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短文中使用了豐富的句型和短語,如The teachers are very friendly and they are ready to help me. The most unforgettable thing is that I got a chance of being an exchange students and spent two months in , we kept in touch with each other through s. Besides, I was not good at Chinese also wish I can do better in all subjects when I am in high school and can go to a good 。句式結(jié)構(gòu)完整,符合英語的表達習(xí)慣。各部分內(nèi)容安排合理,有層次、有條理。短文有以下幾個特點:首先文章內(nèi)容完整,結(jié)構(gòu)清晰。同時語句之間使用適當(dāng)?shù)倪B接成分,使文意連貫、自然。另外注意句式結(jié)構(gòu)要符合英語的表達習(xí)慣,用完整的句子表達。表格中有非常具體的提示,但不能逐詞翻譯表格中的短語,應(yīng)把他們變成自己的話,并用英語表達出來。審題可知,這篇短文應(yīng)主要使用一般現(xiàn)在時和一般過去時,注意根據(jù)表達需要使用正確時態(tài),并注意謂語動詞的正確形式。15.A解析:My Life At SchoolHow time flies! It’s unbelievable that I’m going to graduate from my beloved school. There are many things to remember. In the junior school, I got along well with my classmates. The teachers are very friendly and they are ready to help me. The most unforgettable thing is that I got a chance of being an exchange students and spent two months in Australia. I learned a lot from the experience. I also remember I served as volunteer to help others. Certainly, there were also unhappy things. My good friend Li Hua went to another school. I was very sad. Luckily, we kept in touch with each other through s. Besides, I was not good at Chinese writing. I hope I can go to a dream school and make more new friends. I also wish I can do better in all subjects when I am in high school and can go to a good college.【解析】【詳解】這篇作文要求我們以My Life At School為題,寫一篇發(fā)言稿。s good for us to do some sports.【解析】【詳解】這是一篇給材料作文,本文已經(jīng)給出了主要寫作要點,動筆前要先認(rèn)真閱讀要點,然后圍繞要點適當(dāng)發(fā)揮.寫作中,應(yīng)注意描述的全面性,盡量將提示的內(nèi)容利用上;結(jié)合材料內(nèi)容,可知本文主要是第三人稱,一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)進行敘述.語言的表述應(yīng)該符合語法的結(jié)構(gòu),造句應(yīng)該符合英語的表達習(xí)慣.適當(dāng)使用連詞,做到上下文聯(lián)系緊密,符合邏輯關(guān)系.【點睛】這篇短文用到了一些好的句型:They also think kids can help do housework to learn some life skills. But the kids disagree. They think it39。s important to take summer courses. They also think kids can help do housework to learn some life skills. But the kids disagree. They think it39。短文中句子結(jié)構(gòu)以簡單句為主,也使用了并列句和復(fù)合句以及一些較復(fù)雜的高級句式,語句之間也使用了較好的連接成分,如We should be polite to others and try to behave well. 、It’s kind of you to help people in need. 、Meanwhile, We can help clean up our city in order to make it clearer and tidier.、We can’t spit anywhere and we shouldn’t throw rubbish everywhere. At the same time, we shouldn’t break traffic 。文章條理清晰,有層次?!军c睛】這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文,短文作者根據(jù)題目要求,向中學(xué)生們發(fā)出號召,共同參與到城市“雙創(chuàng)”活動中來。寫作時應(yīng)注意:首先英語的表達習(xí)慣和漢語是不同的,不能逐詞翻譯,寫漢語式的英語,而應(yīng)從句子的整體結(jié)構(gòu)考慮,使用恰當(dāng)?shù)脑~匯、短語和句型,以常見的主謂賓或者主系表構(gòu)成的簡單句為主,穿插使用并列句或者復(fù)合句,改變文章節(jié)奏,提升文章檔次。根據(jù)這個內(nèi)容,寫作時,把短文分成兩個層次,這樣可以使文章結(jié)構(gòu)清晰、條理。題目中并沒有規(guī)定具體的寫作內(nèi)容,而是用圖表的形式,列出了寫作的提綱。