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eekend HouseworkI was busy last weekend. I did housework all the day. In the morning, I cooked breakfast. To be honest, I like cooking very much. Because cooking meals is very interesting. I can do what I want. After breakfast, I went to the store and bought some food for the family. I like doing the shopping. I think it’s fun. Then I swept the floor and took out the rubbish. I didn’t do the laundry and the dishes. I don’t like do any washing. In the afternoon, I cleaned my bedroom. I hate cleaning my room .It is boring and tiring. In the evening, I folded my clothes and made my bed. I think it was a busy weekend.【解析】【詳解】這篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短語,為文章增色不少,如all the day,in the morning,to be honest,like cooking,very much,after breakfast,go to the store,do the shopping,take out,do some washing,make my bed等。陜西師大附中中考模擬)書面表達(dá)以“My Weekend Housework”為題,寫一篇短文,談一談上星期天你做過的家務(wù)活,并介紹你喜歡做的家務(wù)活和不喜歡做的家務(wù)活,并談?wù)勀阕黾覄?wù)的感受。增強(qiáng)邏輯關(guān)系,增加上下文意思連貫,用詞準(zhǔn)確,句子通順,行文連貫。根據(jù)要表達(dá)的內(nèi)容確定并準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài),上下文意思連貫,符合邏輯,可適當(dāng)增加內(nèi)容。留下你的電話,以便旅行社和你聯(lián)系。黑龍江中考模擬)假如你是吳浩,你的父母打算春節(jié)期間帶你和妹妹去北京?!军c(diǎn)睛】點(diǎn)睛:首先認(rèn)真審題,看清題目中的要求和要點(diǎn);然后根據(jù)提示內(nèi)容,列出寫作要點(diǎn)及每個(gè)要點(diǎn)中可能要用到的表達(dá);然后緊扣要點(diǎn),動(dòng)筆寫作,在寫作過程中,要注意句與句、段與段之間的過渡,必要時(shí)可適當(dāng)運(yùn)用表示轉(zhuǎn)折、因果、并列、比較等關(guān)系的連詞,使文章過渡平穩(wěn),自然流暢;最后,要仔細(xì)檢查有無單詞拼寫錯(cuò)誤、標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)誤用等,還要檢查語法結(jié)構(gòu)是否合理,有無重復(fù)、啰嗦的語言,大小寫是否正確,詞數(shù)是否符合要求等。同時(shí)要注意語言的表述應(yīng)該符合語法的結(jié)構(gòu),造句應(yīng)該符合英語的表達(dá)習(xí)慣;盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式,最好不要寫太長的復(fù)合句;盡量選取簡單的易拼寫的單詞,確保正確率;詞匯、句式要豐富多樣,可以為文章增色添彩。動(dòng)筆前要認(rèn)真閱讀材料,不可遺漏要點(diǎn),并可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。文章時(shí)態(tài)用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí),人稱主要為第一人稱。It’s good to get up earlyGetting up early is a good habit. It’s good for us in many ways.______________________________________________________________________________【答案】It’s good to get up earlyGetting up early is a good habit. It’s good for us in many ways. Firstly ,we can have enough time to plan a day better .Secondly,doing exercise is good for our health .Also, breathing the fresh air is good to our bodies and our moods, and it can help remember important things easily. Thirdly, having breakfast can help protect our stomachs ,make us have good health ,and have more energy to do all kinds of things better. In a word, the morning is the key of a day. Everyone should get up early every day.【解析】【詳解】本文是一篇話題作文。3. 詞數(shù)90詞左右。要求:1. 包含所給信息,并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。同學(xué)們,沐浴在晨光中,行走在上學(xué)路上,當(dāng)我們有充足的時(shí)間安排一天的學(xué)習(xí)生活時(shí),你會(huì)發(fā)現(xiàn)每天早起一點(diǎn)點(diǎn)會(huì)給我們帶來許多好處。9.(最后短文中句式結(jié)構(gòu)文章,符合英語的表達(dá)習(xí)慣,簡單句、并列句、復(fù)合句交替應(yīng)用,文章富有節(jié)奏的變化。作者觀點(diǎn)明確,理由充分。短文有以下幾個(gè)優(yōu)點(diǎn):首先短文內(nèi)容符合題目要求,作者通過觀察圖片,正確了解了圖片傳達(dá)的信息,確定了文章的中心。同時(shí)語句之間使用恰當(dāng)?shù)你暯映煞?,使文意連貫、自然。句式結(jié)構(gòu)可以簡單句為基礎(chǔ),穿插并列句或復(fù)合句結(jié)構(gòu)。其次要注意英語句式表達(dá)習(xí)慣和漢語是不同的,不能根據(jù)漢語思維逐詞翻譯,寫漢語式的英語。短文應(yīng)主要使用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)和一般過去時(shí),第三人稱來敘述,注意謂語動(dòng)詞的正確形式。首先學(xué)生們應(yīng)仔細(xì)觀察圖片,了解圖片中發(fā)生的場景,弄清楚它主要想傳達(dá)的意思,然后用英語將這些內(nèi)容表達(dá)出來。 寫作要求:1. 可以根據(jù)圖片信息,進(jìn)行適當(dāng)?shù)陌l(fā)揮;2. 短文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的人名、校名等相關(guān)信息。小林和小剛之間的對話,讓你 想到了什么?請根據(jù)你對圖片的理解,用英語寫一篇 100 詞左右的短文。8.(亮點(diǎn)說明:這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文,很好地完成了試題規(guī)定的任務(wù),語言表達(dá)符合英語習(xí)慣,準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài),主謂一致,特別使用一些亮點(diǎn)詞句,如get together,enjoy the full moon, share our stories等。