【正文】 此處be busy doing sth, prepare f?！军c睛】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，語言簡練。寫作中注意運用代詞，注意多種句式交替運用。16．D解析：Dear Billy,It’s my great pleasure to receive your . You wanted to know about my usual exercise. I’ll tell it to you. I am busy preparing for the ing physical test. So I take exercise less than an hour every day. Sometimes I don’t do exercise, because I have so much homework that I have no time to do it. I do well in playing balls.Doing exercise can help me keep a strong body, and it is good for my health. Besides, I think it can make me relaxed by doing exercise. So I advise you to spend more time doing exercise every week.Best wishes!Yours,Li Hua【解析】【分析】這是一篇給材料作文，給Billy回封電子郵件，介紹自己平時的鍛煉情況，并建議他每周都要花些時間鍛煉身體。它要求將所規(guī)定的材料內(nèi)容經(jīng)整理后展開思維，考查運用所學(xué)英語知識準確表達意思的能力。在學(xué)習中注意總結(jié)牢記一些固定句式及短語，寫作時就可以適當引用，使文章表達更有邏輯性，也更富有條理。m going to graduate from junior high school. As your senior, I have some suggestions to the young.As old saying goes, all work and no play makes Jack a dull boy. To begin with, you should arrange both your study and life properly.Moreover, you should get along well with others. To have more friends, not enemies.Last but not least, you could be active in school team work. Ability is as important as your study, you can also enjoy your colorful school life as wellI hope these suggestions could make your junior schoollife more wonderful.【解析】【詳解】這篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短語，為文章增色不少，如be going to，graduate from，to begin with，both…and，get along well with others，be active in，as important as，as well等。所以，考生不能遺漏要點，要盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞、短語和句式，盡可能使用高級詞匯和較復(fù)雜的句式結(jié)構(gòu)以便得到較高的分數(shù)?！军c睛】書面表達題既不是漢譯英，也不是可任意發(fā)揮的作文。文中使用了非常好的短語，例如like reading，more than，all kinds of，spend time doing，enjoy doing，the number of，twice a year，be the chief engineer of等。短文中使用了豐富的句型和短語，如The teachers are very friendly and they are ready to help me. The most unforgettable thing is that I got a chance of being an exchange students and spent two months in , we kept in touch with each other through s. Besides, I was not good at Chinese also wish I can do better in all subjects when I am in high school and can go to a good 。句式結(jié)構(gòu)完整，符合英語的表達習慣。各部分內(nèi)容安排合理，有層次、有條理。短文有以下幾個特點：首先文章內(nèi)容完整，結(jié)構(gòu)清晰。同時語句之間使用適當?shù)倪B接成分，使文意連貫、自然。另外注意句式結(jié)構(gòu)要符合英語的表達習慣，用完整的句子表達。表格中有非常具體的提示，但不能逐詞翻譯表格中的短語，應(yīng)把他們變成自己的話，并用英語表達出來。審題可知，這篇短文應(yīng)主要使用一般現(xiàn)在時和一般過去時，注意根據(jù)表達需要使用正確時態(tài)，并注意謂語動詞的正確形式。13．A解析：My Life At SchoolHow time flies! It’s unbelievable that I’m going to graduate from my beloved school. There are many things to remember. In the junior school, I got along well with my classmates. The teachers are very friendly and they are ready to help me. The most unforgettable thing is that I got a chance of being an exchange students and spent two months in Australia. I learned a lot from the experience. I also remember I served as volunteer to help others. Certainly, there were also unhappy things. My good friend Li Hua went to another school. I was very sad. Luckily, we kept in touch with each other through s. Besides, I was not good at Chinese writing. I hope I can go to a dream school and make more new friends. I also wish I can do better in all subjects when I am in high school and can go to a good college.【解析】【詳解】這篇作文要求我們以My Life At School為題，寫一篇發(fā)言稿。s more, using shared bikes costs so little that we can afford ；另外文章中還使用了恰當?shù)倪B接成分，如Also, What’s more, But, sometimes, After all等等。例如They can be seen everywhere so that it39。分段敘述使文章的結(jié)構(gòu)清晰，主題明確，有層次性。首先短文內(nèi)容完整，包含了題目要求的所有信息。語句之間注意使用恰當?shù)倪B接成分，使整篇文章意思連貫、表達流暢。通過審題可知，這篇短文應(yīng)主要使用一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)，第三人稱來敘述，短文可以分成兩段或者三段，一個內(nèi)容一段或前兩個內(nèi)容合到一段。題目中利用表格的形式給我們列舉了短文的主要內(nèi)容，包括：共享單車的優(yōu)勢；存在的問題以及你自己對這件事情的看法。t return shared bikes in time. Sometimes shared bikes take up too much of the road, so they are in our way.I think we should encourage more people to use shared bikes properly. After all, it39。s easy for us to get around on shared bikes. Also, riding bicycles not only is good for our health but also can help reduce pollution. What39。寫作時，考生要緊密貼合表格中的三個要點：首先，闡述共享單車的優(yōu)點；其次，列舉共享單車帶來的問題；最后，根據(jù)問題給出個人建議。s very convenient for people to go somewhere.，Also, Besides, In this way, However, it also brings some problems. For example, In my opinion,等。在短文中使用了大量的復(fù)合句、固定句式、連詞及固定短語，為文章增色不少，.如: It39。s helpful to people39。s enjoyed by lots of people.First of all, it39。11．F解析：Today,as a greener means of transportation, bikesharing is being more and more popular in many cities. It39。寫作時，避免漢語式英語。時態(tài)為一般過去時，靈活運用動詞的過去式。9．A解析：At present only a few students do some reading after class. Here are several reasons. First of all, quite a lot of students are burdened with too much homework. Still others haven’t formed a habit of reading. They would rather spend their spare time on TV or on the Internet. However, reading has many benefits. Through reading we can learn more about the world. Besides, it can help us think better. Last but not least, reading can make our life more colourful. Here are my suggestions. For one thing, teachers are supposed to limit the amount of our homework so that we can have more time to read. For another, it’s a good idea to form reading clubs and learn from each other.【解析】 略10．C解析：Long long ago, there was a man called Yangshi. Once he went to visit his teacher, Chengyi. Unfortunately, Mr. Cheng was sleeping in the room. He didn’t wake up the teacher. So he stood in front of the gate. At that moment, there were snowflakes flying over his head and it was very cold. But yangshi still stood in the snow until Mr. Cheng woke up. When the teacher woke up, the snow was very deep. Yangshi was like a snowman standing at the gate. Finally, the teacher was moved deeply.After reading the story, I think we should respect our teacher. We should study hard.【解析】【詳解】這是一篇材料作文，主要介紹中國的經(jīng)典故事, “程門立雪（Stand in the snow to wait for Master Cheng respectfully）”。用了because引導(dǎo)的原因狀語從句，增加了文章的亮點。寫作亮點：短文用了一些短語和句式，如：e to an end結(jié)束；on the way在途中；get close to nature親近大自然；volunteer to do something自愿做某事；help sb to do sth幫助某人做某事；take part in sth參加活動。文章主要內(nèi)容為計劃的書寫，主要使用一般將來時態(tài)。m sure I39。當主語是第三人稱單數(shù)時，注意主謂一致關(guān)系。用“wear + 某種衣