【正文】 、語言流暢、沒有語法錯誤。小朋友們寫作文時要注意人稱及謂語動詞的變化〃要依據提示〃結合自己的實際〃寫自己身邊熟悉的事情。寫作時要注意意思連貫、語句通順、標點正確、書寫清晰、規(guī)范等。小作者開門見山〃直接點題〃首先介紹了英語老師的姓名〃然后逐一介紹了她的外貌特征、喜好、英語水平、上課特點以及師生情感等。同學們在寫作時，可仔細想一下自己的村莊或所在城市的特點，盡量使用本單元學過的單詞或短語進行敘述。My VillageMy village is very are many houses in the the village, there is a small river is in front of the water in it is very can see some fish in the the river, you can see a flowers and grass are on the like my to my village!【要領點評】本文以“我的村莊”為題描述了自己家鄉(xiāng)的風景。同學們在寫作時，應盡量寫一些親自經歷的事情，這樣會避免在作文時顯得太空，因為只有自己經常做的事情印象才會特別深刻。另外，文章中出現(xiàn)了一些生詞，可見小作者是用心查字典了。My Favourite FoodDo you know what this is?Guess!Its colour is ’s long and looks like a small boat and , it is a you know what that is? Guess again!Its colour is ’s looks like a small ball and a small , it is an like then a like like to chew and candies are like them very about you? What’s your favourite food?【要領點評】My Favourite Food 是一篇很成功的文章，小作者并不是簡單地列舉出自己最喜歡的每一種食物，而是有詳有略地進行介紹。My Days of the weekI’m a student and I am in Grade get up at six o’clock every have breakfast at half past six, and go to school at seven o’ have classes from Monday to have an English class on Friday and I have a PE class on don’t have to go to school on school, and I like to go swimming on that day.【要領點評】這篇作文的題目是“我的一周”，小作者沒有說一些空話，而是從自己的親身經歷寫起，敘述了自己一周七天的所作所為，并特別強調了星期天的喜好，寫得自然、流暢。同學們在寫作文時，要注意使用自己最熟悉的詞[組]，以免寫出一些錯句子。第一篇：PEP小學英語五年級上冊各單元作文PEP小學英語五年級上冊各單元作文范例及點評My English TeacherMiss Tang is my English ’s very is tall and has two big eyes and a small hair is likes cats very she likes singing and dancing, English is very often play games in English is very kind to all love her.【要領點評】這篇作文的題目是“我的英語老師”，是一篇介紹人物的作文。小作者開門見山，直接點題，首先介紹了英語老師的姓名，然后逐一介紹了她的外貌特征、喜好、英語水平、上課特點以及師生情感等。寫作時要注意意思連貫、語句通順、標點正確、書寫清晰、規(guī)范等。同學們寫作文時要注意人稱及謂語動詞的變化，要依據提示，結合自己的實際，寫自己身邊熟悉的事情。整篇文章用詞準確、語言流暢、沒有語法錯誤。I can help do houseworkI am a name is Li ’m in Class Three, Grade ’mhelpful at can water the flowers, empty the trash and sweep the meals, I can help my mother do the Sunday, I can wash the about you? Are you helpful, too?【要領點評】 本篇作文的題目是“我可以幫助做家務”，作者主要敘述自己在家?guī)椭龅氖虑椋榻B自己的名字，所在年級及在家能做的家務，很詳細，到位。寫作時還要注意大小寫和時態(tài)。介紹了村莊的房屋、森林、河流及大山，使人看了這篇作文后確實感覺到“我的村莊”的美麗。第二篇：小學五年級英語各單元作文(上冊)PEP小學五年英語各單元作文 English TeacherMiss Tang is my English ’s very is tall and has two big eyes and a small hair is likes cats very she likes singing and dancing, English is very often play games in English is very kind to all love her.【要領點評】這篇作文的題目是“我的英語老師”〃是一篇介紹人物的作文。小朋友們在寫作文時〃要注意使用自己最熟悉的詞[組]〃以免寫出一些錯句子。 Days of the week I’m a student and I am in Grade get up at six o’clock every have breakfast at half past six, and go to school at seven o’ have classes from Monday to have an English class on Friday and I have a PE class on don’t have to go to school on school, and I like to go swimming 請注意書寫呀，么么噠PEP小學五年英語各單元作文on that day.【要領點評】這篇作文的題目是“我的一周”〃小作者沒有說一些空話〃而是從自己的親身經歷寫起〃敘述了自己一周七天的所作所為〃并特別強調了星期天的喜好〃寫得自然、流暢。 Favourite Food Do you know what this is? Guess!Its colour is ’s long and looks like a small boat and , it is a you know what that is? Guess again!Its colour is ’s looks like a small ball and a small , it is an like then a like like to chew and candies are like them very about you? What’s your favourite food? 【要領點評】My Favourite Food 是一篇很成功的文章〃小作者并不是簡單地列舉出自己最喜歡的每一種食物〃而是有詳有略地進行介紹。另外〃文章中出現(xiàn)了一些生詞〃可見小作者是用心查字典了。小朋友們在寫作時〃應盡量寫一些親自經歷的事情〃這樣會避免在作文時顯得太空〃因為只有自己經常做的事情印象才會特別深刻。 The Kitchen This is the kitchen of my ’s big and !My moth