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I will send you some photos next time. Take care!YoursMax【答案】Dear Simon,Thanks for your . I39。Dear Simon,Thanks for your . I39。,可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮,使全文連貫、通順。m interested in your life in Suzhou. Would you please tell me the following information?Is everything OK with the school you study in?What are your English classes like?Is there anything interesting in Suzhou?Do you enjoy your life in Suzhou? Why or why not?Looking forward to hearing from you.Best wishesYours,Simon注意:。To: maxbritainFrom: simonbritainSubject: Life in SuzhouDear Max,How are you? I haven39。江蘇中考模擬)書面表達假如你是在蘇州學(xué)習(xí)的英國交流學(xué)生Max,你的英國同學(xué)Simon給你寫了一封電子郵件,想了解你在蘇州的學(xué)習(xí)和生活情況。s a good idea to talk with your classmates in Chinese、I think it can help you to improve your pronunciation、In a word, if you have good ways of learning Chinese, you will learn it 。文章中的語句以簡單句結(jié)構(gòu)為主,也使用了并列句和復(fù)合句,調(diào)整了文章的結(jié)構(gòu)。其次短文使用了正確的時態(tài)和人稱,句式結(jié)構(gòu)符合英語的表達習(xí)慣。文章主要分成三個部分:第一段是與Sam之間的問候以及引出Sam學(xué)習(xí)漢語這一話題,并介紹寫信的目的;第二段中是提出的具體的建議,這是這篇文章的主體,所在篇幅最大?!军c睛】這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文,短文作者根據(jù)題目要求給Sam寫了一封信,對他的漢語學(xué)習(xí)提出了一些好的建議。為提升文章檔次,可以穿插使用并列句或復(fù)合句以及其他一些復(fù)雜句式。應(yīng)從句子的整體結(jié)構(gòu)考慮,寫完整的句子。文章應(yīng)使用一般現(xiàn)在時,根據(jù)表達需要使用恰當(dāng)?shù)娜朔Q。d better read Chinese magazines or newspapers after class. You can also watch Chinese programmes on the Internet. I think it can help you to improve your pronunciation. Lastly, you can write s to me or other Chinese friends in Chinese.In a word, if you have good ways of learning Chinese, you will learn it well.Yours,Daming【解析】【詳解】這篇作文要求我們以大明的身份給Sam寫一封信,告訴他如何學(xué)好漢語,題目中從四個方面提出了建議。s a good idea to talk with your classmates in Chinese. And don39。m happy to hear from you. I know you want to learn Chinese well. Here are some suggestions._____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________In a word,if you have good ways of learning Chinese ,you will learn it well.YoursDaming【答案】Dear Sam,I39。,不計人總詞數(shù)。,以使行文連貫。,與同學(xué)們用中文交流。假如你是大明,請你根據(jù)以下提示寫一封郵件給他,提一些關(guān)于如何學(xué)好漢語的建議。安徽中考模擬)近來,美國總統(tǒng)特朗普的外孫女由于說一口流利的中文而成為“網(wǎng)紅”。短文中較好的句型和短語有:I will never forget how proud I felt when I succeeded in making delicious dishes for my mother.、To show my love for my mother, I decided to cook some dishes for her on her birthday、Especially when making fried eggs, I couldn’t control the temperature of oil and got several eggs burned、Watching the delicious food on the table, my mother was moved to tears等。其次短文里使用了正確的時態(tài)和人稱,文章以一般過去時、第一人稱敘述,注意了謂語動詞過去式的變化,尤其是不規(guī)則動詞的過去式。文章分三段,第一段用一句話引出話題;第二段詳細描寫了事情的過程;最后一段寫了自己的感受?!军c睛】這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文,短文作者根據(jù)題目要求描述了自己做過的一件引以為豪的事情?;蚴褂闷硎咕?、非謂語動詞、感嘆句等特殊句式結(jié)構(gòu)。寫作時應(yīng)注意英語表達習(xí)慣和漢語是不同的,不能按照漢語思維逐詞翻譯,寫漢語式的英語,應(yīng)從句子的整體結(jié)構(gòu)出發(fā),使用較常見、易于把握的簡單句結(jié)構(gòu),如主謂賓或主系表結(jié)構(gòu)。審題可知,體裁是記敘文,記敘一件自己做過的事情,且是能讓自己感到自豪的,故文章應(yīng)使用一般過去時,人稱以第一人稱為主。 【答案】One thing I felt very proud ofI will never forget how proud I felt when I succeeded in making delicious dishes for my mother.To show my love for my mother, I decided to cook some dishes for her on her birthday. I tried many times but failed before she came back. Especially when making fried eggs, I couldn’t control the temperature of oil and got several eggs burned. However, I didn’t give up, and finally I succeeded. Watching the delicious food on the table, my mother was moved to tears. I felt proud of cooking on my own.【解析】【詳解】這篇作文要求我們以O(shè)ne thing I felt very proud of為題,介紹自己曾經(jīng)做過的一件令自己感到自豪的事情。請以O(shè)ne thing I felt very proud of 為題用英語寫以寫一篇短文,描述你曾經(jīng)做過得引以自豪一件事情。河南中考模擬)“苔花如米小,也學(xué)牡丹開。 (5)注意檢查:單詞拼寫、語法、動詞時態(tài)、語序、主謂一致等。注意表達的順序。(2)列好提綱和要點及需要的重要短語或句型。要學(xué)以致用。【點睛】書面表達題要求將所規(guī)定的材料內(nèi)容經(jīng)整理后展開思維,考查運用所學(xué)英語知識準確表達意思的能力。最后我原諒了他。他給我打了好幾次電話,向我道歉。我生邁克的氣是因為他傷害了我的感情。他把音樂會的一切都忘了。我等了很長時間,但邁克最終沒有出現(xiàn)。兩個月前,邁克邀請我七點鐘去聽音樂會。寫完以后,注意再讀一遍,看看有無單詞拼寫、標點、語法錯誤(時態(tài)、主謂一致等)。要運用合適的連接詞或過渡詞,使文章具有連貫性。短文必須包含提示問題和提示詞。本文人稱主要第一人稱,時態(tài)主要是一般過去時。t show up in the end. I called him and asked him what happened. He forgot all about the concert. He was playing puter games at home at that time.I got angry with Mike because he hurt my feelings. Mike also realized his mistake. He called me several times and said sorry to me. He even sent me a present to make me happy. Finally I forgave him. After forgiving him, I felt relaxed and happy.【解析】【詳解】這是一篇話題作文,請用英語寫一篇短文談?wù)勆钪心阍徦说囊淮谓?jīng)歷,主要內(nèi)容包括: 你們之間發(fā)生了什么,你為什么原諒了對方,以及原諒對方之后的感受。提示詞語:forgive原諒提示問題:What happened between you and him/her?Why did you decide to forgive him/her?How did you feel after forgiving him/her?I still remember what happened between ...【答案】I still remember what happened between my friend Mike and me. Two months ago, Mike invited me to go to a concert at seven o39。字數(shù)80字左右。福建中考模擬)寬容是一種美德,人與人之間難免會有磕磕絆絆,面對矛盾,多一份包容和諒解,生活 就會多一縷陽光。我愿意幫助別人。第二部分:具體介紹三年中最難忘的經(jīng)歷:別人幫助我的經(jīng)歷。提示詞語: three years, memories, one of, one day, think, happy/ sorry____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________