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所給單詞也都全部用上。:該題要求寫作體裁為書信格式,所以例文用第一人稱I進行寫作,在文章結尾也按照標準書信格式進行了收尾。提示詞語: Chinese classes, learn, attend, culture, prepare提示問題: ● When and where will the Chinese Summer Camp be held?● What activities will be held at the Chinese Summer Camp?● What is your advice for Jack?Dear Jack,I am very glad to know that you are interested in the Chinese Summer Camp in ourschool this summer holiday . .Yours,Li Hua【答案】Dear Jack,I am very glad to know that you are interested in the Chinese Summer Camp in our school this summer holiday.The Chinese Summer Camp will be held in our school from July 10th to July 30th this summer. The activities of this Chinese Summer Camp are as follows:First, you will attend Chinese classes, learning the meaning of Chinese characters. Second, you will take part in different parties, knowing the history of China and Chinese culture, especially Chinese holidays, which will impress you deeply.What’s more, you will have chances to visit some museums and the Great Wall. What you should prepare is a pair of shoes for the visit. If you have any questions, please tell me. I am looking forward to your early reply. Yours, Li Hua【解析】【詳解】:這是一篇提綱類書面表達,只給了一些要點提示,但都不很明確。以及狀語從句等;然后緊扣要點,動筆寫作,在寫作過程中,要注意句與句、段與段之間的過渡,必要時可適當運用表示轉折、因果、并列、比較等關系的連詞,使文章過渡平穩(wěn),自然流暢;最后,要仔細檢查有無單詞拼寫錯誤、標點符號誤用等,還要檢查語法結構是否合理,有無重復、啰嗦的語言,大小寫是否正確,詞數(shù)是否符合要求等。句型:When we see litter on the ground, we must pick it up and put it into different bins;Although each one of us may only do a little, together we can make a big difference。例文點評:例文采用的是三段式;用第一人稱來敘述為改善環(huán)境我們能做什么;時態(tài)采用的是一般現(xiàn)在時,描述建議時,描寫具體,條理清晰。假如你是李華,請用英語寫一篇短文投稿,談談我們面臨的主要環(huán)境問題是什么,為改善環(huán)境我們能做什么,以及你的期望。6.環(huán)境保護人人有責, 如果我們每一個人都能珍愛美麗地球 保護自然資源,相信我們的家園會越來越美好。根據(jù)要表達的內容確定句子的時態(tài)、語態(tài);語言表達要符合英語習慣。要求仔細閱讀有關提示,弄清試題提供的所有信息,明確本文主要從三個方面來寫:介紹足球運動及其好處;說說自己的偶像;談談自己的夢想。短文的開頭已為你寫好,不計入總詞數(shù);,不要逐詞翻譯,可適當發(fā)揮,使短文連貫、通順;、校名等相關信息。請你以足球迷的身份,根據(jù)下列表格中的要點提示,用英語向同學們介紹足球這項運動并談談自己的夢想?!军c睛】文章使用了很好的短語和句子:In order to make good use of the lucky money, I think we can do the following things. First, we should save part of the money for our study instead of wasting it on video 。動筆前可以按照材料內容列出簡單提綱,寫作中注意語義通順,符合邏輯關系。同學們該如何管理自己的錢,讓自己的錢用得更有意義?這是一篇給材料作文,本題所給材料比較詳細,寫作中注意將所給內容表達出來,不能逐字翻譯?!敬鸢浮縀very Spring Festival I receive a lot of lucky money from my parents and relatives. Now I even get it through WeChat or Alipay. I usually buy some of my favorite books, school things and some fancy clothes. Sometimes I also buy some gifts for my parents.In order to make good use of the lucky money, I think we can do the following things. First, we should save part of the money for our study instead of wasting it on video games. Second, it is a good idea to buy something useful for our parents or teachers so that we can show our love to them. What is more, why not donate our lucky money to the poor kids in need? Helping others makes us happy.All in all, let us manage our lucky money properly. We should use our money in a meaningful way.【解析】【詳解】每年春節(jié),每個孩子都能收到來自長輩的壓歲錢(luckymoney)。同學們該如何管理自己的錢,讓自己的錢用得更有意義?請結合自己的實際寫一篇文章,詞數(shù) 80 詞以上,文中不能出現(xiàn)真實校名和人名。每年春節(jié),每個孩子都能收到來自長輩的壓歲錢(lucky money)。如He is always ready to help others.、He not only likes reading detective novels but also likes watching programs about sports news.、He is