【正文】 he importance of the promise, and they hate people who break their promise.Recently, a thing happened to my friend, and I think it was really his fault. Last weekend, my friend Daming had a date with his friend Lingling to watch a movie. But he totally forgot it that day because of his review for his exam. So Lingling got too angry to forgive him. In my opinion, it was really his fault. Forgetting the date not only led to Lingling’s anger, but also made her lose trust in him. Keeping promises is always the traditional virtue of the Chinese nation. What Daming should do now is to ask for forgiveness and promise that he will never do that again.Promise is very important. Everyone should keep it. Yours,Tony【解析】【分析】本文為一篇稿件，需要學生通過大明和玲玲之間，大明沒有信守承諾的事情，談自己的看法?！驹斀狻渴紫龋谝痪湓捴苯狱c明作者的觀點，大明是犯錯了的。接下來說出自己對此事件的看法，不信守承諾會導致失去別人的信任，對大明的建議是除了認錯之外，還需要再次保證永不再犯。整篇文章在謀篇布局上，比較嚴密。4．手機在生活中扮演著越來越重要的角色，許多中學生沉迷于手機無法自拔，：1. 去年，Miller對手機游戲非常入迷，而且花大量時間用手機聊天看電影；2. Miller與家人和朋友交流甚少，離開手機會很焦慮；3. 昨天還因為走路看手機被自行車撞了，膝蓋受傷；4. 你的建議……參考詞匯：mobile games手機游戲anxious焦慮be crazy about對……入迷要求：1字數(shù)80100個2開頭已經(jīng)給出不計入總詞數(shù)3要點齊全，行為連貫，適當發(fā)揮Today more and more people are addicted to(沉迷）playing the mobile phones. Last year, My friend Miller was 【答案】Today more and more people are addicted to(沉迷）playing the mobile phones. Last year，My friend Miller was crazy about mobile games as well. He spent too much time in chatting and watching films on the phone. Miller hardly talked with his family and friends. He lived in his own world. He felt very anxious without mobile phones. Yesterday he was hit by a bike, because he was watching his phone at that moment. As a result, he hurt his knees badly.In my opinion, I think we can’t use the mobile phones for a long time, I mean, no more than half an hour a day. Don’t take mobile phones to school. A mobile phone is just a kind of tool, not our whole life.【解析】【詳解】這是一篇給材料作文。在寫作時，注意連句成篇，保持文章的連貫性，要層次清楚，要點分明，中心突出。最后要細心復(fù)核檢查，確保正確無誤。為了使生活更美好，社會需要正能量（positive energy）。請你在網(wǎng)上給What would you do?本期節(jié)目留言，內(nèi)容包括：1. 你對節(jié)目中挺身而出的顧客的看法；2. 說說你幫助別人或別人幫助你的一件事例；3. 呼吁大家互幫互助，彼此感恩，讓社會充滿正能量。2．語句連貫，詞數(shù)80個左右。In the program, a customer stood up when a blind woman was cheated badly in a cake shop. _______【答案】In the program, a customer stood up when a blind woman was cheated badly in a cake shop. I really admire her because she was brave enough to help the woman in need.The other day I saw a little girl crying at a street corner on my way home. I tried my best to make her stop crying. When I knew she was lost, I helped her make a call to her dad and stayed with her until he arrived. I found it pleasant to give others a hand.In my opinion, we are supposed to help each other and be thankful for others’ help. I strongly believe helping others will fill our society with positive energy. As the saying goes, “The rose’s in her hand, the flavor in mine.”（113w）【解析】【詳解】本文屬于話題作文，描述對節(jié)目中挺身而出的顧客的看法、發(fā)生在你身上正能量的事件以及鼓勵大家相互幫助，并讓世界充滿正能量。亮點說明：這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，很好的完成了試題規(guī)定的任務(wù)，語言表達符合英語習慣，準確運用時態(tài)、主謂一致，特別適用一些亮點詞句，如be for, adj enough to do, the other day, try one’s best, make sb do, make a call, give sb a hand, in one’s opinion, be supposed to, be filled with, the rose in her hand, the flavor in mine等?！军c睛】寫作時可以從以下幾個方面做起：認真審題。審題時要注意試題的要求，抓住要點，詞數(shù)符合要求。有了提綱，我們就可以根據(jù)提綱和主題確定相關(guān)的寫作材料。初寫短文。使用的詞語、短語及句型盡量用自己有把握的詞。修改潤色。這一步我們除了檢查短文的各種錯誤外，還要檢查語法結(jié)構(gòu)是否合理，有無重復(fù)、啰嗦的語言，大小寫是否正確，格式是否正確，詞數(shù)是否符合要求等。請用英語寫一封電子郵件，告訴他你的計劃是什么，你為什么這么做，并表達你渴望得到他建議的心情。在寫作時應(yīng)承接短文開頭；第二段寫你為什么這么做；第三段表達你渴望得到他建議的心情。高分亮點：短語：the plan for Father’s Day；some meaningful things；buy a beautiful card for him；give me some advice。7．書面表達近年來，人們非常關(guān)注學生的安全。假設(shè)你是育英中學的一名學生張明，請給鄭校長發(fā)一封電子郵件，就此發(fā)表自己的看法。參考詞匯：outdoor activities戶外活動；open up one’s eyes開闊視野注意：1. 詞數(shù)80—100；2. 請不要逐句翻譯，可適當發(fā)揮；3. 文中不能出現(xiàn)真實的校名和人名；4. 郵件的開頭和結(jié)尾已經(jīng)寫好，不計入總詞數(shù)。很多學校為此取消了許多有意義的外出活動，如春游、夏令營、野餐等。這是一篇給材料作文，介紹自己的度假計劃本文做給材料比較詳細，敘述中注意將要點中的事情介紹清楚，可以適當取舍。根據(jù)內(nèi)容可知本文時態(tài)問題比較復(fù)雜，注意時態(tài)與時間狀語的搭配問題，人稱主要是第一人稱?！军c睛】文中用到了一些好的句型，這些句型給文中增色不少，如：Could you please organize some outdoor activities for us；In my opinion, we can learn more knowledge and open up our eyes in this way.8．請你根據(jù)下表中所提供的信息以“Learn to express thanks”為題，用英語寫一篇演講稿。學會感恩；；；。開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。寫作中注意將材料按照材料提示進行介紹，通過材料可知這篇短文主要使用的人稱就是第一人稱，時態(tài)為一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)。寫作中注意使用連接詞，做到語義通順，符合邏輯關(guān)系。9．書面表達A small thing提示：請根據(jù)所給題目“A small thing”寫一篇英語短文，記敘一件你經(jīng)歷過的小事。 【答案】A small thingIt was a sunny and warm day. My father told me he would teach me how to ride a bike. I was so happy at first. However, I fell down on the ground. I cried loudly and wanted to gives up. My father smiled and said we should be a person who never give up. He encouraged me to stand up and continue. After one hour, I could ride the bike without the help of my father. This is one small thing that I will never forget. It tells me that although we will have all kinds of difficulties in our life, we should never give up. 【解析】【詳解】本文要記述自己經(jīng)歷過的一件小事, 在時態(tài)上用一般過去時。It was a sunny and warm day. My father told me he would teach me how to ride a ，詞語at first，However,…. After one hour,的使用使整篇文章渾然一體。文章時態(tài)使用正確，表達準確，事件本身思路清晰，是一篇不錯的文章。必要時要適當使用連詞，使文章過渡平穩(wěn)，自然流暢，文章最后注意對整個故事進行總結(jié)，最好能夠從故事中得出自己的感悟，在敘述故事的同時使文章具有思想性。