【正文】 s letter is to… I am writing to…You will be very glad to hear that… The reason that I write this letter is to… I was surprised to learn that…I am sorry it has taken me so long to reply to your letter but… I would like to inquire about… I apologize for…I wish to apply for a position with your ，希望對方重視自己的意見、建議、請求或者致歉，盡快回復(fù)信件。（韓巍巍）大學(xué)英語四級寫作篇（四）——諺語的使用 語言源于生活，源于勞動(dòng)人民在生活和勞作中約定俗成的交流習(xí)慣，諺語更是從中提煉出來的精華，寓意深刻，富有哲理和智慧。恰到好處的諺語不僅能體現(xiàn)考生扎實(shí)的英語語言功底，豐富的英文知識(shí)，靈活的語言表達(dá)能力，而且更容易使作文從眾多同題文章中脫穎而出，獲得寫作高分。例如一些簡潔的諺語短句，都可以用來作為文章標(biāo)題：While there is life, there is ，不怕沒柴燒。Two heads are better than ，頂個(gè)諸葛亮。A bold attempt is half 。論證行文中，諺語可以作為論點(diǎn)，出現(xiàn)在起首句位置，總領(lǐng)論據(jù)；也可以在闡明論點(diǎn)的過程中作為論據(jù)，支持立論，使論點(diǎn)有出處，論據(jù)強(qiáng)而有力，引經(jīng)據(jù)典說服力強(qiáng)。Nothing is impossible for a willing ，無所不成。It39。One today is worth two ?！?Edison愛迪生Human pride is human ?！栋⒏收齻鳌稭oney is a good servant and a bad ,也是惡主。（Explanation: a rough way of starting a law of average。（Explanation: to receive a great personage as a guest without knowing his merits.）Every dog has his 。如果沒有采用轉(zhuǎn)折詞的習(xí)慣，就會(huì)使文句松散，上下文七零八亂，應(yīng)試中應(yīng)注意避免。also。furthermore。however。for all that。so。consequently。in a like manner, ：You cannot writes without a , you cannot cook without one is allowed to speak Mandarin in an English , no one is allowed to speak English in a Mandarin “舉例示范”：for example。in brief。some do 另外，在行文寫作中，注意使用一些常用諺語，可以使筆法自然，簡潔明了。You can count on 。Pride goes before a 。Selftrust is the first secret of 。As a college student, I think, it is necessary and beneficial for many universities to build up a branch the building of branch campuses brings some one thing, the students in some branch campuses cannot enjoy good enough facilities and the teachers due to limited another it leads to less direct munications among teachers and the university should take a full account before it decides to build up a branch campus。Students’ Pursuit for Famous BrandsNowadays many college students like to pursue famous clothes to mobile phones, even study articles like electronic dictionaries and pens, they are inclined to buy famous , many students from poor families begin to follow this consumption trend as phenomenon has aroused wide attention。一般題目即為現(xiàn)象，要求考生對現(xiàn)象進(jìn)行較為詳盡的闡釋，包括分析該現(xiàn)象產(chǎn)生的原因或可能帶來的后果，并要求考生談?wù)勛约簩τ谠摤F(xiàn)象的看法或建議。因此考生在寫的時(shí)候可以結(jié)合自己的實(shí)際情況進(jìn)行分析，這樣易于下手。范文Nowadays, colleges offer a wide range of elective courses for from different departments may sit in the same classroom and study a subject that may have nothing to do with their is no doubt that elective courses are weled by students, but the reasons for each student to make his/her own choice students choose a course merely out of their personal interest in a certain field, while others may take the utility of the course into consideration and expect to put what they have learnt into practice after students are inclined to choose courses they are familiar with in order to get a good score in the exam, while others do not care about the exam and choose a course in a little known , I’d like to learn from elective courses some knowledge useful for my future courses can provide a chance to learn about other professions and give me broader I can prove my training in business but also have courses in science, I may just win a job over those who strictly majored in business with no other interests.(195 words)老師評：這篇文章感覺只是一篇中規(guī)守距的短文，主要問題是沒有按四六級作文三段結(jié)構(gòu)來寫，表達(dá)不夠多樣性。提綱式作文是四級作文中很常見的一種題型，建議考生在讀題過程中將提綱中的關(guān)鍵詞劃出來，從而明確方向。這與死記硬背范文有明顯區(qū)別。為了避免單詞的重復(fù)使用，我們可以使用近義詞或者同義的短語。在句式方面，要避免單一的簡單句型，可以適當(dāng)加入倒裝句、強(qiáng)調(diào)句、插入語等句式，做到句式多樣化，為article加分。5分 — 基本切題。部分思想不夠清楚，文字勉強(qiáng)連貫；語言錯(cuò)誤頗多，包括一些嚴(yán)重錯(cuò)誤。思想清楚，文字通順，連貫性較好，語言僅有個(gè)別小錯(cuò)。明顯筆誤不扣分。)一般來說，離要求詞數(shù)每少10個(gè)扣一分（按一行算）。思想清楚，文字連貫，有少量語言錯(cuò)誤。有較多的嚴(yán)重語言錯(cuò)誤。報(bào)道分和翻譯合并在一起，計(jì)算機(jī)自動(dòng)加權(quán)處理為總分710分的20%（142分），但我看到的最好成績是130多分。Main可以替換為primary, essential, crucial，indispensable，fundamental。一個(gè)小竅門就是注意所用語言的多樣性?？忌Ｒ姷膯栴}是觀點(diǎn)確定后無法展開論證。專業(yè)可以用majors, departments, programs。擴(kuò)展提綱“各個(gè)大學(xué)開設(shè)了多種多樣的選修課”這一現(xiàn)象。但有時(shí)提綱結(jié)構(gòu)會(huì)稍加變化，第二部分要求分析后果而不是原因，寫作時(shí)以具體提綱為準(zhǔn)。As far as I am concerned, it is irrational for college students to pursue famous all, most of famous brands are far beyond their consumption , it is not famous brands but a person’s noble character that really makes him high , college students should attach more importance to cultivating a good character rather than pursuing famous brands。Considering the great damage o