【正文】 s more, when on a bus, we actively give our seats to the people in need.Besides, 。做到：要點(diǎn)要全，表達(dá)要清晰明確，使用短語(yǔ)，句型要準(zhǔn)確，注意避免拼寫和語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤。用的短語(yǔ)、句型：both kinds of、If we choose a boarding school、At the same time、As for me, I prefer a boarding school、pay attention to、來(lái)增加了文章的亮點(diǎn)。寫完后反復(fù)閱讀修改推敲潤(rùn)色，人稱、時(shí)態(tài)、單復(fù)數(shù)一致等。、短語(yǔ)、句型。第三段要表述作者自己的選擇和理由。第一段要寫總體交代你即將升入高中，面臨寄宿（a boarding school）和走讀（a day school）兩類學(xué)校的選擇。15．B解析：We are going to graduate from our middle schools, and we will make a choice to enter a boarding school or a day school. Both kinds of school have their advantages and disadvantages.If we choose a boarding school, we will save time to study. However, we may have less time to stay with our family. If we choose a day school, parents can know more about our studies. At the same time puter games and TV plays may make a bad influence on us. As for me, I prefer a boarding school. We should pay attention to our studies to get good grades in the high school.【解析】【分析】整體分析：這是一篇給材料作文。語(yǔ)言準(zhǔn)確、得體，表達(dá)自然、流暢。其次短文中使用了正確的時(shí)態(tài)和人稱，語(yǔ)法規(guī)范，用詞準(zhǔn)確，注意了動(dòng)詞正確形式的變化。短文分三段，第一段基本是題目中給出的開(kāi)頭，作者使用一句話引出下文；第二段是主體，介紹了過(guò)去美好的回憶以及不開(kāi)心的事情；最后一段對(duì)未來(lái)進(jìn)行了展望?！军c(diǎn)睛】這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，短文作者根據(jù)題目要求，回憶了自己的初中生活，并展望了未來(lái)。句式結(jié)構(gòu)可以簡(jiǎn)單句為基礎(chǔ)，穿插并列句、復(fù)合句以及其他復(fù)雜句式的使用，提升作文檔次。寫作時(shí)應(yīng)注意：文章中應(yīng)包括表格中的所有信息，不能遺漏要點(diǎn)；第三部分的內(nèi)容中還需要自己發(fā)揮想象力進(jìn)行補(bǔ)充，注意應(yīng)合情合理，與上文很好地銜接。內(nèi)容應(yīng)主要包括三部分：首先是初中三年里的美好回憶；然后是不開(kāi)心的事情；最后展望自己未來(lái)的高中生活。題目中利用表格的形式，展示了文章的具體內(nèi)容，學(xué)生們可以此為提綱進(jìn)行寫作?！军c(diǎn)睛】本文首先開(kāi)篇功能句Thank you for your ，運(yùn)用多種連接詞，比如because，Besides，To realize my dream, 等使文章連貫性強(qiáng)，長(zhǎng)短句結(jié)合，讀起來(lái)朗朗上口，不失為一篇佳作。為了實(shí)現(xiàn)自己的夢(mèng)想，正在為此作出努力?！驹斀狻渴紫然卮鹇殬I(yè)是教師。13．B解析：例文Thank you for your letter. I am glad to tell you about my dream job. Teaching is my dream job because I would like to share my knowledge with my students and help them solve problems. I am outgoing and helpful. I get on well with children. Besides, the school39。應(yīng)從句子整體考慮，使用恰當(dāng)?shù)脑~匯和句型來(lái)表達(dá)，語(yǔ)法規(guī)范。其次要注意使用正確的時(shí)態(tài)和人稱，通過(guò)分析可知，這篇短文應(yīng)使用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)，謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞用原形，特別要注意謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞形式要變化，這是一個(gè)寫作的難點(diǎn)。12．C解析：　　In recent years, many cities in China have been hit by smog frequently, which has aroused great concern among people.　　Smog has a bad effect on people’s health. Many people, children and the old in particular, suffer from illnesses caused by smog. Consequently, citizens are warned not to go out without wearing masks. 　　How does it e about? Scientists have found that it is human activity that has caused this. The poisonous matters in the air mainly e as a result of people’s burning coal, driving cars, industry production and so on.　　What should we do to stop the situation from worsening? First, cleaner fuels for cars and stricter emission standards for factories are of vital importance. Second, for us individuals, living a green life like going to work or school by public transport is a good choice. 　　Also planting more trees to increase green areas is necessary. I believe every contribution counts. Only if we work together will smog weather disappear pletely. 【解析】【詳解】這篇作文要求我們根據(jù)提示來(lái)介紹有關(guān)霧霾的情況，題目中給出了寫作的內(nèi)容，我們應(yīng)將這些內(nèi)容用正確的英語(yǔ)表達(dá)出來(lái)。它要求將所規(guī)定的材料內(nèi)容經(jīng)整理后展開(kāi)思維，考查運(yùn)用所學(xué)英語(yǔ)知識(shí)準(zhǔn)確表達(dá)意思的能力。在學(xué)習(xí)中注意總結(jié)牢記一些固定句式及短語(yǔ)，寫作時(shí)就可以適當(dāng)引用，使文章表達(dá)更有邏輯性，也更富有條理。