【正文】 s we Chinese hold is trying so hard to pick up the noodles that he is sweating a first glance, I think it’s a bit funny, for we Chinese take for granted that chopsticks are the tools for eating man in the picture is trying to copy he is doing it the hard using one fork will do a better job, In my opinion, we don’t need to copy others’ ways of a simpler way of doing things may be a better way.【名師點評】本文是開放性作文，要求考生把握好圖畫內容，發(fā)散表達。注意：詞數(shù)不少于60提示詞：郊區(qū) suburbsApril 12 is memorable because our class had a meaningful experience on that the morning, we bicycled to the suburbs to plant trees, talking and laughing all the arrival, we began to work were digging were carrying and planting young were getting the work done, we put up a board reminding people to protect the leaving we took some photos to record our green the lines of trees, we all had a sense of feel it’s our duty to protect and beautify our environment.【名師點評】本文是設計巧妙的提綱要點式作文，與環(huán)保結合，立意較好。英語能夠學到這種程度，不可謂不讓人佩服。比如說：my cup of tea, apart from that, oral English, last but not least, celebrities, catchy和trendy的大膽運用，list, can39。由于這篇作文的出現(xiàn)，導致了安徽省該年的英語作文分數(shù)普遍偏低。第三篇：全國高考英語滿分作文賞析（寫寫幫推薦）。 we did not do exercises, we wouldn’t be able to get good study ，我們的學習成績就不會很好。積累卡片 Ministry of Education advocates that we do exercises for one hour a day and can work healthily for 50 ，能夠健康地活50年。在句式使用上，作者用法多樣，使用了獨立結構和虛擬語氣，十分出彩。教育部——the Ministry of EducationGood afternoon, everyone,The national student sports program, waged by the Ministry of Education and aimed at improving students health, was held from 10：.~11: April 29，2007 in many primary and middle schools all over 11 million students in Jiangsu province participated in this Ministry of Education advocates that we do exercises for one hour a day and can work healthily for 50 whole life will be very my opinion, we senior high school students should do exercises for one hour a day even though our spare time is is a basic condition for our we did not do exercises, we wouldn’t be able to get good study every one of you, join the program now!Thank you!【名師點評】本文的結構十分明晰，同時句式使用得熟練而準確。發(fā)言稿的開頭和結尾已經寫好，不計入總詞數(shù)。注意：發(fā)言稿應包括以上所有信息，要有適當發(fā)揮。,句式準確【江蘇卷】【試題回放】2007年4月29日上午10點到11點，全國億萬學生陽光體育活動在各地大中小學校同時進行，江蘇省1，100萬學生積極參與了這項活動。好處：which引導限制性定語從句。作者對定語從句的使用恰到好處地修飾了文章，行文自然而通順，值得學習。Dear Amy,I’m Li Hua from Xinhua Middle School of ’m sorry to hear that you got the lung cancer which brought you great you should realize that you are young and have a promising great , stand up and fight against the disease!I’m sure you will is reported that the America anticancer association will donate three cents upon every fort letter you I will tell your situation to all my friends and ask them to write to that way, you will get enough money for you to be you can be well ,Li Hua[名師點評]本文依照要求，涵蓋了所有要點?！局貞c卷】【試題回放】據(jù)報道，7歲的美國女孩Amy Bruce得知自己身患肺癌(lung cancer)后處于極度的痛苦之中，美國抗癌協(xié)會(ACS)決定，每當Amy收到一封慰問信，就給她增加3美分的治療款。