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__________________________________________________________.We should try our best to make our city more and more beautiful!【答案】In order to build a civilized city, we students are supposed to behave well in our daily life. should choose to live a lowcarbon life. We’d better go to school by bike or on foot. When we are shopping. we can use baskets or cloth bags instead of plastic bags. We should also pay attention to saving. We must say NO to waste. We shouldn’t buy anything we don’t need.Second,it’s our duty to protect the environment. We mustn’t throw litter or rubbish about and we should take care of trees and flowers.Third,it’s necessary for us to show good manners to others/ be polite to others. We need to say polite words such as“Thank You. I’m sorry and Please” as often as possible.Finally, we should devote ourselves to helping others. We should learn from Lei Feng and be willing to help others. It’s important for us to take part in voluntary work.We should try our best to make our city more and more beautiful!【解析】試題分析:本篇書面表達以“學雷鋒、講文明、樹新風”的活動為話題,結合所給的寫作材料,寫出中學生應從表格中的幾個方面來規(guī)范自己的言行舉止。寫作中注意連詞、固定短語的交替使用,使文意連接緊密,還要注意使用豐富的語句,注意敘述順序,符合邏輯關系,最后最好要表達出人物的感想和看法。文中had better,by bike, on foot,instead of, pay attention to, as often as possible ,take care of, devote … to …, learn from 等詞(組)恰當使用,使上下文意連接緊密;文中使用了固定句型It’s +形容詞+for sb. +to do sth., 以及定語從句、時間狀語從句等復合句,大大增加了信息的容量,使文章增色不少,值得學習。遼寧中考模擬)現(xiàn)在手機是人們生活的必需品,在給我們提供便利的同時,也有很多負面作用。請你根據(jù)要求談談對自己的看法:1. 手機的正面作用;2. 手機給人們帶來的煩惱;3. 如何防止成為“手機控”。s happening around the world. Today many people, especially young people, are phone freaks. Depending on mobile phones too much is bad for health. Looking at mobile phones too often is bad for our eyes. Playing with mobile phones is a waste of time and harmful to study. I think young people should spend more time doing sports or being with their family and friends. They should also pay more attention to their studies. If they fill their time this way, they won39??忌紫纫喿x前面的提示去認真審題,確定出文章的中心,用一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)來表達。需要自由發(fā)揮的地方較多,比如手機的正面作用可以寫有利于我們的溝通與交流,通過上網(wǎng)了解世界上所發(fā)生的事情,手機的負面作用可以寫手機對健康的危害,對學生學習的影響等等。另外,寫作時,還需注意語句間的銜接,使文意連貫,表達流暢。安徽中考模擬)書面表達某英文雜志社正面向九年級畢業(yè)生征文,請從以下要點中選擇一至兩個方面,并結合具體事例,用英語寫一篇題為Thank you,my teacher!的短文參加此次活動.要點如下:(1)嚴格要求(2)耐心指導(3)熱情鼓勵;注意:(1)詞數(shù)80~100;(2)可適當增加細節(jié),以使行文連貫(3)文中不得出現(xiàn)真實姓名及學校名稱.(4)…注意:(1)詞數(shù)80100;(2)可適當增加細節(jié),以使行文連貫(3)文中不得出現(xiàn)真實姓名及學校名稱【答案】Thank you,my teacher!Leaving youlovely junior school life,I have som any words from my heart to say.I still remember that you became our English teacher three years ago.You always work hard and treat us well.You are strict with us in studyand also take care of us kindly.It is easy and interesting for us to learn English well because your class is very interesting and lively.(嚴格要求)【高分句型一】During my school life,we can get along well with each other.When I failed in an exam,you encouraged me to keep trying.【高分句型一】When I had trouble in life,you told me to be brave.(耐心指導)Because of your help and encouragement,many students,including me,are more and more interested in English and make much progress,too.You have given me so much.(熱情鼓勵)Thank you again for what you39?!驹斀狻坑⒄Z作文一般分為三個部分第一部分:開篇點題,交代寫作目的——感謝老師為我做的一切。老師對我嚴格要求。第三部分:再次點題,對老師表示由衷的謝意。湖南中考模擬)情景作文閱讀現(xiàn)在已成為人們生活中最重要的一部分。要求內容連貫,并進行合理拓展, 80 詞左右。英語作文要注意人稱和時態(tài),注意提供的觀點、材料,要注意句子的完整性,謂語動詞的正確形式,句子之間的銜接和過渡。動筆前先要認真閱讀要點,圍繞要點組織材料,然后用正確的英語句子把這些內容表達出來,在此基礎上亦可適當發(fā)揮,注意不要遺漏材料中給出的要點。注意上下文之間的邏輯關系,語意連貫。湖南中考模擬)書面表達假如你校英語社團即將舉辦為“My hobby” 的征文活動, 請你根據(jù)下面的提示問題寫一篇短文介紹你的愛好,然后參加此活動。My hobby 【答案】My? HobbyI have many hobbies, such as singing, listening to music, reading and so on. But my favorite hobby is swimming. Because I think it is cool and relaxing. In summer days, it39。16.(根據(jù)下列圖畫,寫一篇80詞左右的短文。注意文章文體、人稱和時態(tài)。同時應選用合適的連接詞或過渡詞,使文章具有一定的連貫性?!军c睛】這篇短文不使用了大量的的短語,可見該生英語功底扎實。17.(本書,.韓國人11本書,日本、而中國國民人均讀書數(shù)量低于5本。o)讀書;讀好書;5.—本好書改變人的一生。參考詞匯:身心健康:mental and physical health_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Let’s be activet think so.In my opinion,to read books is more valuable than anything else.The old sayingTo open a book is always helpfulclearly tells us how good it is to read a book.Books are our friends.They introduce us different kinds of knowledge.They lead us down the road to success.Books are our teachers.They teach us troth,science,literature,and philosophy of life.Besides,they increase our knowledge,enlarge our experience,strengthen our character and do many other things which we can not do without them.Books tell us what is good and what is evil.And only books can tell the good from the bad.Therefore to read more books is the best policy for our young students.As a middle school student.I think we should read more books.Reading is good for our physical and mental health. Let39。適當增加銜接詞,使文章更出彩。18.(上周的一堂英語課上,老師就“二孩政策( twochild policy )”展開了全班調查。觀點理由不想有弟妹,愿意當獨生子女(21%)不愿意與別人分享父母的愛,父母會很辛苦,......想要弟妹,不愿意當獨生子女(62%) 渴望有伴,有更多的親人,有人分享......不介意,都可以(17%) ……你的觀點……要求:文中不能出現(xiàn)真實的人名和學校名稱,100字左右,開頭已給出,不計入字數(shù)。動筆前應根據(jù)主題組織材料,確定寫作內容,列出簡單提綱,確定句子的時態(tài)、關鍵單詞等問題。注意不要遺漏要點,做到語句通順。還要注意敘述順序,符合邏輯關系,注意文后要表達自己的觀點和想法。本文恰當使用了had a discussion about,share parents’ love with,because of,play with, however,also, be good to等詞(組)。19.(有人認為學校應當開設傳統(tǒng)文化課(set up traditional culture classes),但也有人認為沒有必要。Your opinionnecessary or unnecessaryYour reasonsthe root (根) of Chinese culture, know more about,spread, developYour suggestion…Dear editor,As we all know, Chinese traditional culture is facing a great challenge because of the rapid development if international technology nowadays. ____________________________