【正文】 he future。 hope to do sth. as well as。 in my opinion。13．（請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下信息，給Billy回封電子郵件，并建議他每周都要花些時(shí)間鍛煉身體。2. 介紹你平時(shí)鍛煉的情況：（1）每天鍛煉的時(shí)間：不到一個(gè)半小時(shí)。（3）擅長(zhǎng)的體育運(yùn)動(dòng)：球類(lèi)運(yùn)動(dòng)。寫(xiě)作要求：1. 不得使用真實(shí)的姓名和學(xué)校名。3. 字跡工整，語(yǔ)言精練，表達(dá)準(zhǔn)確，條理清晰。Dear Billy,It’s my great pleasure to receive your . ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Best wishes!Yours,Li Hua【答案】Dear Billy,It’s my great pleasure to receive your . You wanted to know about my usual exercise. I’ll tell it to you. I am busy preparing for the ing physical test. So I take exercise less than an hour every day. Sometimes I don’t do exercise, because I have so much homework that I have no time to do it. I do well in playing balls.Doing exercise can help me keep a strong body, and it is good for my health. Besides, I think it can make me relaxed by doing exercise. So I advise you to spend more time doing exercise every week.Best wishes!Yours,Li Hua【解析】【分析】這是一篇給材料作文，給Billy回封電子郵件，介紹自己平時(shí)的鍛煉情況，并建議他每周都要花些時(shí)間鍛煉身體。寫(xiě)作中注意運(yùn)用代詞，注意多種句式交替運(yùn)用?！军c(diǎn)睛】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，語(yǔ)言簡(jiǎn)練。此處be busy doing sth, prepare for, do well in, be good for, advise sb to do sth等這些詞組的運(yùn)用也讓文章增色不少。江蘇中考模擬）書(shū)面表達(dá)追星是青少年中普遍存在的問(wèn)題。贊同，學(xué)習(xí)他們的優(yōu)點(diǎn)，嚴(yán)格要求自己。你的觀點(diǎn)…… （發(fā)揮12點(diǎn)）注意：1. 詞數(shù)90左右。2. 條理清晰，語(yǔ)義連貫，句式規(guī)范，字跡工整。4. 以…為榜樣： follow a good example of sb. 面對(duì)現(xiàn)實(shí): face realityNowadays, lots of students bee star chasers. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________.【答案】Nowadays, lots of students bee star chasers. especially many university people think teenagers should learn from stars and find their strengths and then they are strict with they are sad,it is fun to think ,they forget the pressure of learning.However, others think it is a waste of time and energy to chase stars. And it also affects their studies. They can’t face the reality and always dreams of being a famous star. In my opinion, having idols is not a bad thing. However, we should make it clear who are the real “heroes”. As far as I am concerned, the real heroes are those who are making the most contributions to our society, such as teachers, doctors and scientists. As students, we should learn from them. Only in this way can we bee useful persons in the future.【解析】【詳解】寫(xiě)作思路：根據(jù)所給提示可知，本篇作文可以分三步進(jìn)行，首先分別列舉正反雙方的觀點(diǎn)，然后擺出自己的看法，并總結(jié)作為青少年的我們應(yīng)該怎么做。本篇作文，首先以Nowadays, lots of students bee star chasers. especially many university ，接著Some people think….When they are sad, .... Also,…列出一些人贊同的觀點(diǎn)及理由，中間用到when以及also 這樣的詞使表達(dá)準(zhǔn)確，且具有連貫性。然后In my opinion….巧妙運(yùn)用過(guò)渡語(yǔ)，列出自己的觀點(diǎn)?？偨Y(jié)流暢自然，渾然天成。全國(guó)中考模擬）書(shū)面表達(dá)越來(lái)越多汽車(chē)進(jìn)入我們的家庭生活，改善了我們的生活，但同時(shí)也帶來(lái)了很多問(wèn)題，如塞車(chē)和車(chē)禍，給家庭和社會(huì)帶來(lái)極大的危害。別在街道上或馬路上玩耍和踢球。你可以適當(dāng)增加內(nèi)容，讓短文通順，過(guò)渡自然。