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d 八. 措詞毛病 (Troubles in Diction) Diction 是指在特定的句子中如何適當(dāng)?shù)剡x用詞語的問題,囿于教學(xué)時(shí)間緊迫,教師平時(shí)在這方面花的時(shí)間往往極其有限,影響了學(xué)生在寫作中沒有養(yǎng)成良好的推敲,斟酌的習(xí)慣。 例1. There are many ways we get to know the outside world. 剖析:這個(gè)句子包含了兩層完整的意思 :“ There are many ways.” 以及“ We get to know the outside world.”。這個(gè)句子可改為: Mary was friendly to my sister because she wanted my sister to be her bridesmaid. 例 1. And we can also know the society by serving it yourself. 剖析:句中人稱代詞 we 和反身代詞 yourself指代不一致。 ) 讀完上面這一句話,讀者無法明確地判斷兩位姑娘中誰將結(jié)婚,誰將當(dāng)伴娘。 改為: None can deny the importance of money. 六. 指代不清 (Ambiguous Reference of Pronouns) 指代不清主要講的是代詞與被指代的人或物關(guān)系不清,或者先后所用的代詞不一致。 一. 不一致( Disagreements) 所謂不一致不光指主謂不一致,它還包括了數(shù)的不一致,時(shí)態(tài)不一致及代詞不一致等. 例1. When one have money ,he can do what he want to . (