【正文】 m in today39。t get on well with their classmates, while others may worry about their exams too much.I was always under pressure, too. My parents wanted me to be the top student in my class. They always sent me to all kinds of afterclasses on weekends.Less pressure makes better life. Thank you.【解析】【詳解】這篇作文要求我們針對現(xiàn)在同學(xué)們普遍感到壓力大這種現(xiàn)象，以Less Pressure Makes Life Better為題，談?wù)勛约旱目捶?，和同學(xué)們分享一下自己的經(jīng)驗。題目中只給出了大概的提綱，其中具體的內(nèi)容應(yīng)由學(xué)生們自己發(fā)揮想象力來補(bǔ)充，并用正確的英語表達(dá)出來。文章應(yīng)使用一般現(xiàn)在時和一般過去時，注意根據(jù)表達(dá)的需要使用正確的時態(tài)，并變化謂語動詞的正確形式。但為提升作文檔次，應(yīng)穿插使用并列句和復(fù)合句，或使用一些復(fù)雜結(jié)構(gòu)，如非謂語動詞、被動語態(tài)等?！军c(diǎn)睛】這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，短文作者根據(jù)題目要求，談了自己對同學(xué)們普遍感到壓力大這種現(xiàn)象的看法，并分享了自己的經(jīng)歷。其次短文中使用了正確的時態(tài)和人稱，文章主要使用了一般現(xiàn)在時和一般過去時，謂語動詞形式準(zhǔn)確。也使用了并列句和復(fù)合句的結(jié)構(gòu)，如賓語從句、狀語從句等。t get on well with their classmates, while others may worry about their exams too much.、My parents wanted me to be the top student in my class、In this way, I feel less stressed out so that I can concentrate more on my studies等等。假如你是李華, 請你給Jessica寫一封信, 介紹該節(jié)日。要求：〔開頭和結(jié)尾已給出, 不計入總詞數(shù)）；, 意思連貫, 書寫工整。m glad to hear from you. Now let me introduce the MidAutumn Festival to Yours,Li Hua【答案】Dear Jessica,I39。全文可分兩大部分，第一部分寫中秋節(jié)的時間、傳統(tǒng)習(xí)俗及慶祝方式，第二部分寫我最期待的活動。增強(qiáng)邏輯關(guān)系，增加上下文意思連貫，句子通順，行文連貫。TimeGood habitsBad habitsIn the morningGet up earlyEat junk food for breakfastIn classAsk some questionsQuarrel（爭吵） with herclassmates sometimesAfter schoolAlways exerciseGo home lateIn the eveningHelp her parents with houseworkWatch TV or play putergames for more than an hour要求：語言要通順，表達(dá)要正確。詞數(shù)不少于60個英語單詞?！敬鸢浮縊ne possible versionDear Mary,I’m very glad to introduce（介紹） my classmate Zhang Ying to you. She is a 14yearold girl. She has a lot of good habits. She gets up early every morning. In class she likes to ask her teachers some questions. After school she always exercises （for a long time）. After supper she helps her parents with housework. （She is really a good girl. ）But she has some bad habits, too. She often eats junk food for breakfast. Sometimes she quarrels with her classmates in class. She doesn’t go home on time and she always watches TV or plays puter games for more than an hour in the evening. （This makes her parents unhappy. ）I think Zhang Ying is a very good girl. Do you think so?YoursHuang Deshun【解析】試題分析：這是一篇提綱類作文，題目中給出的材料較為齊全。根據(jù)材料可知，本文主要用一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)，第三人稱進(jìn)行敘述，寫作中主語時態(tài)及主謂一致等問題。為了使意思更加連貫可適當(dāng)使用連接詞。本文中時間詞如After supper，Sometimes，in the evening等的巧妙使用，使得本文看起來邏輯清楚，條理分明。假設(shè)你是李華，請根據(jù)下表提示，用英語寫一篇發(fā)言稿，在班會上談?wù)勀阌龅降臒酪约澳阕约旱淖龇ā?. 所寫內(nèi)容必須包括表格中所有的信息，并作適當(dāng)?shù)陌l(fā)揮。Hello everyone,Hello everyone,I am Li Hua. I’d like to talk about my problems and how I deal with them. That’s all. Thank you!【答案】Hello everyone,I am Li Hua. I’d like to talk about my problems and how I deal with them.I am not very tall and very mon. But I don’t care and I believe in myself.My parents don’t understand me and I have very few friends. I encourage myself to be kind to others and learn to municate with others very well.I often feel stressed because of my study and I don’t have many chances to join the afterclass activities. I will plan my time very carefully and improve my study in a very good way. Try to join as many activities as possible and achieve a balance between study and hobbies.That’s all. Thank you!【解析】試題分析：本題是一篇給材料作文，要求用英語寫一篇發(fā)言稿，在班會上談?wù)勀阌龅降臒酪约澳阕约旱淖龇?。要包含表格中所有的信息，并作適當(dāng)?shù)陌l(fā)揮。寫作亮點(diǎn)：短文開頭直奔主題：我想要談?wù)勎业臒兰霸鯓犹幚硭麄?；后面三段分別從外貌上的煩惱、與父母交流上的障礙、學(xué)習(xí)上的壓力幾方面分別談?wù)撟约旱臒兰疤幚淼姆绞?，生動具體，條理分明。【考點(diǎn)定位】 考查提綱類作文