積累卡片英漢互譯好詞 好句All these services can bring great convenience to you and arevery ，并且非常的愉快。which引導的非限制性定語從句的使用也很正確。本文最大的特點是應用了很多比較復雜的句式，使文章比較出彩。以使行文連貫。：全天免費開放。熱水淋浴。：單人間(共20間)，100元/天。請你用英語為其 寫一篇文字介紹。積累卡片英漢互譯 ，快樂的 birth to ，生育好句I’d like to wish her a happy birthday and to express my thanks to you for your hard work, because of which Sulin and her parents are living a happy and healthy life in the ，正是你們的努力工作讓蘇琳和它的父母在美國過著幸福和健康的生活。文章行文活潑，感情真摯，語言表述準確，洋溢著作者因大熊貓得到精心照顧而對美方人員的感激之情，以及希望自己愿望成真，得到照片的希冀之情。開頭語已為你寫好。注意：詞數(shù)100左右。感謝工作人員。請根據(jù)以下要點給動物園工作人員寫一封信：自我介紹。【全國卷】【試題回放】假定你是李華，從小喜愛大熊貓(panda),一直通過有關網(wǎng)站(website)關注三年前在美國圣迭哥動物園出生的大熊貓“蘇琳”和她的母親“白云”?？忌攸c要看出這個人是卷發(fā)高鼻的外國人，要體會到西式刀叉對中式食物的矛盾性。文章思路清晰，要點連貫，在語言的表達上選詞新穎，同時運用了分詞短語作狀語等較好的句式表達?！颈本┚怼俊驹囶}回放】情景作文假設你是紅星中學高三一班的學生李華，為響應綠化祖國的號召，你班四月十二日去郊區(qū)植樹，請根據(jù)以下四幅圖的先后順序，介紹植樹活動的全過程，給某英文雜志的“綠色行動”專欄寫一篇以“Green Action in Our Class”為題的英文稿件。t wait to 簡直是perfect!況且文章中沒有一個錯誤，不管是書寫還是語法。仔細分析了這篇文章，寫的的確是好，很地道的美式英語，一些詞語的大膽使用，讓人不得不猜測此人或者是家人可能有過國外生活的經歷，否則這么地道標準的英語，可不是一朝一夕所能寫出來的。：欄目—columnDear ,I am very excited to learn that we are going to start a magazine sounds great!And I definitely agree with you on of the columns which you mentioned in the letter are really my cup of , “culture express” gives us a better understanding of the people from different parts of the world have different values, it’s necessary to learn from each will offer a wonderful from that, “blurt out” is pretty good for Chinese students to learn English idioms and improve oral but not least, “entertainment” is so cool!The popular singers, actors and celebrities are so catchy and attractive that you absolutely can’t miss it!Teenagers are just fond of the trendy , I can’t list really can’t wait to read that magazine!Yours faithfully,Li Hua【名師點評】這是一篇滿分作文。注意：。l 提出你喜歡的欄目。請你給她寫封回信，假如你是李華，美國一所友好學校準備與你們學校共同創(chuàng)辦一份中學生英文刊物，該校格林先生來信詢問有關情況。第二，本文沒有采用華麗的辭藻，但用詞十分恰當，段落過渡自然，令人耳目一新。注意：。表達地道【北京卷】【試題回放】第一節(jié)情景作文(20分)美國中學生jeff將要來你所在的紅星中學學習中文，經協(xié)商安排住在你家。We cannot account on always goes back on his 、廢話連篇beat one’s gums 誰喜歡坐在那里聽你的廢話連篇？Who would enjoy sitting there listening to your beating your gums?恩將仇報 bite the hand that feeds one 你難道不知道她是個恩將仇報的人？Don’t you know she’s the one that would bite the hand that feeds her?不忍心not have the heart to do 如果我是你，我可不忍心把孩子們就在家里沒人照看If I were you, I wouldn’t have the heart to leave the kids at home uncared 、勤快an eager beaver 他特別勤快，從來沒有閑著的時候。From the way she’s bowing and scraping in front of the boss, you’ll know what sort of person she 、瘋瘋癲癲go gaga 對他的話不要太在意了，他總是瘋瘋癲癲的。I’m really bored stiff with his sitting there doing nothing but 、等不及了 champ at the bit 咱們快點吧，孩子們都等不及了。Almost all people see that the grass is greener on the other never feel satisfied with what they’ve already 、上癮get into one’s blood說來也怪，很多不好的事往往會使人上癮。評析：虛擬語氣。評析：advocate，其后接虛擬語氣，可以省略情態(tài)動詞。復雜的句式是本文的特點之一。本文分為三段，前兩段敘述，后一段發(fā)表觀點，典型的作文結構。參考詞匯：陽光體育活動——a national student sports program。詞數(shù)：120左右。教育部倡導學生：u 每天鍛煉一小時u 健康工作五十年u 幸福生活一輩子請你根據(jù)以上提示，用英語準備一份發(fā)言