史博物館了。句子that I cannot go to the history museum with you on Saturday 。【高分句型二】If it’s convenient for you, let’s meet at 8: 30 outside the school gate. 如果方便的話，我們8:30在校門外見面。If it’s convenient for you是由if引導(dǎo)的條件狀語從句。8．（四川雅安中學(xué)中考模擬）書面表達(dá)。假如你們學(xué)校要開展主題為：“如何保護(hù)地球”的演講比賽。請你根據(jù)以下提示，寫一篇演講稿。提示：1. 現(xiàn)在存在的環(huán)境問題。2. 采取措施，保護(hù)環(huán)境。1） 關(guān)閉工廠，不亂扔垃圾。 2） 節(jié)約用水、用電的方法。3） 使用購物袋代替塑料袋, 盡量乘坐公共交通。4） 回收利用廢品等。要求： ，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不記入字?jǐn)?shù)。Hello, everyone!The earth is our home, so we should protect it well. Thanks for listening!【答案】How to Protect the EarthHello, everyone!The earth is our home, so we should protect it well.However it bees dirtier and dirtier: polluted rivers and lakes, growing deserts, the destruction of the forests and wildlife. All the bad things are the punishments from nature. It39。s time to take measures to protect the environment. First of all, close the factory and don39。t litter. Second, the method of saving water and electricity. Third, use shopping bags instead of plastic bags and try to take public transport. Fourth, recycling waste products and so on.I hope our home will bee better and better.Thanks for listening!【解析】【詳解】這篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短語，為文章增色不少，如dirtier and dirtier，the punishments from nature，It39。s time to