【正文】 hink that students should leave school at about 5 o 39。clock is the best time to finish school. After school, they can do parttime jobs, such as collecting discarded plastic bottles to sell for money.I am in favor of leaving school at five o39。而復(fù)雜并列結(jié)構(gòu)They can exercise to keep healthy and read more interesting books after students think that students should leave school at about 5 o 39。在學(xué)習(xí)中注意總結(jié)牢記一些固定句式及短語(yǔ)，寫作時(shí)就可以適當(dāng)引用，使文章表達(dá)更有邏輯性，也更富有條理。它要求將所規(guī)定的材料內(nèi)容經(jīng)整理后展開思維，考查運(yùn)用所學(xué)英語(yǔ)知識(shí)準(zhǔn)確表達(dá)意思的能力。3．臨近畢業(yè)，學(xué)校在學(xué)習(xí)小組內(nèi)開展了初中階段自評(píng)和組評(píng)活動(dòng)，假設(shè)你是 Moonlight 小組 的組長(zhǎng)，請(qǐng)根據(jù)下面表格中的信息和提示，為你的組員 Tommy 進(jìn)行綜合素質(zhì)的評(píng)價(jià)，寫一 份素質(zhì)報(bào)告．NameTommyCharacteristics聰明、大方（各舉一例）Hobbies喜歡看書，認(rèn)為看書有很多好處（請(qǐng)列舉個(gè)好處）Honour他在家?guī)椭黾覄?wù)。上學(xué)途中遵守交通規(guī)則（舉今年，學(xué)校授予了他優(yōu)秀學(xué)生獎(jiǎng)（Award for Best Student）Problems面臨考試，遭受壓力痛苦，他沒有充足的睡眠．Your suggestions（根據(jù)實(shí)際情況提點(diǎn)建議）…要求：表達(dá)清楚、語(yǔ)法正確、上下文連貫；要點(diǎn)必須包括所有相關(guān)信息，并作適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；詞數(shù)：100 詞左右；不得使用真實(shí)姓名、校名和地名等Tommy is a member of my team called Moonlight.【答案】Tommy is a member of my team called Moonlight. He is clever and he is good at all his lessons. He is so generous that he shares everything with his likes reading because he thinks he can get much knowledge and learn more about the world by reading. And reading has a good effect on children’s growth. At home, he can help his parents do some housework. At school, he gets on well with his classmates. On the way to school, he obeys the traffic rules. He crosses the road when the light is green. Our school presented him with Award for Best Student this year. However, Tommy is stressed when the exam es. And he doesn’t have enough sleep. I think he should go over what he has learned before exams. It’s better for him to manage his time wisely so that he can have enough time to rest.【解析】這篇作文要求我們按照表格里的內(nèi)容介紹一下Tommy的情況，為Tommy寫一篇綜合素質(zhì)的評(píng)價(jià)報(bào)告。表格中涉及的內(nèi)容較多，寫作時(shí)要注意表達(dá)的條理性。在最后要給Tommy提一些建議，這一部分應(yīng)該用第一人稱?！玖咙c(diǎn)說(shuō)明】這是一篇比較優(yōu)秀的范文。表達(dá)準(zhǔn)確，注意了被動(dòng)形式的使用，如He was rewarded by our school this year.。短文注意到了長(zhǎng)短句的結(jié)合，并恰當(dāng)?shù)氖褂昧艘恍┻B詞，使文章表達(dá)的連貫。 4．書面表達(dá)根據(jù)要求完成短文寫作，請(qǐng)將作文寫在答題卡指定的位置上。隨著生活水平的提高，大部分孩子得到越來(lái)越多的壓歲錢，有些甚至通過(guò)微信（WeChat）或支付寶（Alipay）收壓歲錢。內(nèi)容包括如下：1. 你的壓歲錢的來(lái)源和用途；2. 對(duì)合理使用壓歲錢的建議（至少 3 點(diǎn)）；3. 呼吁大家節(jié)約用錢，把自己的壓歲錢用在最需要、最有意義的地方。隨著生活水平的提高，大部分孩子得到越來(lái)越多的壓歲錢，有些甚至通過(guò)微信（WeChat）或支付寶（Alipay）收壓歲錢。通過(guò)閱讀材料可知這篇短文主要使用的人稱就是第一人稱，時(shí)態(tài)為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)，注意謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞的變化。上下文之間可以適當(dāng)使用連接詞。5．書面表達(dá)假如你是李華，你們學(xué)校正在進(jìn)行課堂教學(xué)改革，經(jīng)過(guò)一段時(shí)間的適應(yīng)，同學(xué)們發(fā)現(xiàn)現(xiàn)在的課堂跟以前比較發(fā)生了一些變化，請(qǐng)你根據(jù)所給提示以“The Changes in Class”為題目，用英語(yǔ)寫一篇100詞左右的文章，談?wù)勀愕母惺芎拖敕?，開頭和結(jié)尾已給出（不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)）。The Changes in ClassThanks for giving us students a chance to express ourselves about how we study in 【答案】 The Changes in ClassThanks for giving us students a chance to express ourselves about how we study in class. I like the class like think it is very interesting and lively. We can tell stories, play games and listen to music.I think it is open and free. We can study and think by ourselves .We can discuss in groups and show ourselves. We can get more knowledge in this class. The changes in Class are good for us.【解析】【詳解】假如你是李華，你們學(xué)校正在進(jìn)行課堂教學(xué)改革，經(jīng)過(guò)一段時(shí)間的適應(yīng)，同學(xué)們發(fā)現(xiàn)現(xiàn)在的課堂跟以前比較發(fā)生了一些變化，請(qǐng)你根據(jù)所給提示以“The Changes in Class”為題目，用英語(yǔ)寫一篇100詞左右的文章，談?wù)勀愕母惺芎拖敕?，開頭和結(jié)尾已給出（不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)）。寫作中注意敘述順序，符合邏輯關(guān)系。6． 書面表達(dá)共享單車（shared bikes）在蘇州投入使用以來(lái)，給人們帶來(lái)了諸多便利，受到人們的追捧，改變了人們的出行方式，但同時(shí)也遇到了一些挑戰(zhàn)，是國(guó)民素質(zhì)的‘“照妖鏡”，請(qǐng)你根據(jù)表格中信息的提示，給《21世紀(jì)英文報(bào)》寫一篇關(guān)于共享單車看法的稿件。諸多優(yōu)勢(shì)，出行方便，減少污染 ，負(fù)擔(dān)得起存在問(wèn)題 你的觀點(diǎn)我認(rèn)為……（考生自擬，至少2點(diǎn)）注意事項(xiàng)：，要求語(yǔ)句通順，意思連貫。作適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。Shared bikes are being more and more popular in our daily life.