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ave energy;brush our teeth;put it into different bins;take action;make a big difference。提示詞語: pollution, protect, save, recycle, take action提示問題:● What are the main environmental problems we have?● What can we do in our daily life? ● What’s your wish?Now there are many environmental 【答案】例文Now there are many environmental problems. Such as air pollution, water pollution and so on.I believe that there are many things we can do in our daily life, we can save energy by go to school by bike or on foot. We can use less water by turning off the tap while we brush our teeth, and taking shorter showers. When we see litter on the ground, we must pick it up and put it into different bins. I hope everyone can take action. Although each one of us may only do a little, together we can make a big difference. Let’s work together to make a better place to live.【解析】【詳解】題干解讀:該題目屬于說明文寫作,寫作時(shí)要把我們面臨的主要環(huán)境問題是什么,為改善環(huán)境我們能做什么,以及你的期望全部包括。某英文網(wǎng)站正在開展以“Going Green”為主題的征文活動(dòng)。此處want to do sth, invite sb to, let sb do sth, at the gate of等這些詞組的運(yùn)用也讓文章增色不少。點(diǎn)睛:本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊,語言簡(jiǎn)練。寫作中注意運(yùn)用代詞,注意多種句式交替運(yùn)用。提示詞語:Laoshe Teahouse, drink tea, Peking Opera, magic shows, gate提示問題:Where are you going?What will you do there?When and where will you meet?【答案】Hi, Lucy! I know you like Chinese traditional culture. I want to invite you to Laoshe Teahouse this Saturday morning. We are going to drink tea, watch magic shows, enjoy Peking Opera, and eat Chinese traditional food in Laoshe Teahouse. We can experience Chinese traditional culture there. Let’s meet at the gate of Laoshe Teahouse at 8:30, OK? See you.【解析】這是一篇給材料作文,我通過微信告訴Lucy要去哪,在那里要做什么以及何時(shí)何地見面。周末你和父母商議后,打算邀請(qǐng)她去老舍茶館。m sure that nothing can beat me and I will win!等等。短文中使用了較豐富的句型,如When I was in the seventh grade, I always had difficulty in learning English.、My English teacher encouraged me to continue to study and told me some good ways to study it.、I found when I put my heart into it, English didn’t’ seem that difficult、In the future, I won39。其次短文使用了正確的時(shí)態(tài)和人稱,短文主要使用了一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)和一般過去時(shí),動(dòng)詞形式變化準(zhǔn)確,尤其注意了不規(guī)則動(dòng)詞的過去式形式,語法規(guī)范,用詞準(zhǔn)確。各部分內(nèi)容安排合理,層次清晰。【點(diǎn)睛】這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文,短文作者根據(jù)題目要求,寫了一篇演講稿。句式結(jié)構(gòu)可以簡(jiǎn)單句為主,穿插并列句或復(fù)合句。其次要注意英語的表達(dá)習(xí)慣和漢語是不同的,不能按照漢語思維,逐詞翻譯。短文應(yīng)以一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)和一般過去時(shí)為主,注意謂語動(dòng)詞的正確形式。題目中用問題的形式給出了提示,審題可知,文章應(yīng)包括以下內(nèi)容:首先敘述你生活中遇到的一件困難的事;然后介紹你是如何克服了這個(gè)困難,最后取得成功的;最后說一下你自己的感受。t be afraid of the difficulties in my life and I39。(3)詞數(shù)80個(gè)左右(開頭和結(jié)尾已給出, 不計(jì)入總詞數(shù))。提示:(1)What was the event?(2)How did you make it?(3)What’s your feeling?要求:(1)發(fā)言稿中須包括所有提示內(nèi)容, 可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。增強(qiáng)邏輯關(guān)系,增加上下文意思連貫,句子通順,行文連貫。(多數(shù)學(xué)生的觀點(diǎn)、男生的觀點(diǎn)、女生的觀點(diǎn))?!军c(diǎn)睛】本文首先開篇功能句Thank you for your ,運(yùn)用多種連接詞,比如because,Besides,To realize my dream, 等使文章連貫性強(qiáng),長(zhǎng)短句結(jié)合,讀起來朗朗上口,不失為一篇佳作。為了實(shí)現(xiàn)自己的夢(mèng)想,正在為此作出努力?!驹斀狻渴紫然卮鹇殬I(yè)是教師。Dear Bill,Thank you for your letter. I am glad to tell you about my dream job. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,Li Hua【答案】例文Thank you for your letter. I am glad to tell you about my dream job. Teaching is my dream job because I would like to share my knowledge with my students and help them solve problems. I am outgoing and helpful. I get on well with children. Besides, the school39。請(qǐng)認(rèn)真閱讀下面的郵件, 根據(jù)信中的內(nèi)容和你的實(shí)際情況給他寫封回信。所以,考生不能遺漏要點(diǎn),要盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞、短語和句式,盡可能使用高級(jí)詞匯和較復(fù)雜的句式結(jié)構(gòu)以便得到較高的分?jǐn)?shù)。點(diǎn)睛:書面表達(dá)題既不是漢譯英,也不是可任意發(fā)揮的作文