【正文】 talmighty,butnoonecanlivehappilywithoutit. 。ifyouareintrouble,friendswillsurroundyouandremovethebarriersforyou。 Whatdoesfriendshipmean?einliterature,friendshipisjustlikeaddingflowersonthebrocade。 加分亮點(diǎn)： beentitledto 被賦予?? optionon 在? ..方面的選擇權(quán)playarole 起作用 Takeintoaccount 考慮在內(nèi) 第五篇：英語四級優(yōu)秀作文匯總 英 語 四 級 優(yōu) 秀 作 文 范 文 匯 總(25)Direction:Forthispartyouareallowed30minutestowriteapo120wordsandbaseyourpositionontheoutlinebelow:來越多，有些問題隨之產(chǎn)生 ......現(xiàn)象的看法 CarandAirPollutionToomanycarshavecreatedalotofseriousproblem,accidentsandfastfuelconsumption,lthetime,theyarepumpinghugeamountsofwastegasesintotheatmosph,Shanghai,someofthepublicbusesbegintorunonnaturalgas,whichdoesforthenewmodelsofcleancarspletelyreplacethetraditionalontantlyandthepublicvehiclesareefficientandconvenientenough,mo,theeliminationofairpollutionneedsthecollectiveeffortsfromthegovernment,thepublicandtheenvironmentalists. 英 語 四 級 優(yōu) 秀 作 文 范 文 匯 總(26)OverseasStudyatanEarlyAge1．目前很多父母在孩子高中畢業(yè)前就總他們出國學(xué)習(xí) 2．導(dǎo)致這種趨勢的原因是什么 3．我對此的看法 Nowadaysmoreandmoreparentsareeagertosendtheirchildrentostudyabroadbeforetheyfinishhighschoolbywhatevermeansandatwhatevertudyoverseasbecausetheyplacehighexpectationsontheirchildren.Theyareencouragedbythesuccessstoriesofthosewhohavepletedt,paniesandinstitutionsathomearegivingmoreandmoreemphasisonoverseasexperiences,pursuingoverseasstudybecameakindofsho,thereisstilloneunderlyinthepastfewyearsinChinahasenabledmoreandmoreparentstoaffordthehugecostfortheirchildren ’,overseasstudyissurelyahelpfulwaytogetbothadvancedknowledgeandnecessaryexperiences,butoverseasstudinkthatoverseasstudycancontributetoone ’sselfimprovement,butit ’sbettertobepursuedafteronehasfinishedhiscollegestudyathome,w文范文匯總 (28)OnSpaceProject 給《 **周刊》宇航專欄的編輯寫一封信，說明你對太空探索項(xiàng)目的態(tài)度（支持或反對），并簡單陳述你的理由。 ⑦ 同位 語 從句 使 句 式多 變 。⑤定語從句使句式多變。 加分亮點(diǎn)： loseone?sappeal 失去吸引力 stereotyped 老套的givewayto 讓路，讓步 Initiate 開始 indispensable 不可缺少的 Part10:2021 年 6 月 OnStudentsSelectingLecturers ①Nowadaysstudentsinsomeuniversitiesareentitledtotheoptiononleeandmoreefficientwayoflearning. However,thereareseveralfactorsforstudentstoconsiderwhenchoosingtheirideallecturers. ② Ontheonehand,thelecturer ?lecturermaygivethestudentsmuchknowledgeinhisspecificfield. ③Ontheotherhand,thestudentsshouldtakethelecturer ?,alecturercan ?tsetagoodexampleforthestudents. ④ What ? smore, ⑤theideallecturerisonewhohasaninterestingteachingstyleandagoodreputationamongthestudents. ⑥Freechoosingoflecturersmaybringtothestudentsmanyadvantages,suchasencouragingstudentstotakeanactivepartinclassesandputtingmorepressureonlecturerstoimprovetheirteachingquality. ⑦Nevertheless,italsobringsalongtheterriblefactthatsometoplectlude,⑧ furtherattentionshouldbepaidtothismatter. 