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ill have chances to visit some museums and the Great Wall. What you should prepare is a pair of shoes for the visit. If you have any questions, please tell me. I am looking forward to your early reply. Yours, Li Hua【解析】【詳解】:這是一篇提綱類書面表達(dá),只給了一些要點(diǎn)提示,但都不很明確。點(diǎn)睛:這篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短語(yǔ),為文章增色不少,如at the beginning of; know about;make a speech等;When ;Although ;Then ;From then on,等的運(yùn)用,使文章的表達(dá)更有邏輯性,更富有條理;同時(shí)語(yǔ)言流暢,內(nèi)容完整,是一篇不錯(cuò)的范文。語(yǔ)言力求準(zhǔn)確,簡(jiǎn)潔。s very important to be confident【答案】It’s very important to be confident. Selfconfidence can bring us courage to stick to what we do. So it’s valuable to us.When I was in Grade 7, once my teacher asked me to make a speech in class. Although I practiced it for many times at home, I still felt nervous and forgot thewords at the beginning of it. Then I breathed deeply and relaxed myself. You can’t believe how happy I was when I recalled the speech and finished it teacher thought highly of my performance and I got much encouragement from my classmates. From then on, I have bee more and more confident.To build confidence, firstly we need to clearly know about our own advantages and try to develop them. It is the most important that we should put in enough effort to what we do. Then we can finally make it and gain more confidence.【解析】本文內(nèi)容應(yīng)包含表格中所提供的所有信息。假如你是李華,請(qǐng)你為校刊英語(yǔ)園地“自信助我成長(zhǎng)”專欄寫一篇短文,談?wù)勛孕诺闹匾?,分享一次使你更加自信的?jīng)歷,并說(shuō)說(shuō)我們?nèi)绾胃幼孕拧?.自信賦予人力量,帶給人快樂(lè)?!军c(diǎn)睛】這類作文的寫作方法要注意認(rèn)真審題,注意過(guò)渡性語(yǔ)言的使用。運(yùn)用自然過(guò)渡法和自然銜接法來(lái)是文章更為地道、通順、純正。并運(yùn)用適當(dāng)?shù)木湫秃瓦^(guò)渡詞銜接?!驹斀狻浚纯从心男┮??哪些時(shí)態(tài)?人稱?,記敘文?說(shuō)明文?議論文?看圖?還是應(yīng)用文?,單一還是混合。第二段要寫詳細(xì)敘述讀寄宿學(xué)校的利弊;讀走讀學(xué)校的利弊??梢苑秩螌?。100詞左右(文章開頭結(jié)尾已給出,不計(jì)入總詞數(shù));2. 文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名、校名等信息;3. 文章必須包含提示中的所有信息,并按要求適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。寫一篇短文,內(nèi)容須包括:讀寄宿學(xué)校的利和弊;讀走讀學(xué)校的利和弊;你的選擇和理由(不得與上述兩點(diǎn)內(nèi)容重復(fù))。6.書面表達(dá)你即將升入高中,面臨寄宿(a boarding school)和走讀(a day school)兩類學(xué)校的選擇。它要求將所規(guī)定的材料內(nèi)容經(jīng)整理后展開思維,考查運(yùn)用所學(xué)英語(yǔ)知識(shí)準(zhǔn)確表達(dá)意思的能力。s more, when on a bus, we actively give our seats to the people in need./ All in all, we will try our best to do what we can to make ourselves and Zibo city more ,豐富了短文內(nèi)容,使語(yǔ)言表達(dá)多樣化,是本文的最大亮點(diǎn)。s more,on a bus,in need,be accustomed to,queue up,all in all等。s more, when on a bus, we actively give our seats to the people in need.Besides, we have formed a good habit of throwing rubbish into a dustbin, never littering anywhere. Furthermore(而且), we are accustomed to (習(xí)慣于)queuing up (排隊(duì)) for a ticket or something else. All in all, we will try our best to do what we can to make ourselves and Zibo city more civilized【解析】亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明:這篇習(xí)作的層次清晰,內(nèi)容飽滿,表達(dá)流暢。請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下所 給要點(diǎn),寫一篇 100 詞左右的英語(yǔ)短文。”自創(chuàng)建文明城市文明鄉(xiāng)村以來(lái),淄博人民萬(wàn)眾一心,眾 志成城,讓人點(diǎn)贊的行為隨處可見(jiàn)。所以,考生不能遺漏要點(diǎn),要盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞、短語(yǔ)和句式,盡可能使用高級(jí)詞匯和較復(fù)雜的句式結(jié)構(gòu)以便得到較高的分?jǐn)?shù)。點(diǎn)睛:書面表達(dá)題既不是漢譯英,也不是可任意發(fā)揮的作文。文中使用了非常好的短語(yǔ),例如thank you for doing,I’d like to do,introduce sb. to,all of you,at home,do some washing,at a fixed time,have a chat,play chess,do exercise,deal with,a great help,in the future等。4.(題文) 書面表達(dá)在中學(xué)生機(jī)器人大賽上,出現(xiàn)了一種專門照顧老人的新型家用智能機(jī)器人,它的主要功能有:1. 定時(shí)做飯、洗衣服; 2. 陪老人聊天、下棋、做運(yùn)動(dòng);3. 處理緊急情況(如:撥打120)假如你是該機(jī)器人的發(fā)明者,請(qǐng)你介紹這個(gè)產(chǎn)品,并談?wù)勀愕奈磥?lái)設(shè)想。開頭介紹了我要點(diǎn)贊的人,接下來(lái)介紹他的情況,最后指出我從他身上學(xué)到的東西。寫作