m going to take part in social practice activities, too. I want to learn something new and get good experience from these activities.Best wishes!YoursLi Hua【解析】【詳解】這篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短語(yǔ)，為文章增色不少，如how to do，spend a meaningful summer vacation，half of，plan to do，travel at home and abroad，enjoy the beautiful scenery，take part in，social practice activities，make new friends 等。11．D解析：Dear DavidI39。句子結(jié)構(gòu)以簡(jiǎn)單句為主，也使用了一些并列句和復(fù)合句，長(zhǎng)短句結(jié)合，使文章富有節(jié)奏。其次短文中使用了正確的時(shí)態(tài)和人稱，作者根據(jù)表達(dá)需要使用了一般過(guò)去時(shí)、一般將來(lái)時(shí)態(tài)和一般將來(lái)時(shí)態(tài)，動(dòng)詞形式變化準(zhǔn)確，語(yǔ)法規(guī)范?！军c(diǎn)睛】這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，短文中作者根據(jù)題目要求介紹了自己家鄉(xiāng)治理霧霾的情況，并結(jié)合自身的實(shí)際情況，講述了自己日常生活中是如何做的。寫作時(shí)，應(yīng)注意英語(yǔ)句式表達(dá)習(xí)慣和漢語(yǔ)是不同的，不能逐詞翻譯，應(yīng)從句子的整體考慮，寫完整的句子，利用簡(jiǎn)單句的基本句型，使用恰當(dāng)?shù)脑~匯和短語(yǔ)。因此文章應(yīng)主要分成三段，一個(gè)內(nèi)容一段。題目中列出了三個(gè)要點(diǎn)，我們應(yīng)根據(jù)這些要點(diǎn)提示，來(lái)組織語(yǔ)言，充實(shí)內(nèi)容。在收尾部分表達(dá)了作者積極的人生態(tài)度，表示如果還有機(jī)會(huì)自己還樂(lè)于參與，這樣使得這篇文章結(jié)構(gòu)完整，表意更加清晰。寫作亮點(diǎn)：既然這是一篇記敘文，就應(yīng)該完整地呈現(xiàn)故事，需要加上必要的背景，指明時(shí)間（Last summer），地點(diǎn)（in rural area），簡(jiǎn)要概括事件（teach children English），這是文章首句的點(diǎn)睛之筆，信息量豐富。9．E解析：Last summer,though it was hot,I volunteered to teach children English in rural I arrived there,I couldn39。用了because引導(dǎo)的原因狀語(yǔ)從句，增加了文章的亮點(diǎn)。寫作亮點(diǎn)：短文用了一些短語(yǔ)和句式，如：e to an end結(jié)束；on the way在途中；get close to nature親近大自然；volunteer to do something自愿做某事；help sb to do sth幫助某人做某事；take part in sth參加活動(dòng)。文章主要內(nèi)容為計(jì)劃的書寫，主要使用一般將來(lái)時(shí)態(tài)。m sure I39。最后要細(xì)心復(fù)核檢查，確保正確無(wú)誤。在寫作時(shí)，注意連句成篇，保持文章的連貫性，要層次清楚，要點(diǎn)分明，中心突出。文章時(shí)態(tài)主要用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，人稱主要用第一、第三人稱。：孟郊：唐朝：母親為兒子做衣服：母愛(ài)的偉大第三部分：信的結(jié)語(yǔ)——如果對(duì)方有任何問(wèn)題，可以繼續(xù)問(wèn)自己，并期待收到對(duì)方的來(lái)信。我將給你介紹《游子吟》（Song of the parting son）這首詩(shī)。人稱是第一人稱和第三人稱?！驹斀狻扛鶕?jù)內(nèi)容可知，這是一篇書信類文章。動(dòng)詞不定式作主語(yǔ)，謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞用單數(shù)，疑問(wèn)詞+to do?，F(xiàn)在完成時(shí)（have/has+done）。重點(diǎn)詞匯及短語(yǔ)：argument爭(zhēng)論；take place發(fā)生；among（三者或三者以上）之間；a good chance for sb對(duì)某人來(lái)說(shuō)是個(gè)好機(jī)會(huì)；help sb do sth幫助某人做某事；get sick生病。Where引導(dǎo)的定語(yǔ)從句。Which引導(dǎo)的限定性定語(yǔ)從句。It is+adj.（for sb.） to do sth. （對(duì)某人來(lái)說(shuō)）做某事是怎樣的。亮點(diǎn)詞匯短語(yǔ)：one of．．．，．．．之一；green tea綠茶；be famous for．．．，因…而出名；keep healthy保持健康；be strict in sth對(duì)…嚴(yán)格；not only．．．.but also．．．，不僅．．．而且．．．。4．C解析：Tea culture is one of the most famous cultures in China. Longjing tea is one of the famous Chinese traditional teas and famous green tea. Why is Longjing Tea famous for? Because it taste good. It is good for people to keep healthy by drinking longjing tea. Longjing tea grows mainly on the sides of mountains. People are very strict about the picking of Longjing tea.Longjing is a famous tea in China, which is related not only to the climate and soil environment of Longjing, but also to the production technology of Longjing. Hangzhou is the resort where Longjing tea is produced. So Hangzhou National Tea Museum is the best place to learn about Hongjing tea.【解析】【詳解】這是一篇材料類介紹型作文，所以我們必須要結(jié)合所給材料再適當(dāng)補(bǔ)充內(nèi)容。用了賓語(yǔ)從句，如：Most students believe it’s necessary to study hard. What’s more, they think each teenager is supposed to make a good plan for ，如：Also, we must be active and exercise more to keep healthy because it’s important to a successful ，也是提分的經(jīng)典句子。注意不要遺漏要點(diǎn)，所寫的句子應(yīng)該符合英語(yǔ)語(yǔ)法，不能是漢語(yǔ)式的句子，要使用一些高級(jí)詞匯及句式。3．A解析：I have recently done a survey about how a teenager can have a successful life.Most students believe it’s necessary to study hard. After all,