【正文】 表達清楚，語法正確，上下文連貫； 2）必須包括表格中所有的相關信息，并適當發(fā)揮； 3）詞數(shù)：100詞左右（短文的開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)）；4）不得使用真實姓名、校名和地名等。每年統(tǒng)計兩次鳥兒的數(shù)量，以研究鳥兒在數(shù)量方面的變化?；厩闆r張陽，陽光中學九年級二班學生興趣愛好1. 喜歡閱讀。此處turn out , by no means, help sb do sth, grow up, let sb do sth, make mistakes, of one’s own等這些詞組的運用也讓文章增色不少。點睛：本文結構緊湊，語言簡練。寫作中注意運用代詞，注意多種句式交替運用。 advice. More importantly,let her live like a lovely girl；let herhave more friends and social activities；and let her make mistakes of her own as the teenagers often do.【解析】這是一篇給材料作文，對學生家長的博客進行回復。3. 提出至少2條建議。 I’m the mother of a fourteenyear –old . I have a rule for my daughter :be among the top of 5 students or get punished in one way or another . She has been doing very well in school ,but some of my friends keep telling me that I put too much pressure on her .Am I wrong ? 寫作要點：1. 表明自己的看法。4． 寫作假定你是李華，在一位名叫Tiger Mom的學生家長的博客上，你看到以下內(nèi)容。它要求將所規(guī)定的材料內(nèi)容經(jīng)整理后展開思維，考查運用所學英語知識準確表達意思的能力。在學習中注意總結牢記一些固定句式及短語，寫作時就可以適當引用，使文章表達更有邏輯性，也更富有條理。m going to graduate from junior high school. As your senior, I have some suggestions to the young.As old saying goes, all work and no play makes Jack a dull boy. To begin with, you should arrange both your study and life properly.Moreover, you should get along well with others. To have more friends, not enemies.Last but not least, you could be active in school team work. Ability is as important as your study, you can also enjoy your colorful school life as wellI hope these suggestions could make your junior schoollife more wonderful.【解析】【詳解】這篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短語，為文章增色不少，如be going to，graduate from，to begin with，both…and，get along well with others，be active in，as important as，as well等。100 詞左右。你馬上就要畢業(yè)了，在初中的學習和生活中你一定有很多收獲，請給學弟學妹們提幾點建議吧！要求：1. 內(nèi)容完整，語言流暢，書寫規(guī)范清晰。這里Protecting the environment 做主語，用的是動詞的ing形式。這里had better表示最好，后面跟動詞原形，take a bus表示乘公共汽車。寫作中適當使用連詞，注意上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關系，表達具有條理性。寫作時，避免使用漢語式的英語，盡量使用我們熟悉的句子或短語。時態(tài)為一般現(xiàn)在時。s more, we had better walk or take a bus. Protecting the environment is our duty. Everyone should play a part in saving the earth.【解析】【詳解】這是一篇材料作文，根據(jù)材料中的相關信息介紹一下整個國家的空氣污染狀況。s activities are also the sources of air pollution such as throwing the rubbish and smoking. What39。（2） 文中不能出現(xiàn)自己的姓名和所在學校的名稱。（至少寫2點）（3）減少空氣污染的措施。要點提示：（1）我國空氣污染的現(xiàn)象。2．近年來，各大城市霧霾（haze）情況越來越嚴重，整個國家的空氣污染狀況令人擔憂?！军c睛】本文要求以“Bikesharing”為題，根據(jù)表格的內(nèi)容提示，寫一篇短文，表達自己對共享單車的看法和建議。s known that it has many advantages.，F(xiàn)irst of all, it39。s health.（優(yōu)勢） However, it also brings some problems. For example, some people throw them away after using bikes. Even some people damage them, and some bikes are stolen.（難題） In my opinion, everyone should try to be civilized and follow the rules of using bikes. As long as we take good care of bikes, it will make our life better and better,and our environment will be more beautiful.【高分句型二】（建議）【解析】【詳解】這篇短文內(nèi)容豐富，表達了所有要點，語言表達準確，意思連貫，符合邏輯。s very convenient for people to go somewhere.【高分句型一】Also, it helps to reduce the traffic pressure. There will be less pollution because of bikesharing. Besides, bikesharing helps people take more this way, it39。s known that it has many advantages. So it39。要點提示：AdvantagesBe convenient, less pollution, reduce the traffic pres