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goes by, my colorful junior middle school life is ing to an end. I’m glad to tell you something about my school life. Our campus is clean and beautiful, and there are all kinds of activities. Our teachers teach us rich knowledge and how to behave ourselves. They also encourage us to work hard. We all get on well with our classmates. Besides, we learn from each other and make progress together. I thanks for my school, my teachers and my classmates. Wish them better.【解析】【分析】這是一篇給材料作文,介紹我的初中生活。寫作中注意運(yùn)用代詞,注意多種句式交替運(yùn)用?!军c(diǎn)睛】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊,語(yǔ)言簡(jiǎn)練。此處go by, e to an end, tell sb about sth, all kinds of, behave oneself, encourage sb to do sth, get on with, learn from, make progress等這些詞組的運(yùn)用也讓文章增色不少。某校正在開展中學(xué)生是否有必要閱讀英文經(jīng)典文學(xué)的大討論,請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下問題和要求用英語(yǔ)寫一篇文章參與討論。With the development of the Five Onehundred Project in Yangzhou, our school has had a discussion about whether it is necessary for middle school students to read English classics. 【答案】With the development of the Five Onehundred Project in Yangzhou, our school has had a discussion about whether it is necessary for middle school students to read English classics. I think reading English classics is not only necessary but also important. First, we can learn a lot about Western history and culture by reading. Second, by reading classics we can enlarge our vocabulary and improve our writing. Finally, it can help us with our lifelong learning. So I often spend my free time reading English classics. I am in the Reading Club. And I often take notes while reading. What’s more, I sometimes ask the teacher for help if I have difficulty reading books. If some students are weak in English, they can read the short and easy English stories at the very beginning. Well begun is half done. Next, they should keep reading and never give up. Then their English will be improved little by little.【解析】【詳解】這是一篇要求關(guān)于某校正在開展中學(xué)生是否有必要閱讀英文經(jīng)典文學(xué)的大討論,請(qǐng)根據(jù)問題和要求用英語(yǔ)寫一篇文章參與討論。根據(jù)材料可知本文主要是應(yīng)用第一人稱,一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài),注意標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)及大小寫等問題,不要犯語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤。8.書面表達(dá) 假如你是李明,你的美國(guó)筆友Alex來(lái)信說(shuō)他要來(lái)中國(guó)做交換生。寫作要點(diǎn):1. 歡迎他來(lái)中國(guó)。(2)有時(shí)在戶外做運(yùn)動(dòng)。3. 給他一些在中國(guó)如何與同學(xué)融洽相處的建議。可適當(dāng)加入細(xì)節(jié),使內(nèi)容充實(shí),行文連貫。至少80詞。ll thank you for your help. You can bring some small gifts to your classmates when you are invited to their homes. I hope you can get on well with your classmates. Best wishes!Yours,Li Ming【解析】【詳解】這是一篇書信作文,假如你是李明,你的美國(guó)筆友Alex來(lái)信說(shuō)他要來(lái)中國(guó)做交換生。注意書信的格式。認(rèn)為閱讀材料,認(rèn)真審題,確定主題,認(rèn)真閱讀所給提示,所給提示就是本文的提綱要點(diǎn),根據(jù)要點(diǎn)適當(dāng)發(fā)揮,列出提綱。要運(yùn)用合適的連接詞或過渡詞,使文章具有連貫性。本文提綱:親愛的亞歷克斯,你好嗎?你在上一封信中說(shuō)你將作為交換生來(lái)中國(guó)。你想了解我最近忙些什么。這幾天我大部分時(shí)間都在復(fù)習(xí)考試。但我很少有時(shí)間出去玩。事實(shí)上,你不必?fù)?dān)心。你應(yīng)該積極參加學(xué)校的各種活動(dòng)。他們會(huì)感謝你的幫助。我希望你能和同學(xué)們相處得很好??忌荒苓z漏要點(diǎn),要盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞、短語(yǔ)和句式,盡可能使用高級(jí)詞匯和較復(fù)雜的句式結(jié)構(gòu)以便得到較高的分?jǐn)?shù)。注意書寫的規(guī)范:大小寫、標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)等的正確運(yùn)用。寫作六步法::文體,時(shí)態(tài),人稱。:通過增加狀語(yǔ),定語(yǔ),連詞,使句子意思飽滿充實(shí)。:拼寫是否錯(cuò)誤,語(yǔ)法時(shí)態(tài)是否正確,連詞是否恰當(dāng)?shù)取?.假設(shè)你是李明,去年你家里來(lái)了一位交換生,你非常開心。內(nèi)容要點(diǎn):1. 你是家里的獨(dú)生子/女,一直覺得很孤獨(dú);2. 去年你家里來(lái)了一位交換生,你很開心;3. 他/她非?;顫娍蓯?,興趣廣泛;4. 你們一起生活、學(xué)習(xí),你跟他她學(xué)會(huì)了很多東西,尤其是英語(yǔ)提高了很多;5. 你對(duì)這段經(jīng)歷的感受……參考詞匯: exchange student交換生,joy(n.)歡樂, on one’s own initiative主動(dòng)地寫作要求:1. 不得使用真實(shí)姓名和學(xué)校名;2. 包含以上所有要點(diǎn),可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié),使內(nèi)容充實(shí),行文連貫3. 字跡工整,語(yǔ)言精練,表達(dá)準(zhǔn)確,條理清楚4. 詞數(shù)80100?!矰ear Tony,As you know, I’m the only child in my family,______________________________________________Yours,Li Ming【答案】Dear Tony,As you know, I’m the only child in my family, and I always feel lonely. Last year, an exchange student came to my family. His name is Tom. He brought me much joy and happiness. I didn’t feel lonely any more.He is very active and lively, and has a wide range of interests. He likes playing football and does well in playing chess. We live and study together. I have learned a lot from him, he often helps me with my English on his own initiative, so I have improved my English a lot. What’s more , I have learned to share and look after my family.I’m lucky and happy to have an exchange student. Looking forward to hearing from you. Yours,Li Ming【解析】【詳解】試題分析:先讀提示,要點(diǎn)與格式要弄清;時(shí)態(tài)語(yǔ)態(tài)要當(dāng)心,前后呼應(yīng)要一致,結(jié)構(gòu)搭配莫違背;文章寫好細(xì)檢查,點(diǎn)滴小錯(cuò)別忽視。最后要檢查(1)要點(diǎn)是否齊全,有無(wú)遺漏。(3)語(yǔ)法是否正確,人稱、時(shí)態(tài)、語(yǔ)態(tài)、名詞單復(fù)數(shù)等有無(wú)錯(cuò)誤?!军c(diǎn)睛】好作文應(yīng)該是緊扣文章主題,遵循書信格式,選用恰當(dāng)?shù)恼Z(yǔ)言合理組織文章結(jié)構(gòu),內(nèi)容統(tǒng)一、連貫,語(yǔ)法、拼寫、標(biāo)點(diǎn)正確,用詞恰當(dāng)??荚嚂r(shí)最好選擇自己最有把握的詞匯,短語(yǔ),句