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you soon.All the best,Li Hua【答案】Dear Danny,I’m glad to receive your letter. Since you are interested in civilization(文明) of China, I would like to share something with you.Chinese civilization is one of the oldest and longest civilizations in the world. China is a country of 56 nationalities. Different nations have difficult cultures. In my country, we have many traditional festivals, such as, the Spring Festival, MidAutumn Festival and the Dragon Boat Festival . They are also called “three major Chinese holidays” in China. Here are the customs of eating Zongzi and racing dragonboat on the Dragon Boat Festival.China is a nation of etiquette (禮儀). Chinese people can respect, trust and help each other. We all learn and grow together. Everyone in my school should protect the whole public environment. Climbing the trees, picking the flowers and throwing garbage at random are not allowed there.I hope you can e to China someday to experience the ancient culture of China. Look forward to hearing from you soon.All the best.Li Hua【解析】【分析】本文要求給你的印度朋友Danny寫一篇關(guān)于華夏文明的回信。表格中列舉了三個(gè)要點(diǎn),寫作時(shí)注意不要漏寫。細(xì)心檢查避免疏漏。【點(diǎn)睛】寫作中注意語(yǔ)義通順,符合邏輯關(guān)系,上下文之間可以適當(dāng)使用連接詞??梢赃m當(dāng)使用高分句子。China is a nation of etiquette(禮儀),中國(guó)是一個(gè)禮儀之邦。根據(jù)下表提示,寫一篇英語(yǔ)短文,描述他們的不同看法,同時(shí)發(fā)表你自己對(duì)暑假安排的觀點(diǎn)。 opinionsGet ready for high school. Do some housework…Kid39。(2)開頭已給出,不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。(4)詞數(shù):不少于80。s important to take summer courses. They also think kids can help do housework to learn some life skills. But the kids disagree. They think it39。s good for us to do some sports.【解析】【詳解】這是一篇給材料作文,本文已經(jīng)給出了主要寫作要點(diǎn),動(dòng)筆前要先認(rèn)真閱讀要點(diǎn),然后圍繞要點(diǎn)適當(dāng)發(fā)揮.寫作中,應(yīng)注意描述的全面性,盡量將提示的內(nèi)容利用上;結(jié)合材料內(nèi)容,可知本文主要是第三人稱,一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)進(jìn)行敘述.語(yǔ)言的表述應(yīng)該符合語(yǔ)法的結(jié)構(gòu),造句應(yīng)該符合英語(yǔ)的表達(dá)習(xí)慣.適當(dāng)使用連詞,做到上下文聯(lián)系緊密,符合邏輯關(guān)系.【點(diǎn)睛】這篇短文用到了一些好的句型:They also think kids can help do housework to learn some life skills. But the kids disagree. They think it39。6.書面表達(dá)(原創(chuàng))今年春節(jié),很多人加入了搶紅包的游戲,但也有人表示擔(dān)憂。Grabbing red packets on lineAgreement(75%) popular form of entertainment, bring more fun people closer, make more friendsDisagreement(25%)spend too much time.not have enough munication with family members, feel lonelyYour opinion1.2.提示詞:We chat 微信Grabbing red packets on line搶紅包注意:(1)詞數(shù)80左右,開頭已給出,不計(jì)入總詞數(shù);(2)文章應(yīng)包括題中所提的所有要點(diǎn),可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮,以使行文連貫;(3)文中請(qǐng)勿提及你的真實(shí)姓名、校名和其他真實(shí)信息。s no doubt that not only does it bring people happiness, but also send blessings to people in a special form. Also, it39。t grab the red packets, people may feel sad or illtempered ,even break their cell phones. What39。題目中給出了一個(gè)表格,里面包括了支持搶紅包這個(gè)游戲的人們的觀點(diǎn)以及反對(duì)這個(gè)游戲的人們的觀點(diǎn)和理由,只給了一些短語(yǔ),我們需要組織語(yǔ)言,將這些要點(diǎn)用正確的英語(yǔ)表達(dá)出來,并使文章內(nèi)容更加豐富、完整。因此文章的內(nèi)容應(yīng)主要包括三部分:支持的人們的理由;反對(duì)者們的理由;自己的看法,可以分成兩段或者三段來敘述,這樣可以使文章結(jié)構(gòu)清楚,有層次。為提升文章檔次,還應(yīng)注意使用高級(jí)句型和較復(fù)雜的句式。點(diǎn)睛:這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文。文章分為三段,第一段是題目中已經(jīng)給出的,因此了文章的話題。其次短文中語(yǔ)言得體,句式準(zhǔn)確,符合英語(yǔ)的表達(dá)習(xí)慣。短文中使用了較豐富的句型,如About 75% of them think it is a popular form of entertainment, bring them more fun.、Grabbing red packets has been part of people’s lives、About 25% of them say some people spend too much time grabbing red packets、Personally, there39。t grab the red packets, people may feel sad or illtempered ,even break their cell 。7.題目②“持之以恒,方得始。生活中想要做成任何一件事情,都需要持之以恒的精神。假如你是李華,請(qǐng)用英語(yǔ)寫一篇短文投稿。提示詞語(yǔ):keep, practice, difficult, give up, proud提示問題:1. What did you do?2. How do you feel?It s important for us to keep trying to achieve our goals. 【答案】It39。m very proud of feel more confident and I39?!驹斀狻浚玫谝蝗朔Q寫初中生活中自己堅(jiān)持做的一件事,根據(jù)提示,描寫“What did you do?用一般過去時(shí),描寫How do you feel?用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)?!芭懿健?,正文部分詳細(xì)地描寫了自己起初跑步總是不及格,通過克服困難、不懈地努力,堅(jiān)持跑步,到現(xiàn)在比以前會(huì)跑;結(jié)尾談了這件事對(duì)自己的影響;文章結(jié)構(gòu)清晰,前后呼應(yīng)。比如:固定搭配、固定句型It39。 ”8.同學(xué)們,初中生活即將結(jié)束,本次考試后,盼望已久的假期就要到來!請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下提示,制定出度假計(jì)劃,可以結(jié)合自己的實(shí)際發(fā)揮。,幫家長(zhǎng)做家務(wù)。;要點(diǎn)齊全;句子及篇章結(jié)構(gòu)正確、連貫;書寫規(guī)范。My junior high school years are ing to an end. The summer holiday is on the way. Here are my plans for the long exciting holidays.