【正文】 【答案】I Expect My Senior High School LifeI hope my senior high school is beautiful with many trees and flowers. And I hope there are many classrooms and a library where I can read. I expect there is a dinning room in my new school .I will go there to eat some nice and healthy food with my new hope there is a big playground because I like doing some sports ,such as playing basketball,playing expect my school life is colorful ,and I can get on well with my classmates and my teachers,and we will make progress on our study .I will discuss learning goals and ways with my school,I hope to do afterclass activities in the free time. I hope these will e ture.【解析】這篇習(xí)作的層次清晰，內(nèi)容飽滿，表達流暢。語言通順，意思連貫，書寫規(guī)范，注意句子之間的銜接。四川中考模擬）書面表達。短文中較好的句式有More and more people have to go to see the doctor due to the serious diseases caused by the haze、People all over the country are taking measures to reduce the hazy weather now. 、The government suggests that people go to work or school by public transport, such as the bus and the subway、In addition, I will tell the people I meet to protect the 。短文中語言得體，句式表達符合英語的習(xí)慣。首先短文內(nèi)容完整，包含了題目中要求的所有信息，沒有遺漏要點；且文章結(jié)構(gòu)清晰，分成了三段，每一段的中心明確，意思表達清楚、明了。為提升文章檔次，可以穿插使用并列句和復(fù)合句；語句之間使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B接成分，使文意連貫，表達流暢。文章內(nèi)容中敘述的情況不一，時態(tài)不能統(tǒng)一，根據(jù)表達的需要使用正確的時態(tài)，注意謂語動詞的正確形式。首先介紹去年家鄉(xiāng)的霧霾情況嚴重；然后介紹為減少霧霾人們采取了一些措施；最后介紹一下你自己在日常生活中應(yīng)該怎么做。Dear Jack,I’m glad to receive your letter, and thank you for your caring for the weather and my health. Now I’d like to tell you something about the haze. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours,Li Ming【答案】Dear Jack,I’m glad to receive your letter, and thank you for your caring for the weather and my health. Now I’d like to tell you something about the haze.The hazy weather has occurred a lot of times in my hometown since last year. It was bad for our daily life. More and more people have to go to see the doctor due to the serious diseases caused by the haze. A great number of people have to stay at home .People all over the country are taking measures to reduce the hazy weather now. The government suggests that people go to work or school by public transport, such as the bus and the subway.As for me, I will go to school by bike or on foot. In addition, I will tell the people I meet to protect the environment. Would you like to tell me some good ideas? I’m looking forward to your reply.Yours,Li Ming【解析】【詳解】這篇作文要求我們以李明的身份給自己的英國筆友寫信，告訴他關(guān)于家鄉(xiāng)霧霾的情況。內(nèi)容如下：1. 由于大氣污染程度十分嚴重，去年已發(fā)生數(shù)次霧霾天氣；2. 人們已經(jīng)意識到霧霾天氣的危害，正在采取各種措施減少其發(fā)生；3. 你在日常生活中打算為此做些什么。廣東中考模擬）書面表達假如你是李明，你的英國筆友Jack來信詢問你的家鄉(xiāng)是否有霧霾天氣，情況如何。這樣的話，文章符合英文造句習(xí)慣，更容易獲得高分?！军c睛】本篇作文貼近實際，每個人都有第一次，挑選一件自己有話可說的來寫即可?！驹斀狻勘疚膶懥宋业牡谝淮巫鲲垼冉淮尘爸R，因為父母不在家，所以我不得不自己動手，動手做的過程中，由于沒有經(jīng)驗，理所當(dāng)然地失敗了。t know how to cook them I put too much salt into the cabbages. So they tasted too salty. I had to throw them away. But I didn39。不少于80詞。吉林省實驗中考模擬）（B） 《朗讀者》第五期節(jié)目中，主持人在開場白中說道：“我們的一生，會經(jīng)歷很多的第一次，難忘而又寶貴，它意味著我們的成長。這一步我們除了檢查短文的各種錯誤外，還要檢查語法結(jié)構(gòu)是否合理，有無重復(fù)、啰嗦的語言，大小寫是否正確，格式是否正確，詞數(shù)是否符合要求等。修改潤色。使用的詞語、短語及句型盡量用自己有把握的詞。初寫短文。有了提綱，我們就可以根據(jù)提綱和主題確定相關(guān)的寫作材料。審題時要注意試題的要求，抓住要點，詞數(shù)符合要求?！军c睛】寫作時可以從以下幾個方面做起：認真審題。亮點說明：這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，很好的完成了試題規(guī)定的任務(wù)，語言表達符合英語習(xí)慣，準確運用時態(tài)、主謂一致，特別適用一些亮點詞句，如because of，be sent to, it is adj for sb to do sth, make friends, in a red dress, last, till now以及spend with等。A person who impressed me a lot 【答案】There were so many people in our memory. Some went lost while some impressed us deeply. Now, I want to introduce the one who impressed me a lot.Five years ago, I was a primary school student. My family had to move to another city because of my father’s work. I was sent to a new and strange school. I was not an outgoing girl, so it was not easy for me to make new friends. When I felt lonely and sad, a little girl in a red dress came to me. She asked me if I needed any help in a soft and beautiful voice. I was surprised but happy. We became good friends and our friendship has lasted till now. The time I spent with her was the best hours in my life. I believe she will be my friend throughout my life.【解析】【詳解】本文屬于話題作文，描述一位給你留下深刻印象的人物。2. 文中不得出現(xiàn)真實的學(xué)校，姓名等個人信息。請以 “A person who impressed me a lot” 為題寫一篇英語作文，描述一位給你留下深刻印象的人物。同學(xué)們，從小到大，會有很多不同的人物伴隨著你成長，他們可能是你的家人、老師、朋友、同學(xué)……甚至是路人。8．（【高分句型二】It will also affect the future selfconfidence building, which also leads to more worrying children, which forms a vicious circle affecting parentchild relationship. 這也會影響未來的自信心建設(shè)，也會導(dǎo)致更多的擔(dān)憂兒童，形成影響親子關(guān)系的惡性循環(huán)。寫作中適當(dāng)使用連詞，注意上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關(guān)系，表達具有條理性。寫作時，避免使用漢語式的英語，盡量使用我們熟悉的句子或短語。時態(tài)為一般現(xiàn)在時，人稱為第一人稱。t think so. When children find themselves under surveillance, how can they confide in us in the future? It will also affect the future selfconfidence building, which also leads to more worrying children, which forms a vicious circle affecting parentchild relationship. In any case, family environment is the root of children, but first of all, it must be stable and reliable. In this way, monitoring children39。s study and makes him respond strongly. From a child39。s mother wanted to keep watch on Tony39。請簡要描述圖片內(nèi)容，分析圖中現(xiàn)象，談?wù)勀愕目捶ê徒ㄗh，并寫一篇 110 詞左右的短文向Parents 雜志投稿，讓父母們通過閱讀你的文章有所啟發(fā)。