【正文】 【詳解】結(jié)合所給材料，可知本文主要考查一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)和一般過(guò)去時(shí)，人稱為第一，三人稱，注意主謂一致問(wèn)題，句子結(jié)構(gòu)主要為系表結(jié)構(gòu)和動(dòng)賓結(jié)構(gòu)，注意一些常見(jiàn)句式的應(yīng)用，比如：When I was……，my mother always read……，Gradually I began to。上下文之間可以適當(dāng)使用連接詞。根據(jù)材料內(nèi)容確定主要句子的時(shí)態(tài)，及句式等重要內(nèi)容。s important to remember these for us all.【解析】這是一篇給材料作文。如He is always ready to help others.、He not only likes reading detective novels but also likes watching programs about sports news.、He is good at running. He won the first place in our school sports meeting this 。寫(xiě)作時(shí)注意了條理性，使文章具有層次感，條理清楚。這篇作文內(nèi)容完整，包含了表格中的所有內(nèi)容，沒(méi)有遺漏要點(diǎn)。同時(shí)注意表達(dá)的準(zhǔn)確性，尤其是表格中的第五項(xiàng)和第六項(xiàng)內(nèi)容。這篇作文應(yīng)主要使用第三人稱來(lái)寫(xiě)。在表格中有非常詳細(xì)的關(guān)于Tommy各方面的內(nèi)容，我們需要用正確的英語(yǔ)把這些內(nèi)容有條理的表達(dá)出來(lái)。整篇文章語(yǔ)句通順、意思連貫、表達(dá)流暢。其次短文中使用了正確的時(shí)態(tài)和人稱，文章以第一人稱、一般將來(lái)時(shí)和一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)為主，謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞形式準(zhǔn)發(fā)，語(yǔ)法規(guī)范，符合英語(yǔ)句子的表達(dá)習(xí)慣。作者主要從三個(gè)方面敘述：首先介紹了自己的身份和寫(xiě)留言的目的；接下來(lái)詳細(xì)介紹了自己參加這次冬令營(yíng)的愿望；最后是一個(gè)簡(jiǎn)單的結(jié)尾。點(diǎn)睛：這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文。另外還應(yīng)注意語(yǔ)句之間使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B接成分，使文意連貫。通過(guò)分析可知，這篇短文應(yīng)使用第一人稱I來(lái)敘述，時(shí)態(tài)應(yīng)以一般將來(lái)時(shí)態(tài)和一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)為主。文章內(nèi)容主要包括三個(gè)部分：首先是介紹自己的身份；然后寫(xiě)留言的目的，包括冬令營(yíng)的時(shí)間、想要去參觀London Canal Museum以及聽(tīng)Liz Payne的講座；最后簡(jiǎn)單介紹一下你的預(yù)期的收獲。寫(xiě)作時(shí)，考生要緊密貼合表格中的三個(gè)要點(diǎn)：首先，闡述共享單車的優(yōu)點(diǎn)；其次，列舉共享單車帶來(lái)的問(wèn)題；最后，根據(jù)問(wèn)題給出個(gè)人建議。s very convenient for people to go somewhere.，Also, Besides, In this way, However, it also brings some problems. For example, In my opinion,等。在短文中使用了大量的復(fù)合句、固定句式、連詞及固定短語(yǔ)，為文章增色不少，.如: It39。s helpful to people39。s enjoyed by lots of people.First of all, it39。11．F解析：Today,as a greener means of transportation, bikesharing is being more and more popular in many cities. It39。文章中語(yǔ)言得體，語(yǔ)句通順，句式表達(dá)符合英語(yǔ)的習(xí)慣，語(yǔ)法規(guī)范、準(zhǔn)確。最后對(duì)家鄉(xiāng)的未來(lái)表達(dá)了自己的愿望。文章是按照時(shí)間的順序，先介紹了家鄉(xiāng)過(guò)去的面貌，這一部分使用了過(guò)去時(shí)態(tài)，謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞都變成了過(guò)去式，形式準(zhǔn)確。語(yǔ)句之間注意使用適當(dāng)?shù)倪B接成分，使文意連貫。表達(dá)時(shí)，需要注意英語(yǔ)表達(dá)習(xí)慣和漢語(yǔ)是不同的，不能逐詞翻譯表格中的語(yǔ)句，而應(yīng)從句子的整體考慮，使用恰當(dāng)?shù)脑~匯、短語(yǔ)和句型來(lái)表達(dá)。審題可知，作文的基本框架和大概內(nèi)容都有了，需要注意的是在描寫(xiě)過(guò)去的時(shí)候，需要適當(dāng)發(fā)揮一到兩點(diǎn)；還有對(duì)將來(lái)的希望也需要學(xué)生自己發(fā)揮。10．H解析：My hometown has changed a lot over the years.In the past, my hometown was very poor and the streets were very narrow. Houses were small and old. Rubbish was everywhere. Few people would like to e to my hometown. Now the government takes measures to improve the pollution and the city bees cleaner and cleaner. The houses are big and bright. Many people have moved into new apartments. More and more people have their own cars and live a fortable life. The new airport has been in use for two years. There are thousands of tourists from all over the country every hope my hometown is being more and more beautiful.