m glad to hear from you. Now let me introduce the MidAutumn Festival to you. The MidAutumn Festival falls on the 15th of the 8th lunar month. It’s a big day for us Chinese people. All the family members get together to celebrate the festival. In the evening, we usually have a big dinner. And then we go outside and enjoy the full moon. The moon that night looks the brightest. With the beautiful moon up in the sky, we sit together to eat mooncakes, and share our stories.For me, the best part is to enjoy the moon and eat mooncakes. Mooncakes taste very delicious. They look like the moon, big and round.Yours,Li Hua【解析】【詳解】本篇寫作是以書信的方式向筆友介紹中國的傳統(tǒng)節(jié)日中秋節(jié),要用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)來寫。Dear Jessica, I39。內(nèi)容須包含以下所有要點(diǎn):1. 中秋節(jié)的時(shí)間;2. 中秋節(jié)的傳統(tǒng)習(xí)俗及慶祝方式:全家人一起吃飯, 賞月, 吃月餅等;3, 我最期待的活動(dòng)。安徽中考模擬)李華的英國筆友Jessica來信說, 她想了解中國的傳統(tǒng)節(jié)日中秋節(jié)。注意上下文之間的邏輯關(guān)系,語意連貫。動(dòng)筆前先要認(rèn)真閱讀要點(diǎn),圍繞要點(diǎn)組織材料,然后用正確的英語句子把這些內(nèi)容表達(dá)出來,在此基礎(chǔ)上亦可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮,注意不要遺漏材料中給出的要點(diǎn)。參考要點(diǎn): 1保護(hù)自然,如:綠色低碳出行, 減少污染……2美化自然,如:讓天更藍(lán)山更綠水更清……3呼吁人人參與,從身邊小事做起,如:適度節(jié)約,拒絕浪費(fèi)……;做到人與自然的和諧。山東中考模擬)書面表達(dá)4月28日,國家主席習(xí)近平在北京延慶出席年中國北京世界園藝博覽會(huì)開幕式,提出綠色發(fā)展“五個(gè)追求”(fivepoint initiative on green development),為全球生態(tài)文明建設(shè)貢獻(xiàn)中國智慧。在寫作過程中,要注意句與句、段與段之間的過渡,必要時(shí)可適當(dāng)運(yùn)用表示轉(zhuǎn)折、因果、并列、比較等關(guān)系的連詞,使文章過渡平穩(wěn),自然流暢;最后,要仔細(xì)檢查有無單詞拼寫錯(cuò)誤、標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)誤用等,還要檢查語法結(jié)構(gòu)是否合理,有無重復(fù)、啰嗦的語言,大小寫是否正確,詞數(shù)是否符合要求等。寫作思路:考生需要首先審清主題,圍繞主題展開作文,其次考生可根據(jù)表格中的要點(diǎn)提示去寫作。 wonderful performances. Wang Li from Grade 8 won the first prize. She has a real gift for reciting .Each winner won a free ticket for the book show.I hope more people will take part in this activity and enjoy the beautiful Chinese culture【解析】【詳解】本題是一篇給材料作文,介紹“中華詩詞朗誦比賽”活動(dòng)情況并呼吁更多的人參與這樣的活動(dòng)。m Li Hua from Sunshine Middle School. Our school... 【答案】I39。天賦gift。 高度評價(jià)think highly of 。呼吁參與的理由......(自擬1到2點(diǎn))注意事項(xiàng):(1)須包括所給內(nèi)容要點(diǎn),要求語句通順、行文連貫作、適當(dāng)發(fā)揮;(2)詞數(shù)在80個(gè)左右,文稿的開頭已給出,不計(jì)入總詞數(shù);參考詞匯:中華詩詞朗誦比賽 Chinese Poetry Reciting Competition。她極具朗誦天賦。同學(xué)們的精彩表現(xiàn)得到了大家的高度評價(jià)?;顒?dòng)介紹每學(xué)期舉辦一次。天津中考模擬)假如你是陽光中學(xué)的李華,你校成功舉辦了“中華詩詞朗誦比賽”,請用英語寫一篇短文,介紹活動(dòng)情況并呼吁更多的人參與這樣的活動(dòng)。這一步我們除了檢查短文的各種錯(cuò)誤外,還要檢查語法結(jié)構(gòu)是否合理,有無重復(fù)、啰嗦的語言,大小寫是否正確,格式是否正確,詞數(shù)是否符合要求等。修改潤色。使用的詞語、短語及句型盡量用自己有把握的詞。初寫短文。有了提綱,我們就可以根據(jù)提綱和主題確定相關(guān)的寫作材料。審題時(shí)要注意試題的要求,抓住要點(diǎn),詞數(shù)符合要求?!军c(diǎn)睛】寫作時(shí)可以從以下幾個(gè)方面做起:認(rèn)真審題。亮點(diǎn)說明:這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文,很好的完成了試題規(guī)定的任務(wù),語言表達(dá)符合英語習(xí)慣,準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)、主謂一致,特別使用一些亮點(diǎn)詞句,如be going to, at the end of, give sb sth, if possible, take some photos以及with one’s help。ll be an English drama show this weekend. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ We’re looking forward to your reply.Li Hua【答案】Dear Mr. Smith,I’m glad to tell you there’ll be an English drama show this weekend . It will be held at 8:00 this Saturday morning. We are going to hold it in our music club. All of us are going to wear nice clothes and play different roles in groups. We will perform English dramas. Speeches will be made during the show.I hope you can work as a judge and give scores for each group after their performances. Then at the end of the drama show, you can give us some suggestions. If possible, you can bring your camera with you and take some photos for us. I believe this English drama show will be successful with