精彩點(diǎn)評：①句首開門見山，直述主題。⑧不定式結(jié)構(gòu)表目的。⑥表遞進(jìn)關(guān)系。③和④是分別引出爭議雙方觀點(diǎn)的結(jié)構(gòu)。②話鋒一轉(zhuǎn)，提出問題。⑦再次表示“歡迎加入社團(tuán)”，突出主題。③④⑤運(yùn)用并列平行結(jié)構(gòu) Tobeginwith?Inaddition? Lastbutnottheleast?列舉具體的活動(dòng)。 加分亮點(diǎn)： wellprepared準(zhǔn)備好的 sharp銳利的，敏捷的 imaginative有想象力的 Part8:2021 年 6 月 WeletoOurClub Weletoourclub! ① Our “ EasytoLearn ”EnglishclubaimsathelpingcollegestudentstostudyEnglishineasiekinourclub,suchas ②EnglishTalkShow,EnglishCorner,EnglishLectures,EnglishSongsCompetition,etc. Ifyouareacceptedbyourclub,youwillfindyouhavemadeawisechoice.③Tobeginwith,youmaypracticeandimproveyourEnglishinouractivitiesinarelaxedandfortableway. ④Inaddition,youmaymakenewfriendsintheactivities,whichwillinevitablymakeyourcollegelifemoreenjoyableandmeaningful. ⑤Lastbutnottheleast,youmayparticipateinalltheactivitiesataverylowpriceorevenfreeofcharge. Ifyoufeelinterestedinourclub, ⑥ pleasedon ?,andifyouhaveanyproblem,pleasecallus. ⑦Thanksforyourattentionandwearelookingforwardtoyourjoining! 精彩點(diǎn)評：①開門見山，支出此社團(tuán)的宗旨。⑦用模板句提出自己的觀點(diǎn)。③④⑤⑥運(yùn)用了Some? Some? Stillothers?的并列平行結(jié)構(gòu)，列舉不同學(xué)生的做法及目的。 加分亮點(diǎn)： beavailablefor 可供?之用? rangefrom? to?從??到?? Beaddictedto 沉溺于，熱愛 Part7:2021 年 12月 ?? WhatElectivestoChoose Nowadays, ①thereexistawiderangeofselectivecoursesincollegewhichareready?collegelifemorecolorful. ②However,asforthepurposeofchoosingelectives,differentstudentshavedifferentideas. ③Somestudentschoosemoreelectivesjusttogetmoreknowledge,sothattheycouldbewellpreparedinthefuturejobhunting. ④Somestudentsjustwanttoextendtheirinterests. ⑤ouldchoosemorecoursesinorderthattheycouldspendfourmorecolorfulschoolyears. ⑥Still,othershavenodefiniteaimandtheyjustwanttofinishtheirstudy. ⑦AsfarasIamconcerned,Ijustwanttolearnmoreknowledgeformyfuture ?imaginativemindwithdifferentknowledgewhichisbeyondmymajor. ⑧SoIthinkthepossessionofmuch moreknowledgecanmakemyfuturelifeeasierandmoreinteresting. 精彩點(diǎn)評：①開門見山，說明大學(xué)里開設(shè)了很多選修課這一事實(shí)。⑥用模板句提出自己的觀點(diǎn)。③模板句引出兩種對立觀點(diǎn)。 加分亮點(diǎn)： sharp 急劇的，大量的 giveriseto 引起，使發(fā)生 inquestion正被討論 Consequently 從此，因而 Part6:2021 年 6 月 以使人們受益，也可能帶來危害 ，我認(rèn)為?? . RecreationalActivities ①Abundantrecreationalactivitiesareavailableforpeopletoreleasetheirstrainandstress,rangingfromsportstoonlineactivities. ②Thereisahotdebatearguingwhethertheyaregoodforthepublicornot,especiallyforcollegestudents. ③ Asforsuchaques