【正文】 于800字。很多時(shí)候，我們?cè)谧匀簧剿袑ひ掙?yáng)光，在親朋好友中尋覓陽(yáng)光，在偉大人物中尋覓陽(yáng)光……但我們常常忽略了，我也可以是一束陽(yáng)光，照亮自己，照亮他人。語(yǔ)言是作文最外在最鮮活的東西，無(wú)論是平實(shí)樸素的，還是充滿文學(xué)韻味的，錘煉語(yǔ)言，使表情達(dá)意確切、形象、簡(jiǎn)約而意韻豐富，應(yīng)是不懈的追求。要解決這一問(wèn)題，不妨采取“化大為小”、“化虛為實(shí)”或“化寬為窄”的方式，從細(xì)微處，具體生動(dòng)地展現(xiàn)對(duì)生活的感悟。（4）巧構(gòu)思，化抽象為具體。（3）展聯(lián)想，深入挖掘主旨。一般來(lái)說(shuō)，偏正短語(yǔ)結(jié)構(gòu)重在修飾語(yǔ)部分（2）明限制，確定選材范圍。點(diǎn)睛：命題作文注意點(diǎn)：（1）要抓題眼，把握表意重心?！窘馕觥吭囶}分析：本題屬于命題作文，題目要求以“秋天的故事”為題，寫(xiě)一篇記敘文，內(nèi)容充實(shí)，貼近生活?！袄蠋?，您說(shuō)的沒(méi)錯(cuò)，我們果然成了好朋友！”她笑了，真正的笑了，像極了陽(yáng)光照耀下的那片半綠半黃的秋葉。她想到了什么，看看老師，老師竟然也在看著她，對(duì)她眨眨眼，示意她快去。這之間的秘密，只有她自己知道。很快，同學(xué)們發(fā)現(xiàn)，她仿佛包裝過(guò)一樣，與之前完全不同。也許我可以吧?！盎蛟S你可以和這片樹(shù)葉一樣融入這個(gè)世界。一棵金黃，不，應(yīng)該是一棵幾乎金黃的樹(shù)上，長(zhǎng)著一片半綠半黃的樹(shù)葉，顯得與眾不同?！崩蠋熃K于離開(kāi)，她松了一口氣?！跋胧裁茨?？”老師溫柔的聲音響在耳旁，她慌忙地抹了抹眼角的淚花：“沒(méi)什么，沒(méi)什么?？涩F(xiàn)在同學(xué)們不相信她的努力，來(lái)指責(zé)她，懷疑她“卑劣的手段”。后來(lái)，淚水讓她變得堅(jiān)強(qiáng)，她學(xué)會(huì)了獨(dú)立。那個(gè)秋日，她才六歲，剛來(lái)到這個(gè)大城市里，欣賞著各種新奇的東西，忘記了與父母過(guò)馬路……一聲巨響，血濺在她的臉上，她驚呆了，她從沒(méi)有見(jiàn)過(guò)這樣的情景。同學(xué)們的話好像一雙無(wú)知的手，把她的一顆看似堅(jiān)強(qiáng)的玻璃心摔得粉碎，碎片也跟著楓葉一起，掉向無(wú)盡的深淵?！敬鸢浮壳锾斓墓适乱?yàn)橛谢?，冰才?huì)融化；因?yàn)橛袗?ài)，世界才會(huì)充滿溫暖；因?yàn)橛心?，我的生命里才?huì)出現(xiàn)陽(yáng)光。請(qǐng)以“秋天的故事”為題，寫(xiě)一篇記敘文。焦仲卿Johnny:Hey you!Stop and listen to us! A:The road is built by me! B:And I planted one tree. C:If you want to go by this street 焦仲卿Johnny:Give us all your money! 劉蘭芝(Luch)聽(tīng)到焦仲卿Johnny的聲音，掀起了蓋頭) 劉蘭芝(Luch) (驚喜萬(wàn)分):Johnny!(不顧一切地飛奔到焦仲卿Johnny的身邊并躲到了的身后) (太守之子大怒，揮拳向焦仲卿Johnn打來(lái)．焦仲卿Johnny矮身一躲，太守之子打中了焦仲卿Johnny身后的劉蘭芝(Luch)，劉蘭芝(Luch)暈倒) 焦仲卿Johnny (火冒三丈):How dare you beat my wife!（揮拳向太守之子沖去） (焦仲卿Johnny 與太守之子混戰(zhàn)，焦母上，以拐杖擊暈太守之子) (焦仲卿Johnn將太守之子胸前的新郎標(biāo)志扯下戴在自己胸前) 焦仲卿Johnny (扶起劉蘭芝(Luch)，關(guān)切地問(wèn)):Honey,how are you? 劉蘭芝(Luch) (哭狀):I hurt a lot! 焦仲卿Johnny:Don’t cry ’ll go and fetch the medicine. (下) 劉蘭芝(Luch) (起身去追):Wait for me! (跑下)閱讀下面的材料。B:Good idea! 焦仲卿Johnny (驚訝):What?What?Lunch is going to get married?It’s impossible! ABamp。