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ent to work on foot or by bike. But now, there are many tall buildings in our hometown. We can see the clean river and the clear water . Even we can see fish in the water. There are many wide and clean roads. Our life is better and better The environment around us is more and more fortable. People usually go to work by bus or by car.I am glad to see these great changes in my hometown. But I think it’s still important to remember the past. It tells that we should cherish the present life.【解析】【詳解】亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明:這篇習(xí)作的層次清晰,內(nèi)容飽滿,表達(dá)流暢。還要注意句子的關(guān)聯(lián)。寫(xiě)作時(shí)要注意遣詞造句,不能受漢語(yǔ)的影響,要用地道的英語(yǔ)表達(dá),注意時(shí)態(tài),語(yǔ)態(tài),單詞拼寫(xiě),語(yǔ)法等問(wèn)題,用好簡(jiǎn)單句,適當(dāng)用復(fù)雜句。參考詞匯: 對(duì)某人微笑 smile at sb. 誤解 misunderstand短文必須包括所有內(nèi)容要點(diǎn),不要逐字翻譯,可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮,使短文連貫通順。給別人帶來(lái)快樂(lè),自己也快樂(lè)。有益于身心健康。學(xué)會(huì)對(duì)自己微笑面對(duì)困難與煩惱學(xué)會(huì)微笑(考試失利、被別人誤解等)。此處give sb sth, work hard, grow up, want to do sth, live a …life等這些詞組的運(yùn)用也讓文章增色不少。點(diǎn)睛:本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊,語(yǔ)言簡(jiǎn)練。寫(xiě)作中注意運(yùn)用代詞,注意多種句式交替運(yùn)用。Make a list of the persons that you should give a “l(fā)ike” buttonTell us one of the experiences that you clicked a “l(fā)ike” buttonWhat could you learn from him/her? 【答案】I should give my uncle a “l(fā)ike” button. He is very tall and very strong. He punishes the bad people and protect the good people. He always helps others. He is my hero. He works I grow up, I want to be a policeman like my uncle. I want to help people and protect them, so they can live a safe life.【解析】這是一篇給材料作文,講述一件我點(diǎn)贊的事情,我從他/她身上可以學(xué)到什么。你從他/她身上可以學(xué)到什么?讓我們一起分享吧!請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下提示要點(diǎn),寫(xiě)一篇文章。但很多人缺乏的不是感動(dòng),而是一種顯示感動(dòng)的勇氣。4.書(shū)面表達(dá)社會(huì)需要愛(ài),時(shí)代呼喚愛(ài)。開(kāi)頭介紹了我的個(gè)人情況,接下來(lái)介紹我們的校園,老師和同學(xué),最后對(duì)學(xué)校、老師、同學(xué)表達(dá)感謝和祝福。寫(xiě)作中注意敘述順序,符合邏輯關(guān)系。【詳解】結(jié)合所給材料,可知本文主要考查一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)和一般將來(lái)時(shí),人稱(chēng)為第一,三人稱(chēng),注意主謂一致問(wèn)題,句子結(jié)構(gòu)主要為系表結(jié)構(gòu)和動(dòng)賓結(jié)構(gòu),注意一些常見(jiàn)句式的應(yīng)用,比如:My name is……,I’m glad to……,Our campus is……,Our teachers teach us……等句式的應(yīng)用。 。、老師、同學(xué)表達(dá)感謝和祝福。請(qǐng)以 My junior high school life為題,寫(xiě)一篇80詞左右的短文。在寫(xiě)作中注意運(yùn)用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞,使文章更加順暢,自然。人稱(chēng)為第一,三人稱(chēng),注意主謂一致關(guān)系,構(gòu)思文章框架,列舉出可能會(huì)用到的好詞好句,記住千萬(wàn)不能漏寫(xiě)信息要點(diǎn)。 Boys and girls,I’m very happy to speak here and I’d like to talk about my grandma._____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________That’s all. Thank you!【答案】Boys and girls,I’m very happy to speak here and I’d like to talk about my grandma.A few months ago, my grandma went to do square dancing after supper. Since then, she has been in love with square dancing. Now, she is much healthier than before. What’smore, she has a lot of friends. However, some neighbors have a plaint against the people who do square dancing. They think that the music is so loud that they can’t fall asleep at night.In my opinion, people can do square dancing because it is a good way to keep healthy. But they should