【正文】 ten to your talk so that I can know more about the Stroudwater Canal, the Thames and Severn 。如果分段敘述效果則會更好，那樣會使文章的層次更加清晰。首先短文內(nèi)容完整，包含了題目要求的所有信息，沒有遺漏要點。穿插一些高級詞匯和復雜句式，提升文章檔次和水平，使表達更加流暢。注意英語句子的表達和漢語習慣是不同的，不能逐詞翻譯，而應從句子的整體考慮，使用正確的句式結(jié)構(gòu)以及適當?shù)脑~匯、短語和句型，保證句子的準確性和語言的地道。寫作時，應根據(jù)題目的這些要求，組織語言，串聯(lián)成一篇短文。Dear Liz Payne,I’m Li Hua,_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,Li Hua【答案】Dear Liz Payne,I’m Li Hua, a middle school student learning in Grade 3 in China. I’m writing to tell you that our city will have a Winter Camp during this winter vacation. I hope to have a chance to visit London Canal Museum. From , I know you will have a report “An Update on the Cotswold Canals”February 6th, which will happen during the same period of our Winter Camp. And I also hope to listen to your talk so that I can know more about the Stroudwater Canal, the Thames and Severn Canal. What’s more, I hope to learn more about London Canal Museum and even more about the UK.I’m looking forward to your reply!Yours,Li Hua【解析】這篇作文要求我們以中學生李華的身份，給Liz Payne寫一個留言。作文要求：；不得在作文中出現(xiàn)學校真實的名稱和學生的真實姓名；,詞數(shù)80個左右。 7．假設你是來自中國的中學生李華,打算參加當?shù)亟M織的國外冬令營,看完了這個網(wǎng)頁后,你打算給Liz Payne留言,表達你在冬令營期間想去London Canal Museum參觀的愿望。短文注意到了長短句的結(jié)合，并恰當?shù)氖褂昧艘恍┻B詞，使文章表達的連貫。表達準確，注意了被動形式的使用，如He was rewarded by our school this year.?！玖咙c說明】這是一篇比較優(yōu)秀的范文。在最后要給Tommy提一些建議，這一部分應該用第一人稱。表格中涉及的內(nèi)容較多，寫作時要注意表達的條理性。點建議）…要求：表達清楚、語法正確、上下文連貫；要點必須包括所有相關信息，并作適當發(fā)揮；詞數(shù)：100 詞左右；不得使用真實姓名、校名和地名等Tommy is a member of my team called Moonlight.【答案】Tommy is a member of my team called Moonlight. He is clever and he is good at all his lessons. He is so generous that he shares everything with his likes reading because he thinks he can get much knowledge and learn more about the world by reading. And reading has a good effect on children’s growth. At home, he can help his parents do some housework. At school, he gets on well with his classmates. On the way to school, he obeys the traffic rules. He crosses the road when the light is green. Our school presented him with Award for Best Student this year. However, Tommy is stressed when the exam es. And he doesn’t have enough sleep. I think he should go over what he has learned before exams. It’s better for him to manage his time wisely so that he can have enough time to rest.【解析】這篇作文要求我們按照表格里的內(nèi)容介紹一下Tommy的情況，為Tommy寫一篇綜合素質(zhì)的評價報告。今年，學校授予了他優(yōu)秀學生獎（Award for Best Student）Problems面臨考試，遭受壓力痛苦，他沒有充足的睡眠．Your suggestions（根據(jù)實際情況提上學途中遵守交通規(guī)則（舉個好處）Honour他在家?guī)椭黾覄铡?．臨近畢業(yè)，學校在學習小組內(nèi)開展了初中階段自評和組評活動，假設你是 Moonlight 小組 的組長，請根據(jù)下面表格中的信息和提示，為你的組員 Tommy 進行綜合素質(zhì)的評價，寫一 份素質(zhì)報告．NameTommyCharacteristics聰明、大方（各舉一例）Hobbies喜歡看書，認為看書有很多好處（請列舉語言準確、得體，表達自然、流暢。其次短文中使用了正確的時態(tài)和人稱，語法規(guī)范，用詞準確，注意了動詞正確形式的變化。短文分三段，第一段基本是題目中給出的開頭，作者使用一句話引出下文；第二段是主體，介紹了過去美好的回憶以及不開心的事情；最后一段對未來進行了展望?！军c睛】這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，短文作者根據(jù)題目要求，回憶了自己的初中生活，并展望了未來。句式結(jié)構(gòu)可以簡單句為基礎，穿插并列句、復合句以及其他復雜句式的使用，提升作文檔次。寫作時應注意：文章中應包括表格中的所有信息，不能遺漏要點；第三部分的內(nèi)容中還需要自己發(fā)揮想象力進行補充，注意應合情合理，與上文很好地銜接。內(nèi)容應主要包括三部分：首先是初中三年里的美好回憶；然后是不開心的事情；最后展望自己未來的高中生活。題目中利用表格的形式，展示了文章的具體內(nèi)容，學生們可以此為提綱進行寫作。s unbelievable that I39。不開心的事情； 。請你根據(jù)以下提示，寫一篇發(fā)言稿。5．馬上要初中畢業(yè)了，大家都是依依不舍的。整篇文章在謀篇布局上，比較嚴密。接下來說出自己對此事件的看法，不信守承諾會導致失去別人的信任，對大明的建議是除了認錯之外，還需要再次保證永不再犯?！驹斀狻渴紫龋谝痪湓捴苯狱c明作者的觀點，大明是犯錯了的。The Importance of PromiseDear editor,People always emphasize（強調(diào)） the importance of the promise, and they hate people who break their promise.