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?!靖叻志湫投縄 think these rules are good for us. 我認為這些規(guī)則對我們有好處?!靖叻志湫鸵弧縎econd, we shouldn’t go with strangers and we shouldn’t accept things from strangers. 第二,我們不應(yīng)該和陌生人一起去,也不應(yīng)該接受陌生人的東西。語法要正確,表達要符合英語習慣,注意時態(tài)、時間狀語的搭配及主謂一致問題。注意作文中必須包含材料上的所有信息,并適當發(fā)揮。時態(tài)為一般現(xiàn)在時,人稱為第一人稱。主要從1. 遵守校規(guī),按時到校、離校;2. 不接受陌生人的物品;3. 結(jié)伴同行,天黑前到家;4. 遇到麻煩及時告知家長和老師。School safety_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】School safetyMore and more people pay special attention to the school safety nowadays. Here are some rules to keep us safe.First, as students, we should follow the school rules, such as not being late for school and leaving school early. Second, we shouldn’t go with strangers and we shouldn’t accept things from strangers. Third, it’s better for us to have partners on the way home and to school and we must get home before dark. Fourth, if we are in trouble, don’t forget to tell our parents or teachers as soon as possible.I think these rules are good for us. We must obey them.【解析】【詳解】這是一篇話題作文,根據(jù)材料中的相關(guān)信息介紹一下校園安全。請根據(jù)提示內(nèi)容,以“School safety”為題寫一篇100詞左右的英語短文。英語作文,要忠實于材料,不必擴展,注意用好連詞,多用非謂語,慎用較難的句型,一定不能寫錯句。(3)短文首句僅供參考,不計入總數(shù)。注意:(1)文中不得出現(xiàn)真實的人名和學校名稱。(1)列舉你班同學存在的不誠實現(xiàn)象:抄作業(yè),考試作弊,說謊話......。8.為配合學?!罢\信教育”活動,學校英語報開展了以“Try to be honest”為主題的征文活動。短文以簡單句結(jié)構(gòu)為主,也使用了一些復合句和較高級的句型,如I’m writing to tell you that our city will have a Winter Camp during this winter ;From , I know you will have a report “An Update on the Cotswold Canals” February 6th, which will happen during the same period of our Winter ;And I also hope to listen to your talk so that I can know more about the Stroudwater Canal, the Thames and Severn 。如果分段敘述效果則會更好,那樣會使文章的層次更加清晰。首先短文內(nèi)容完整,包含了題目要求的所有信息,沒有遺漏要點。穿插一些高級詞匯和復雜句式,提升文章檔次和水平,使表達更加流暢。注意英語句子的表達和漢語習慣是不同的,不能逐詞翻譯,而應(yīng)從句子的整體考慮,使用正確的句式結(jié)構(gòu)以及適當?shù)脑~匯、短語和句型,保證句子的準確性和語言的地道。寫作時,應(yīng)根據(jù)題目的這些要求,組織語言,串聯(lián)成一篇短文。Dear Liz Payne,I’m Li Hua,_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,Li Hua【答案】Dear Liz Payne,I’m Li Hua, a middle school student learning in Grade 3 in China. I’m writing to tell you that our city will have a Winter Camp during this winter vacation. I hope to have a chance to visit London Canal Museum. From , I know you will have a report “An Update on the Cotswold Canals”February 6th, which will happen during the same period of our Winter Camp. And I also hope to listen to your talk so that I can know more about the Stroudwater Canal, the Thames and Severn Canal. What’s more, I hope to learn more about London Canal Museum and even more about the UK.I’m looking forward to your reply!Yours,Li Hua【解析】這篇作文要求我們以中學生李華的身份,給Liz Payne寫一個留言。作文要求:;不得在作文中出現(xiàn)學校真實的名稱和學生的真實姓名;,詞數(shù)80個左右。7.假設(shè)你是來自中國的中學生李華,打算參加當?shù)亟M織的國外冬令營,看完了這個網(wǎng)頁后,你打算給Liz Payne留言,表達你在冬令營期間想去London Canal Museum參觀的愿望。在寫作時,首先要選擇自己熟悉的短語或者句型,在能力范圍之內(nèi),選擇句式時要賦予變化,這樣才可以更好的駕馭。Hi, Jack! I am Tim. Today I will tell you something about the project “Renovation of the old munities” in Nanjing. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________