【正文】 升文章檔次和水平，使表達(dá)更加流暢。首先短文內(nèi)容完整，包含了題目要求的所有信息，沒有遺漏要點(diǎn)。如果分段敘述效果則會更好，那樣會使文章的層次更加清晰。短文以簡單句結(jié)構(gòu)為主，也使用了一些復(fù)合句和較高級的句型，如I’m writing to tell you that our city will have a Winter Camp during this winter ；From , I know you will have a report “An Update on the Cotswold Canals” February 6th, which will happen during the same period of our Winter ；And I also hope to listen to your talk so that I can know more about the Stroudwater Canal, the Thames and Severn 。5．（請以“Travelling”為題，根據(jù)以下思維導(dǎo)圖的提示，寫一篇短文，并發(fā)表你的看法。而非謂語動(dòng)詞結(jié)構(gòu)Seeing is believing./ Furthermore, while travelling, you can meet more people and make more you are a careful observer, you can learn much during your travel about the geography, biology, and history of the places you visit./ No matter how well educated you are, there is always a lot for you to learn through ，豐富了短文內(nèi)容，使表達(dá)多樣化，是本文的亮點(diǎn)?！军c(diǎn)睛】書面表達(dá)題既不是漢譯英，也不是可任意發(fā)揮的作文。所以，考生不能遺漏要點(diǎn)，要盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞、短語和句式，盡可能使用高級詞匯和較復(fù)雜的句式結(jié)構(gòu)以便得到較高的分?jǐn)?shù)。無錫市江南中學(xué)中考模擬）書面表達(dá)親子關(guān)系是目前廣受關(guān)注的話題。通過搜集資料，你查找到中國青少年研究中心（CYCRC）近日就中美兩國親子關(guān)系進(jìn)行了問卷調(diào)查，結(jié)果如下表。ChinaUSKids often talk to their parents%89%Kids think their parents understand them61%%Kids have different ideas from their parents%76%Kids have different ideas from their parents mostly because of…Schoolwork （%）Pocket money （20%）注意事項(xiàng)：；、意思連貫、符合情境；，首尾已經(jīng)在答題卡上給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；4. 內(nèi)容必須寫在答題卡指定的位置。寫作前，應(yīng)仔細(xì)審題，觀察所給表格，弄清楚表格中每一項(xiàng)的內(nèi)容以及它的意義。短文應(yīng)主要以一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)為主，第一人稱和第三人稱來敘述。合理安排各部分內(nèi)容之間的關(guān)系，注意分清結(jié)構(gòu)，表達(dá)要有條理。句式結(jié)構(gòu)要完整，可以簡單句為基礎(chǔ)，穿插使用并列句和復(fù)合句以及其他復(fù)雜句式。【點(diǎn)睛】這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，短文作者根據(jù)題目要求，介紹了中美兩國親子關(guān)系的對比，并結(jié)合自己的實(shí)際對如何與父母相處，發(fā)表了個(gè)人看法。短文分三段：第一段引出文章的話題parentchild relationship，點(diǎn)明文章主旨Here’s my understanding of how to get along well with our parents；第二段對調(diào)查結(jié)果的第一項(xiàng)內(nèi)容進(jìn)行了介紹，并結(jié)合自己的經(jīng)歷，講述了如何與父母相處。其次短文使用了正確的時(shí)態(tài)和人稱，語法規(guī)范，用詞準(zhǔn)確，語句通順。行文連貫、自然，表達(dá)流暢。7．（請你根據(jù)下表中所提供的信息，以 “Learn to Express Thanks” 為題，用英語寫一篇演講稿。Good morning, boys and girls! The topic of my speech today is “Learn to express thanks.”__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Thanks for your listening.【答案】Good morning, boys and girls! The topic of my speech today is “Learn to express thanks.” Nowadays some students consider it natural to eat well and wear fashionable clothes. They think it is their parents’ duty to provide a happy life for them. However, they don’t show any sense of “Thanks”.I don’t think it’s right. It’s our parents who take good care of us and love us very much. In addition, we are supposed to be thankful to our teachers for teaching us so much knowledge. What’s more, we should say thanks to our friends because they share joy with us and give us courage to overe many difficulties.In my opinion, it’s time for us to learn to express thanks to them. First of all, we should be polite to our parents and teachers. Besides, we should try our best to help others when they are in trouble. Last but not least, we must study harder to make a great contribution to our country in the future. And only in this way can we better reward our parents, teachers, friends and so on.Thanks for your listening.【解析】【詳解】這篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短語，為文章增色不少，如provide a happy life，any sense of，take good care of；very much，be supposed to do；be thankful to，so much，share with，what’s more，say thanks to，in my opinion，be polite to，try our best，in trouble，in the future，and so on 等。在學(xué)習(xí)中注意總結(jié)牢記一些固定句式及短語，寫作時(shí)就可以適當(dāng)引用，使文章表達(dá)更有邏輯性，也更富有條理。它要求將所規(guī)定的材料內(nèi)容經(jīng)整理后展開思維，考查運(yùn)用所學(xué)英語知識準(zhǔn)確表達(dá)意思的能力。8．（同學(xué)們，從小到大，會有很多不同的人物伴隨著你成長，他們可能是你的家人、老師、朋友、同學(xué)……甚至是路人。請以 “A person who impressed me a lot” 為題寫一篇英語作文，描述一位給你留下深刻印象的人物。2. 文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的學(xué)校，姓名等個(gè)人信息。A person who impressed me a lot 【答案】There were so many people in our memory. Some went lost while some impressed us deeply. Now, I want to introduce the one who impressed me a lot.Five years ago, I was a primary school student. My family had to move to another city because of my father’s work. I was sent to a new and strange school. I was not an outgoing girl, so it was not easy for me to make new friends. When I felt lonely and sad, a little girl in a red dress came to me. She asked me if I needed any help in a soft and beautiful voice. I was surprised but happy. We became good friends and our friendship has lasted till now. The time I spent with her was the best hours in my life. I believe she will be my friend throughout my life.【解析】【詳解】本文屬于話題作文，描述一位給你留下深刻印象的人物。亮點(diǎn)說明：這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，很好的完成了試題規(guī)定的任務(wù)，語言表達(dá)符合英語習(xí)慣，準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)、主謂一致，特別適用一些亮點(diǎn)詞句，如because of，be sent to, it is adj for sb to do sth, make friends, in a red dress, last, till now以及spend with等?！军c(diǎn)睛】寫作時(shí)可以從以下幾個(gè)方面做起：認(rèn)真審題。審題時(shí)要注意試題的要求，抓住要點(diǎn)，詞數(shù)符合要求。有了提綱，我們就可以根據(jù)提綱和主題確定相關(guān)的寫作材料。初寫短文。使用的詞語、短語及句型盡量用自己有把握的詞。修改潤色。這一步我們除了檢查短文的各種錯(cuò)誤外，還要檢查語法結(jié)構(gòu)是否合理，有無重復(fù)、啰嗦的語言，大小寫是否正確，格式是否正確，詞數(shù)是否符合要求等。江蘇中考模擬）書面表達(dá)。請根據(jù)下面的提示及你的實(shí)際寫封回信。Dear David，Thank you so much for your mail. I39。m happy to tell you about how my life