公四的圖表作文ppt課件-wenkub
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【正文】 food. They have more knowledge in improving the structure of their diet. From the above, we can draw a conclusion that our society is progressing and people are living a better life than ever before. We are now able to purchase more delicious and nutritious food, resulting in an improvement in our health. From the chart we can see that during the past five years there have been great changes in people’s diet. The greatest change occurs in grain consumption, which has dropped 4% from 49% in 1986 to 45% in 1990 in total food consumption. The second greatest change is in milk consumption, which increased from 10% in 1986 to 13% in 1990. But on the other hand, two trends can be observed in the consumption of meat and fruit and vegetables. From 1986 to 1989, meat consumption increased from 17% to 23% while that of fruit and vegetables dropped from 24% to 20%. From 1989 to 1990, meat consumption dropped a little to 21%, while that of fruit and vegetables increased a little to 21%. 失分原因 1）圖表描述欠妥 冗長，過細(xì) Through the chart, we easy to see difference in survey of ine of American and Chinese students. The American students get 50% of sources from parents, they get the parttime job 35% and the scholarship 15%. By contrast, the Chinese students from parents get 90% of sources, parttime job 5%, scholarship 5%. 不全面 未能點(diǎn)明要點(diǎn) 2）段落、句子邏輯 / 關(guān)聯(lián)詞的使用 The chart shows that ine sources of college students from parents is a large percentage and by contrast Chinese students’ percentage is lager than Americans. American students hope that they haven’t increase troubles for parents as more as possible. Also, the Chinese students think that their parents should pay moneys for them. First, America is a developed country. China is a developing country. 3）句子結(jié)構(gòu) Chinese students survey for 90% in parents. American students survey for 50% in parents. With the result that Chinese children’s ability drop it. Why such difference between American and Chinese students? It is wh
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