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ult, they find their academic records are less impressive. 4.(an army of, an ocean of, a sea of, a multitude of ,many,if not most)代替 many. 注:用 many, if not most 一定要小心, many后一定要有詞。 比如說(shuō): Other individuals, however, take the attitude that … 3. 一定要學(xué)會(huì)換詞,換形象,具體的代替太寬泛的。 高分作文標(biāo)志 1:高考 100詞左右;四級(jí) 120150字; 六級(jí) 150— 180字; 是否長(zhǎng)短句交叉; 用詞是否恰當(dāng),準(zhǔn)確,形象,盡量 使用能夠吸引閱卷老師眼球的閃光詞; 關(guān)鍵詞是否換用,切勿老用重復(fù)詞; 寫好一篇作文的注意事項(xiàng) ,這樣能更客觀的反映事實(shí) , 句子開頭不要總是用 we / I (比如寫結(jié)尾時(shí)不用 we should pay attention to而用 Attention should be paid to. )舉個(gè)經(jīng)典結(jié)尾 2020年六月六級(jí)作文的最后一段: It is ,therefore, high time that some applicable approaches were implemented by the service industry like that. Thus, its petitive edge will be sharpened effectively. ,比如說(shuō)把副詞、連接詞等,作插入語(yǔ)放在中間,一般放在主語(yǔ)、動(dòng)詞或者助動(dòng)詞后,兩邊分別加上逗號(hào)。 如 however / therefore /for example/I believe 做插入語(yǔ)放在中間,一般放在動(dòng)詞,助動(dòng)詞后,兩邊分別加上逗號(hào)。 (考試中一般不要出現(xiàn) good, bad , many, thing, think, people, opinion 等等 )比如上面例子中,applicable代替 proper, approaches代替 ways, implement代替 carry out, sharpen one’s petitive edge代替 enhance one’s petitiveness(提高某物競(jìng)爭(zhēng)力 ) Computer and I By Simmy I never fet the exceedin