六人英語(yǔ)搞笑劇本 孔雀東南飛Wander severy five miles 焦仲卿Johnny (Jforshort) 劉蘭芝Lunch(Lforshort) 焦母Johnny’s mother (JMforshort) 劉母Lunch’smother(LMforshort) 太守之子Mayor’sson (MSforshort) 強(qiáng)盜Burglars(ABandC) (Johnny（焦仲卿）作被打狀跑上臺(tái),內(nèi)砸出一卷紙筒,J被打中,狼狽不堪) Johnny（焦仲卿）:Everybody says that I’m henpecked,but in fact,I’m as strong as a tiger,(小聲)while my wifeis Wu Song. (指著上臺(tái)處的門(mén)大聲道)I’m not afraid of you! (內(nèi)砸出一臉盆, Johnny（焦仲卿）接住當(dāng)成盾牌護(hù)著頭)Then,I’m afraid of whom? My wife Lunch is the most famous woman in the is braver than me, smarter than me and stronger than this I do not only want her to be tender than she is not!Having a wife like this is just like living in the hell! (內(nèi)又砸出一卷紙筒,擊中Johnny（焦仲卿）) My God!Who can help me?(下) Act1 (序幕結(jié)束時(shí),作竊聽(tīng)狀) 焦母（JM）(拄拐棍上):I can! (對(duì)門(mén)內(nèi))Lunch!Lunch!Where are you? 劉蘭芝Lunch (扎著圍裙,拿著鍋鏟,從門(mén)內(nèi)跳出來(lái)):I’m here!What’s up mum? 焦母（JM）:I’ve told you again and again that you should call me“my most beautiful graceful and dearest motherinlaw”. 劉蘭芝 Lunch : most beautiful graceful and dearest motherinlaw,what’s up? 焦母（JM）:Since you married my son you have behaved so have been so rude,so brusque,so lazy…… 劉蘭芝 Lunch :But…… 焦母（JM）:Never interrupt me! 劉蘭芝 Lunch:Never interrupt me!Since I married your son,that terrible Johnny,I have been working hard all day long,cooking and have raised ten soft housands of pigs and ducks and chicken and…… 焦母（JM）:But all those you have done are not as valuable as a grandson! 劉蘭芝 Lunch (生氣地?fù)]動(dòng)著鍋鏟):Oh,you want a grandson,don’t you?(開(kāi)始解圍裙)Goan dask your ’m leaving!(扯下圍裙,扔在焦母（JM）的臉上,下) Act2 (焦母（JM）坐在臺(tái)上打毛線劉蘭芝Luch拿著鍋鏟上) 劉蘭芝(Luch):Mum,I’m back! 焦母（JM）:You are back?Why?What happened? 劉蘭芝(Luch):I was kicked out by my most beautiful graceful and dearest mother–inlaw. 焦母（JM）(驚訝,但隨即露出幸災(zāi)樂(lè)禍的神情):See!I have already told you!When you insisted on marrying that terrible Johnny,I told you that he is ugly stupid and poor,but you did not listen to at yourself…… 劉蘭芝(Luch):But,mum…… 焦母（JM）:Never interrupt me! 劉蘭芝(Luch):Mum,I’m not interrupting just want to tell you that you are always right OK?And I’ll marry whom ever you want me to. 劉母Lunch’smother (大喜):Nice girl!Just now,I met the mayor’s son in the said:“If your daughter Haven’t been married,I really really want to marry her!”Now you are free again,I’ll go and tell him.