13.E解析:Since the government created civilized and healthy city, our living environment has improved a lot. Everyone plays an important role in building our city, so good behaviors can be seen everywhere.As junior high students, on the one hand, there are a lot of things we can do. We should be polite to others and try to behave well. It’s kind of you to help people in need. Meanwhile, We can help clean up our city in order to make it clearer and tidier. Also, we can plant more trees and keep off grass. On the other hand, there are many things we shouldn’t do. We shouldn’t make a lot of noise loudly in the public. We can’t spit anywhere and we shouldn’t throw rubbish everywhere. At the same time, we shouldn’t break traffic rules.Let’s take action now. Our actions can make a difference and lead to a more beautiful city.【解析】【詳解】瓊海正在進行“雙創(chuàng)”活動,即創(chuàng)建文明城市、創(chuàng)建健康城市,城市的生活環(huán)境有了很大的改變。寫作亮點:本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊,要點齊全,語言簡練。根據(jù)內(nèi)容提示可知本文會用一般過去時態(tài)和一般將來時態(tài),注意一些常見句式的應(yīng)用。的有一個壞處。mayXbringitnegativetheadditiontheXadvantagesthinkButarguments.insome第四段:There________________一個例子。thisdetailsgiveexample的第一個理由。thatpointTheyX.toitTheyground.astandother的另一個原因。thatalso_______________________支持XfactoutTheyX.ofthefavorare第二段:Some點睛:對立觀點式結(jié)合觀點式議論文的段落格式,首先在第一段提出問題現(xiàn)象,第二段表達支持這種行為做法的原因和好處,第三段描述反對人的觀點及原因,最后一段表達自己的觀點。11.C解析:iPads, ing into the classroomsCan you use an iPad in the classroom? The answer is yes! Recently, students and parents are arguing about the new teaching method.The students don’t think they have to carry heavy bags any more. It’s cool to have lessons over iPads. It’s very interesting to study like that. They believe that they will learn more and better.However,parents think using ipads for too long will influence children’s eyesight. And some poor families can’t afford to buy iPads.I think in some ways iPads are good for us. We can search for information on the Internet at any time. It’s easy for us to chat with our classmates and teachers about our lessons.【解析】根據(jù)題目要求,需要書寫一篇議論文,探討iPad進課堂這一現(xiàn)象,以及人們對此的不同觀點和態(tài)度。根據(jù)要表達的內(nèi)容確定句子的時態(tài)、語態(tài);語言表達要符合英語習(xí)慣。要求仔細(xì)閱讀有關(guān)提示,弄清試題提供的所有信息,明確本文主要從三個方面來寫:介紹足球運動及其好處;說說自己的偶像;談?wù)勛约旱膲粝??!究键c定位】 考查提綱類作文。寫作亮點:短文開頭直奔主題:我想要談?wù)勎业臒兰霸鯓犹幚硭麄?;后面三段分別從外貌上的煩惱、與父母交流上的障礙、學(xué)習(xí)上的壓力幾方面分別談?wù)撟约旱臒兰疤幚淼姆绞?,生動具體,條理分明。要包含表格中所有的信息,并作適當(dāng)?shù)陌l(fā)揮。重點語句:It is everyone’s duty to do something good to the environment around us保護環(huán)境是每個人的職責(zé),make full use of充分利用, let’s take action!讓我們行動起來9.H解析:Hello everyone,I am Li Hua. I’d like to talk about my problems and how I deal with them.I am not very tall and very mon. But I don’t care and I believe in myself.My parents don’t understand me and I have very few friends. I encourage myself to be kind to others and learn to municate with others very well.I often feel stressed because of my study and I don’t have many chances to join the afterclass activities. I will plan my time very carefully and improve my study in a very good way. Try to join as many activities as possible and achieve a balance between study and hobbies.That’s all. Thank you!【解析】試題分析:本題是一篇給材料作文,要求用英語寫一篇發(fā)言稿,在班會上談?wù)勀阌龅降臒酪约澳阕约旱淖龇ā8鶕?jù)材料可知本文主要是應(yīng)用第一人稱,一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài),注意標(biāo)點符號及大小寫等問題,不要犯語法錯誤。8.G解析:Live Green, Live BetterAs China has been speeding up its development, we should pursue harmony(追求和諧) between man and nature. But how can we help?In recent years,protecting the environment is being more and more important to the whole human beings. It is everyone’s duty to do something good to the envir