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【正文】 from 17% to 23% while that of fruit and vegetables dropped from 24% to 20%. From 1989 to 1990, meat consumption dropped a little to 21%, while that of fruit and vegetables increased a little to 21%. 失分原因 1）圖表描述欠妥 冗長(zhǎng)，過細(xì) Through the chart, we easy to see difference in survey of ine of American and Chinese students. The American students get 50% of sources from parents, they get the parttime job 35% and the scholarship 15%. By contrast, the Chinese students from parents get 90% of sources, parttime job 5%, scholarship 5%. 不全面 未能點(diǎn)明要點(diǎn) 2）段落、句子邏輯 / 關(guān)聯(lián)詞的使用 The chart shows that ine sources of college students from parents is a large percentage and by contrast Chinese students’ percentage is lager than Americans. American students hope that they haven’t increase troubles for parents as more as possible. Also, the Chinese students think that their parents should pay moneys for them. First, America is a developed country. China is a developing country. 3）句子結(jié)構(gòu) Chinese students survey for 90% in parents. American students survey for 50% in parents. With the result that Chinese children’s ability drop it. Why such difference between American and Chinese students? It is what that causes the difference? It is lots of reasons that Chinese and American students have differents proportion of ine. also about the policy for education. American is richer than our country. 4）狀語(yǔ)的地位 狀語(yǔ)只是起修飾作用，修飾句子或動(dòng)詞，不能單獨(dú)成句。 第一季度第二季度第三季度第四季度020406080100第一季度 第三季度東部西部北部020406080100第一季度 第二季度 第三季度 第四季度東部西部北部圖表作文的常用句型 1. It can be seen from the chart / diagram / data / figures / graph / picture / statistics that … 2. According to/ As shown in/ As indicated by/ As can be seen in the chart/ figures/ graph, … 3. All these statistics (data, findings) clearly show( strongly prove, point to the fact, seem to suggest) that... 4. There is/ We notice/ People find a minimal/ slight/ small/ slow/ significant/ s
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