【正文】 寫完文章后注意檢查有誤單詞拼寫錯誤，語法使用錯誤，字數(shù)是否達到要求?！军c睛】認真審題，看清題目要求，在描述事件時，要注意清晰表達事情發(fā)生的開端，內(nèi)容及結(jié)尾。最后一段是從這件小事中得出的感悟，It tells me that although we will have all kinds of difficulties in our life, we should never give up. 對這件小事進行了總結(jié)，更使文章在思想上得到了升華。本篇文章,首先開篇點題,指出事情發(fā)生的時間及所經(jīng)歷的事件。要求：，書寫規(guī)范，卷面整潔，詞數(shù)100左右；2. 文中不得使用你的真實姓名，校名，否則以零分計。由于是演講類作文，尤其注意應(yīng)用一些常見句式、短語來提高我們的表達水平。動筆前可以按照材料內(nèi)容列出簡單提綱，寫出關(guān)鍵單詞。Good morning, boys and girls!The topic of my speech today is “Learn to express thanks”.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________In the future, we should never forget our society, parents, teachers and so on. At present, we should study harder in order to make our world more beautiful.Thank you for your listening!【答案】書面表達參考范文（一）：Good morning, boys and girls!The topic of my speech today is “Learn to express thanks”. We find some students want to eat well and wear fashionable clothes at school. When they leave school and enter society, they don’t show any sense of thanks. I think this behavior is not correct. As students, we should learn to express thanks. The society offers us a chance to receive good education. And our parents also support us to go to school. Our teachers teach us much knowledge, so we should thank them. We should also thank our friends because they give us courage and support.In the future, we should never forget our society, parents, teachers and so on. At present, we should study harder in order to make our world more beautiful.Thank you for your listening!書面表達參考范文（二）：Learn to express thanksGood morning, boys and girls!The topic of my speech today is “Learn to express thanks”. We find most Middle School students don’t show any sense of “Thanks”. They think that they are certain of eating well and wearing fashionable clothes.As Middle School students, we should learn to express thanks. We should thank our parents for supporting us to go to school. And we should express thanks to our hardworking teachers who teach us much knowledge. Besides, our friends always give us encouragement and help. In a word, we are lucky in everything. But we should learn to express thanks. In the future, I should study harder to repay our parents and teachers. I should go to my friends to share their happiness and sadness. Thank you for your listening!【解析】這是一篇給材料作文，要求寫一篇關(guān)于感恩的演講稿。 參考詞匯：enter society 進入社會， sense of thanks 感恩意識， behavior 行為要求：，可以適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，不要簡單翻譯；、地名及能夠透露你個人身份的信息；：80詞左右。背 景；。寫作中注意使用連接詞，注意表達的多樣化，做到語意連貫符合邏輯。動筆前先根據(jù)材料確定時態(tài)，句式，詞匯等主要內(nèi)容。假設(shè)你是育英中學(xué)的一名學(xué)生張明，請給鄭校長發(fā)一封電子郵件，就此發(fā)表自己的看法。Dear Mr. Zheng,I’m sorry to trouble you. I’m Zhang Ming, a student from Yuying High School. I’m writing to you about outdoor activities.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,Zhang Ming【答案】Dear Mr. Zheng,I’m sorry to trouble you. I’m Zhang Ming, a student from Yuying High school. V m writing to you about outdoor activities.Could you please organize some outdoor activities for us, dear headmaster? Of course, safety es first. But it’s necessary for us to take part in such activities.In my opinion, we can learn more knowledge and open up our eyes in this way. What’s more, it’s a good way for us to learn to protect the environment by staying close to the nature. And we can get on well with our teachers and classmates.Why not show us some safety knowledge before these activities. It’s a good chance for us to learn to protect and save ourselves.Best wishes!Yours,Zhang Ming【解析】【詳解】近年來，人們非常關(guān)注學(xué)生的安全。要點如下：1. 安全第一，但開展一些戶外活動還是有必要的；2. 通過這些活動，學(xué)生不僅能增長知識，還能開拓視野；3. 與大自然親密接觸，能增強同學(xué)們的環(huán)保意識；4. 建議學(xué)校在活動之前教給學(xué)生一些安全常識，讓學(xué)生學(xué)會保護自己和自救。很多學(xué)校為此取消了許多有意義的外出活動，如春游、夏令營、野餐等。句型：Though I am not good at cooking, I can ask my mother for help；I am eager to receive your early reply。例文點評：例文采用的是三段式；用第一人稱來敘述父親節(jié)計劃；時態(tài)采用的是一般現(xiàn)在時為主，描述具體建議時，描寫細致，條理清晰。提示詞語： gift, love, opinion提示問題： ● What’s your plan for Father’s Day? ● Why do you do so? ● What do you want Peter to do?Dear Peter,How is it going? We will share the plan for Father’s Day next Yours,Li Hua【答案】例文Dear Peter,How is it going?We will share the plan for Father’s Day next week. I am going to do some meaningful things for my father. Firstly, I am going to buy a beautiful card for him. And then, I plan to cook him a big meal. Though I am not good at cooking, I can ask my mother for help.I will do this because I love my father deeply. He works very hard every day to support my family. Would you please give me some advice? I am eager to receive your early reply. Yours,Li Hua【解析】【詳解】題干解讀：該題目屬于記敘文寫作，但寫作時要按郵件格式寫。6．假如你是李華，下周你們學(xué)校將要組織學(xué)生開展“父親節(jié)活動計劃”分享活動，你打算先分享給你們班交換生Peter，希望聽聽他的看法。修改潤色是獲取高分的必要步驟。同時還要注意使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞，使句子銜接自然。一切都準備就緒，就可以動筆寫作了，在寫作的過程中我們要注意句