Traffic safety is everybody39。We can say cars are ing into our life, but only when everybody thinks traffic safety is everybody39。【解析】這是一篇給材料作文，寫(xiě)一篇有關(guān)交通安全的短文, 介紹作為中學(xué)生我們應(yīng)該怎么做，結(jié)合所給材料，可知本文主要考查一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，人稱(chēng)為第一，三人稱(chēng)，注意主謂一致問(wèn)題，句子結(jié)構(gòu)主要為系表結(jié)構(gòu)和動(dòng)賓結(jié)構(gòu)，注意一些常見(jiàn)句式的應(yīng)用，比如：we are happy that……，it has also brought…….，Traffic safety is……，we must……，we can……，等句式的應(yīng)用。寫(xiě)作中注意敘述順序，符合邏輯關(guān)系。開(kāi)頭介紹了現(xiàn)在有很多交通問(wèn)題，接下來(lái)介紹我們應(yīng)遵守的交通規(guī)則，最后指出人人認(rèn)為交通安全是自己的事，我們才能在路上安全行駛。16．（在美期間，你住在Tom家，在這一學(xué)期里，你和他及他的家人結(jié)下了深厚的友誼。1. 介紹Tom：為人友好，樂(lè)于助人，你們相處很融洽；2. 他在英語(yǔ)學(xué)習(xí)方面給你的幫助；你了解了美國(guó)的文化；3. 他的父母悉心照顧你的生活，給你做中國(guó)菜。注意：1．詞數(shù)80左右；2．合理增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。在美期間，你住在Tom家，在這一學(xué)期里，你和他及他的家人結(jié)下了深厚的友誼。動(dòng)筆前先要認(rèn)真閱讀要點(diǎn)，圍繞要點(diǎn)組織材料，然后用正確的英語(yǔ)句子把這些內(nèi)容表達(dá)出來(lái)，在此基礎(chǔ)上亦可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，注意不要遺漏材料中給出的要點(diǎn)。注意上下文之間的邏輯關(guān)系，語(yǔ)意連貫。北京中考模擬）假如你叫李華，學(xué)校英語(yǔ)廣播站正在招募主持人。提示詞語(yǔ)： like, improve, help, introduce, share提示問(wèn)題： ● What’s your name and hobby?● Why do you want to be a host?● What are you going to do?Dear Sam,I’d like to be a host for the English Broadcasting Station （英語(yǔ)廣播站）. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________I’m looking forward to your early reply.Yours,Li Hua【答案】Dear Sam,I’d like to be a host for the English Broadcasting Station. My name is Li Huafrom Class 1 Grade3. I like watching English movies and listening to English songs inmy spare time. I want to be a host because it’s a good chance to improve my oralEnglish, at the same time, I can help other students get more information which theyare interested in. As a host, I have some plans. I am going to not only introduce somewestern culture, some good ways of learning English, but also share some beautifulEnglish music and poems. I’d be very happy if I bee a host.I’m looking forward to your early reply.Yours,Li Hua【解析】試題分析：本篇書(shū)面表達(dá)是圍繞一篇演講稿展開(kāi)，貼近學(xué)校生活，學(xué)生有話可寫(xiě)。要按要點(diǎn)和給出的提示問(wèn)題來(lái)完成寫(xiě)作任務(wù)，但不能生硬的寫(xiě)幾個(gè)句子交待了事，切記，逐條生硬的翻譯，沒(méi)有任何的連接詞。注意高級(jí)句型的運(yùn)用提升文章的檔次。句型變化多，有定語(yǔ)從句的使用，數(shù)量恰當(dāng)，句式豐富，短語(yǔ)多樣。18．（年5月，來(lái)39。 假如你是李華，你的朋友Lisa是英國(guó)的一名初中生，她對(duì)我們的“新四大發(fā)明”很感 興趣。注意:，開(kāi)頭與結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù) ，使行文流暢。首先應(yīng)注意在短文中要包括題目中給出的所有信息，不能遺漏要點(diǎn)，并注意表達(dá)的層次和條理。最后要注意英語(yǔ)的表達(dá)習(xí)慣，英語(yǔ)句式與漢語(yǔ)在語(yǔ)序和詞性上的使用是不同的，要注意不能逐詞翻譯，寫(xiě)漢語(yǔ)式的英語(yǔ)。還應(yīng)使用一些較好的句型或者短語(yǔ)，增強(qiáng)文章的表現(xiàn)力。西安市鐵一中學(xué)中考模擬）由于父母的溺愛(ài)，現(xiàn)在許多孩子基本不做學(xué)習(xí)以外的事情，導(dǎo)致獨(dú)立生活能力不強(qiáng)。要求；，意思連貫，語(yǔ)法正確，書(shū)寫(xiě)規(guī)范2. 字?jǐn)?shù)70 字左右（短文的開(kāi)頭已經(jīng)給出，不計(jì)入總字?jǐn)?shù)） As middle school students, it39。s very important for us to independent. What should we do to make us independent?First, let39?！驹斀狻拷Y(jié)合所給材