(下) 劉蘭芝(Luch):What?The mayor’s son?The most famous play boy in the neighborhood?(手中的鍋 鏟掉在地上)What as illy thing I have done!(下) Act3 (焦仲卿Johnny睡眼惺忪上) 焦仲卿Johnny (邊走邊道):Lunch!Lunch!Where are my socks? (走了幾步,在地上撿起襪子)Here they are!(聞一下) Er!How smelly!They are still dirty! (突然想起)Lunch has gone!I have to wash them myself. (他的肚子似乎咕咕叫了起來(lái))Oh,I’m so hungry!But there’s no breakfast!(撿起地上的圍 裙)This is what Lunch always wears!I miss her so much,and her excellent cooking skill!Now she has have to cook for my mother and myself. 焦母（JM）:Where’s my breakfast?Where’s Lunch?Hasn’t she got up yet? 焦仲卿Johnny:Mum,can’t you remember?Lunch has gone! 焦母（JM）(沉吟片刻):Well,to tell you the truth Johnny,a son without a wifeis is an ice girl,go and take her back! 焦仲卿Johnny (立正敬禮):Yes madam! Act4 (焦仲卿Johnny開(kāi)心地走著，忽然跳出來(lái)三個(gè)強(qiáng)盜) A:Hey you!Stop and listen to us! The road is built by me!(抬腳重重地踩在一塊大石頭上) B:And I planted one tree!(亦抬腳踩在同一塊石頭上) C:If you want to go by this street(欲踩石頭，但踩到了A的腳) ABamp。C:Give us all your money! 焦仲卿Johnny (搜遍了每一個(gè)口袋，掏出1角硬幣):Is1 mao enough? (三強(qiáng)盜暈倒?fàn)睿又司墼谝贿吷塘? A:What bad luck!This guy is broken! B:If we can not robany money today,we will have nothing to eat tonight! C:I heard that the mayor’s son is going to marry Miss Liu Lan zhi next can go and rob the wedding! Aamp。C:Why?A pretty girl and a rich man,what a good couple! 焦仲卿Johnny:But Lunch is my wife!We haven’t got divorced yet! (突然有了主意)I’ve got an idea!You are going to rob the wedding,don’t you?I’ll go with take the money and I take the bride. B:Have you got any experience? 焦仲卿Johnny: I’ve got this!(J脫下鞋子從里面摸出一張支票，上書(shū)＄1，000，000) Act5 (轉(zhuǎn)眼已到了婚禮之期．太守之子意氣風(fēng)發(fā)用紅綢牽著新娘上，劉蘭芝Luch蓋著紅蓋頭極不情愿地被拉上臺(tái)) (焦仲卿Johnny和三強(qiáng)盜躍至臺(tái)中) ABCamp。根據(jù)要求作文。要求內(nèi)容充實(shí)，貼近生活；字?jǐn)?shù)不少于700字?！}記瑟瑟秋風(fēng)吹過(guò)，和著風(fēng)兒，一滴晶瑩飽滿的淚珠從她的臉頰劃過(guò)，滴落在楓葉上，將葉片打濕，快速地落向泥土。承受不了的刺激讓她再次墜入黑暗，再次回想起五年前的那次意外。淚珠混合著鮮紅的血液，“滴答”，“滴答”，落在幾乎鋪滿落葉的泥土。到學(xué)校后，她以優(yōu)異的成績(jī)奪得獎(jiǎng)學(xué)金，生活才有了著落。想著想著，痛苦的滋味又涌上心頭，忽然感覺(jué)背后有人拍她，猛地一轉(zhuǎn)身，竟然是老師。”“或許你可以和這片樹(shù)葉一樣融入這個(gè)世界。已是深秋，樹(shù)葉普遍開(kāi)始變黃。一