【正文】 明顯筆誤不扣分。)一般來說，離要求詞數(shù)每少10個扣一分（按一行算）。思想清楚，文字通順，連貫性較好，語言僅有個別小錯。思想清楚，文字連貫，有少量語言錯誤。部分思想不夠清楚，文字勉強連貫；語言錯誤頗多，包括一些嚴重錯誤。有較多的嚴重語言錯誤。5分 — 基本切題。報道分和翻譯合并在一起，計算機自動加權(quán)處理為總分710分的20%（142分），但我看到的最好成績是130多分。在句式方面，要避免單一的簡單句型，可以適當加入倒裝句、強調(diào)句、插入語等句式，做到句式多樣化，為article加分。Main可以替換為primary, essential, crucial，indispensable，fundamental。為了避免單詞的重復(fù)使用，我們可以使用近義詞或者同義的短語。一個小竅門就是注意所用語言的多樣性。這與死記硬背范文有明顯區(qū)別?？忌Ｒ姷膯栴}是觀點確定后無法展開論證。提綱式作文是四級作文中很常見的一種題型，建議考生在讀題過程中將提綱中的關(guān)鍵詞劃出來，從而明確方向。專業(yè)可以用majors, departments, programs。范文Nowadays, colleges offer a wide range of elective courses for from different departments may sit in the same classroom and study a subject that may have nothing to do with their is no doubt that elective courses are weled by students, but the reasons for each student to make his/her own choice students choose a course merely out of their personal interest in a certain field, while others may take the utility of the course into consideration and expect to put what they have learnt into practice after students are inclined to choose courses they are familiar with in order to get a good score in the exam, while others do not care about the exam and choose a course in a little known , I’d like to learn from elective courses some knowledge useful for my future courses can provide a chance to learn about other professions and give me broader I can prove my training in business but also have courses in science, I may just win a job over those who strictly majored in business with no other interests.(195 words)老師評：這篇文章感覺只是一篇中規(guī)守距的短文，主要問題是沒有按四六級作文三段結(jié)構(gòu)來寫，表達不夠多樣性。擴展提綱“各個大學開設(shè)了多種多樣的選修課”這一現(xiàn)象。因此考生在寫的時候可以結(jié)合自己的實際情況進行分析，這樣易于下手。但有時提綱結(jié)構(gòu)會稍加變化，第二部分要求分析后果而不是原因，寫作時以具體提綱為準。一般題目即為現(xiàn)象，要求考生對現(xiàn)象進行較為詳盡的闡釋，包括分析該現(xiàn)象產(chǎn)生的原因或可能帶來的后果，并要求考生談?wù)勛约簩τ谠摤F(xiàn)象的看法或建議。As far as I am concerned, it is irrational for college students to pursue famous all, most of famous brands are far beyond their consumption , it is not famous brands but a person’s noble character that really makes him high , college students should attach more importance to cultivating a good character rather than pursuing famous brands。Students’ Pursuit for Famous BrandsNowadays many college students like to pursue famous clothes to mobile phones, even study articles like electronic dictionaries and pens, they are inclined to buy famous , many students from poor families begin to follow this consumption trend as phenomenon has aroused wide attention。Considering the great damage of overdue pressure, college students should learn how to relieve , we should have a right evaluation of ourselves, so it’s to make use of advantages and avoid , we should set a clear aim of aim can give us motivation and make us bee , attending collective activities is an effective way to relieve , if you find pressure is nearly beyond your control, you’d better turn to professional psychological guidance。As a college student, I think, it is necessary and beneficial for many universities to build up a branch the building of branch campuses brings some one thing, the students in some branch campuses cannot enjoy good enough facilities and the teachers due to limited another it leads to less direct munications among teachers and the university should take a full account before it decides to build up a branch campus。（文英）第三篇：大學英語四級寫作優(yōu)秀篇大學英語四級寫作優(yōu)秀范文The university’s branch campuses in suburban areasIn recent years more and more universities have built up their branch campuses in suburban it is very difficult to find a university without a branch no one can tell clearly when the first branch campus came out。Selftrust is the first secret of 。m trying to make ends 。Pride goes before a 。We sang the same 。You can count on ?？忌鷤冊谄綍r要多積累類似的語句，熟練掌握，以便應(yīng)試時游刃有余地恰當選用。some do 另外，在行文寫作中，注意使用一些常用諺語，可以使筆法自然，簡潔明了。on the whole。in brief。for instance。in a like manner, ：You cannot writes without a , you cannot cook without one is allowed to speak Mandarin in an English , no one is allowed to speak English in a Mandarin “舉例示范”：for example。hence, he “比較”：likewise。consequently。thus。so。on the contrary。for all that。yet。however。next。furthermore。besides。also。主要轉(zhuǎn)折詞歸類分列如下，在應(yīng)試文中可加以參考，多多安插使用。如果沒有采用轉(zhuǎn)折詞的習慣，就會使文句松散，上下文七零八亂，應(yīng)試中應(yīng)注意避免。（Explanation: people are loath to refer to defects in their possessions or their family members.）連接詞