【正文】 貫、表達流暢。通過審題可知，這篇短文應(yīng)主要使用一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)，第三人稱來敘述，短文可以分成兩段或者三段，一個內(nèi)容一段或前兩個內(nèi)容合到一段。題目中利用表格的形式給我們列舉了短文的主要內(nèi)容，包括：共享單車的優(yōu)勢；存在的問題以及你自己對這件事情的看法。t return shared bikes in time. Sometimes shared bikes take up too much of the road, so they are in our way.I think we should encourage more people to use shared bikes properly. After all, it39。s easy for us to get around on shared bikes. Also, riding bicycles not only is good for our health but also can help reduce pollution. What39。，文章的開頭部分已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)?！澳愕挠^點”一欄用2―3句話展開合理想象。社會現(xiàn)狀自從出現(xiàn)，飽受贊譽。短文里還使用了一些較好的短語和句型，如In the past, my hometown was very poor and the streets were very narrow.、Now the government takes measures to improve the pollution and the city bees cleaner and cleaner、More and more people have their own cars and live a fortable life、There are thousands of tourists from all over the country every 。整篇文章內(nèi)容充實、完整，敘述清晰、條理，結(jié)構(gòu)合理。然后是家鄉(xiāng)現(xiàn)在的樣子，這里主要以一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)為主?！军c睛】這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，短文作者按照題目要求，介紹了自己的家鄉(xiāng)這些年來的變化。注意句式的多變，長短句結(jié)合、簡單句、并列句或復(fù)合句穿插使用，提升文章的檔次。這兩個地方需要學(xué)生們展開想象，合理發(fā)揮，注意要與文章的其他部分能夠很好的結(jié)合起來，內(nèi)容也要統(tǒng)一，符合題目要求，合情合理。題目中用表格的形式，給我們對比的家鄉(xiāng)的過去和現(xiàn)在，我們應(yīng)用正確的英語將這些內(nèi)容表達出來，并對將來提出兩點希望。將來希望……（兩點）要求：1. 短文的開頭已為你寫好，不計入總詞數(shù)；2. 短文必須包括所有內(nèi)容要點，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，使短文連貫通順；3. 文中不得出現(xiàn)真實的人名、校名、地名等相關(guān)信息。交通：新的飛機場已投入使用多年。生活：住房寬敞明亮；許多人搬進了新公寓。污染嚴重，垃圾遍地。請根據(jù)下表提示，以“The Changes in My Hometown”為題，用英語寫一篇100詞左右的短文，不必逐字逐句翻譯。還要注意句子的關(guān)聯(lián)。寫作時要注意遣詞造句，不能受漢語的影響，要用地道的英語表達，注意時態(tài)，語態(tài)，單詞拼寫，語法等問題，用好簡單句，適當(dāng)用復(fù)雜句。參考詞匯： 對某人微笑 smile at sb. 誤解 misunderstand短文必須包括所有內(nèi)容要點，不要逐字翻譯，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，使短文連貫通順。給別人帶來快樂,自己也快樂。有益于身心健康。學(xué)會對自己微笑面對困難與煩惱學(xué)會微笑（考試失利、被別人誤解等）。China is a nation of etiquette（禮儀），中國是一個禮儀之邦?？梢赃m當(dāng)使用高分句子?！军c睛】寫作中注意語義通順，符合邏輯關(guān)系，上下文之間可以適當(dāng)使用連接詞。細心檢查避免疏漏。表格中列舉了三個要點，寫作時注意不要漏寫。 參考詞匯: civilized 文明的Dear Danny,I’m glad to receive your letter. Since you are interested in civilization（文明） of China, I would like to share something with you. I hope you can e to China someday to experience the ancient culture of China. Look forward to hear from you soon.All the best,Li Hua【答案】Dear Danny,I’m glad to receive your letter. Since you are interested in civilization（文明） of China, I would like to share something with you.Chinese civilization is one of the oldest and longest civilizations in the world. China is a country of 56 nationalities. Different nations have difficult cultures. In my country, we have many traditional festivals, such as, the Spring Festival, MidAutumn Festival and the Dragon Boat Festival . They are also called “three major Chinese holidays” in China. Here are the customs of eating Zongzi and racing dragonboat on the Dragon Boat Festival.China is a nation of etiquette （禮儀）. Chinese people can respect, trust and help each other. We all learn and grow together. Everyone in my school should protect the whole public environment. Climbing the trees, picking the flowers and throwing garbage at random are not allowed there.I hope you can e to China someday to experience the ancient culture of China. Look forward to hearing from you soon.All the best.Li Hua【解析】【分析】本文要求給你的印度朋友Danny寫一篇關(guān)于華夏文明的回信。2. 回復(fù)必須包括所以要點，可是當(dāng)發(fā)揮，是短文連貫，通順。假設(shè)你是李華，請根據(jù)以下內(nèi)容提示用英語寫一封回信給Danny。此處fall in love in, at all, buy sb sth, begin to do sth, love doing sth, feel like, talk with, continue to do sth等這些詞組的運用也讓文章增色不少?！军c睛】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，語言簡練。寫作中注意運用代詞，注意多種句式交替運用。要點包括: 1. 變化是什么?2. 變化是如何發(fā)生的?3. 變化后有什么感受?___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】T