【正文】 ngelectives,differentstudentshavedifferentideas. ③Somestudentschoosemoreelectivesjusttogetmoreknowledge,sothattheycouldbewellpreparedinthefuturejobhunting. ④Somestudentsjustwanttoextendtheirinterests. ⑤ouldchoosemorecoursesinorderthattheycouldspendfourmorecolorfulschoolyears. ⑥Still,othershavenodefiniteaimandtheyjustwanttofinishtheirstudy. ⑦AsfarasIamconcerned,Ijustwanttolearnmoreknowledgeformyfuture ?imaginativemindwithdifferentknowledgewhichisbeyondmymajor. ⑧SoIthinkthepossessionofmuch moreknowledgecanmakemyfuturelifeeasierandmoreinteresting. 精彩點評：①開門見山，說明大學里開設(shè)了很多選修課這一事實。⑦用模板句提出自己的觀點。③④⑤運用并列平行結(jié)構(gòu) Tobeginwith?Inaddition? Lastbutnottheleast?列舉具體的活動。②話鋒一轉(zhuǎn)，提出問題。⑥表遞進關(guān)系。 加分亮點： loseone?sappeal 失去吸引力 stereotyped 老套的givewayto 讓路，讓步 Initiate 開始 indispensable 不可缺少的 Part10:2021 年 6 月 OnStudentsSelectingLecturers ①Nowadaysstudentsinsomeuniversitiesareentitledtotheoptiononleeandmoreefficientwayoflearning. However,thereareseveralfactorsforstudentstoconsiderwhenchoosingtheirideallecturers. ② Ontheonehand,thelecturer ?lecturermaygivethestudentsmuchknowledgeinhisspecificfield. ③Ontheotherhand,thestudentsshouldtakethelecturer ?,alecturercan ?tsetagoodexampleforthestudents. ④ What ? smore, ⑤theideallecturerisonewhohasaninterestingteachingstyleandagoodreputationamongthestudents. ⑥Freechoosingoflecturersmaybringtothestudentsmanyadvantages,suchasencouragingstudentstotakeanactivepartinclassesandputtingmorepressureonlecturerstoimprovetheirteachingquality. ⑦Nevertheless,italsobringsalongtheterriblefactthatsometoplectlude,⑧ furtherattentionshouldbepaidtothismatter. 精彩點評：①句首開門見山，直述主題。 ⑦ 同位 語 從句 使 句 式多 變 。 Whatdoesfriendshipmean?einliterature,friendshipisjustlikeaddingflowersonthebrocade。talmighty,butnoonecanlivehappilywithoutit. 。ifyouareintrouble,friendswillsurroundyouandremovethebarriersforyou。 加分亮點： beentitledto 被賦予?? optionon 在? ..方面的選擇權(quán)playarole 起作用 Takeintoaccount 考慮在內(nèi) 第五篇：英語四級優(yōu)秀作文匯總 英 語 四 級 優(yōu) 秀 作 文 范 文 匯 總(25)Direction:Forthispartyouareallowed30minutestowriteapo120wordsandbaseyourpositionontheoutlinebelow:來越多，有些問題隨之產(chǎn)生 ......現(xiàn)象的看法 CarandAirPollutionToomanycarshavecreatedalotofseriousproblem,accidentsandfastfuelconsumption,lthetime,theyarepumpinghugeamountsofwastegasesintotheatmosph,Shanghai,someofthepublicbusesbegintorunonnaturalgas,whichdoesforthenewmodelsofcleancarspletelyreplacethetraditionalontantlyandthepublicvehiclesareefficientandconvenientenough,mo,theeliminationofairpollutionneedsthecollectiveeffortsfromthegovernment,thepublicandtheenvironmentalists. 英 語 四 級 優(yōu) 秀 作 文 范 文 匯 總(26)OverseasStudyatanEarlyAge1．目前很多父母在孩子高中畢業(yè)前就總他們出國學習 2．導(dǎo)致這種趨勢的原因是什么 3．我對此的看法 Nowadaysmoreandmoreparentsareeagertosendtheirchildrentostudyabroadbeforetheyfinishhighschoolbywhatevermeansandatwhatevertudyoverseasbecausetheyplacehighexpectationsontheirchildren.Theyareencouragedbythesuccessstoriesofthosewhohavepletedt,paniesandinstitutionsathomearegivingmoreandmoreemphasisonoverseasexperiences,pursuingoverseasstudybecameakindofsho,thereisstilloneunderlyinthepastfewyearsinChinahasenabledmoreandmoreparentstoaffordthehugecostfortheirchildren ’,overseasstudyissurelyahelpfulwaytogetbothadvancedknowledgeandnecessaryexperiences,butoverseasstudinkthatoverseasstudycancontributetoone ’sselfimprovement,butit ’sbettertobepursuedafteronehasfinishedhiscollegestudyathome,w文范文匯總 (28)OnSpaceProject 給《 **周刊》宇航專欄的編輯寫一封信，說明你對太空探索項目的態(tài)度（支持或反對），并簡單陳述你的理由。⑤定語從句使句式多變。⑧不定式結(jié)構(gòu)表目的。③和④是分別引出爭議雙方觀點的結(jié)構(gòu)。⑦再次表示“歡迎加入社團”，突出主題。 加分亮點： wellprepared準備好的 sharp銳利的，敏捷的 imaginative有想象力的 Part8:2021 年 6 月 WeletoOurClub Weletoourclub! ① Our “ EasytoLearn ”EnglishclubaimsathelpingcollegestudentstostudyEnglishineasiekinourclub,suchas ②EnglishTalkShow,EnglishCorner,EnglishLectures,EnglishSongsCompetition,etc. Ifyouareacceptedbyourclub,youwillfindyouhavemadeawisechoice.③Tobeginwith,youmaypracticeandimproveyourEnglishinouractivitiesinarelaxedandfortableway. ④Inaddition,youmaymakenewfriendsintheactivities,whichwillinevitablymakeyourcollegelifemoreenjoyableandmeaningful. ⑤Lastbutnottheleast,youmayparticipateinalltheactivitiesataverylowpriceorevenfreeofcharge. Ifyoufeelinterestedinourclub, ⑥ pleasedon ?,andifyouhaveanyproblem,pleasecallus. ⑦Thanksforyourattentionandwearelookingforwardtoyourjoining! 精彩點評：①開門見山，支出此社團的宗旨。③④⑤⑥運用了Some? Some? Stillothers?的并列平行結(jié)構(gòu)，列舉不同學生的做法及目的。⑥用模板句提出自己的觀點。 加分亮點： sharp 急劇的，大量的 giveriseto 引起，使發(fā)生 inquestion正被討論 Consequently 從此，因而 Part6:2021 年 6 月 以使人們受益，也可能帶來危害 ，我認為?? . RecreationalActivities ①Abundantrecreationalactivitiesareavailableforpeopletoreleasetheirstrainandstress,rangingfromsportstoonlineactivities. ②Thereisahotdebatearguingwhethertheyaregoodforthepublicornot,especiallyforcollegestudents. ③ Asforsuchaquestion,differentpeopleholddifferentviews. ④Somebelievethatrecreationishelpfulifwewanttokeephealthyphysicallyandmentally. ⑤Whiletherealsosoundsanoppositevoice,whichclaimsactivitiesbri,someyoungpeopleareeasilyaddictedtothevirtualworldonline,whichaffectstheirstudybadlyandmayleadtow