【解析】【詳解】這篇作文要求我們以The Changes in My Hometown為題，介紹一下自己的家鄉(xiāng)這些年來(lái)發(fā)生的變化。：高分短語(yǔ)：feel satisfied；feel upset；e true；set a practical goal；both…and…；keep patient。：例文用第一人稱來(lái)敘述主要內(nèi)容；時(shí)態(tài)采用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)為主，主要講述如何實(shí)現(xiàn)自己的目標(biāo)（Firstly,…More importantly,…Besides,…Finally,…）。9．A解析：As we know, life is not always smooth. Sometimes we may feel satisfied and sometimes we may feel upset. In order to make our dream e true, firstly we should set a practical goal. But just having a goal is not enough. More importantly, we need to study hard to make ourselves stronger. Besides, as teenagers, it is necessary for us to take part in more social activities. We can learn a lot from each other by joining in those social activities. However, there will be many difficulties in both our daily life and study, so please keep patient and be brave to face these challenges. Finally, all our efforts are meaningful and one day our dream will be achieved.【解析】【詳解】：這是一篇材料作文。高分亮點(diǎn)：短語(yǔ)：Firstly；Secondly；Finally；a good way to do sth；broaden our knowledge and horizon。8．D解析：例文Dear students, the World Reading Day is ing. As a middle school student, everyone should read books. Firstly, reading increases our knowledge and we can learn the world affairs without going out. Secondly, reading is a good way to improve reading and writing skills. Finally, reading can broaden our knowledge and horizon, which is important to job hunting in the future. Therefore, start to reading, no matter how old you are and what you are doing. So I’m here again to call on all of us to read more books and read good books. Li Hua【解析】【詳解】題干解讀：該題目屬于應(yīng)用文寫(xiě)作，但寫(xiě)作時(shí)要按照應(yīng)用文格式寫(xiě)，寫(xiě)作時(shí)承接短文開(kāi)頭，寫(xiě)出對(duì)學(xué)生的倡議。亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明：這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，很好地完成了試題規(guī)定的任務(wù)，語(yǔ)言表達(dá)符合英語(yǔ)習(xí)慣，準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)，主謂一致，特別使用一些亮點(diǎn)詞句，如get together，enjoy the full moon， share our stories等。m glad to hear from you. Now let me introduce the MidAutumn Festival to you. The MidAutumn Festival falls on the 15th of the 8th lunar month. It’s a big day for us Chinese people. All the family members get together to celebrate the festival. In the evening, we usually have a big dinner. And then we go outside and enjoy the full moon. The moon that night looks the brightest. With the beautiful moon up in the sky, we sit together to eat mooncakes, and share our stories.For me, the best part is to enjoy the moon and eat mooncakes. Mooncakes taste very delicious. They look like the moon, big and round.Yours,Li Hua【解析】【詳解】本篇寫(xiě)作是以書(shū)信的方式向筆友介紹中國(guó)的傳統(tǒng)節(jié)日中秋節(jié)，要用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)來(lái)寫(xiě)。這一步我們除了檢查短文的各種錯(cuò)誤外，還要檢查語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)是否合理，有無(wú)重復(fù)、啰嗦的語(yǔ)言，大小寫(xiě)是否正確，格式是否正確，詞數(shù)是否符合要求等。修改潤(rùn)色。使用的詞語(yǔ)、短語(yǔ)及句型盡量用自己有把握的詞。初寫(xiě)短文。有了提綱，我們就可以根據(jù)提綱和主題確定相關(guān)的寫(xiě)作材料。審題時(shí)要注意試題的要求，抓住要點(diǎn)，詞數(shù)符合要求?！军c(diǎn)睛】寫(xiě)作時(shí)可以從以下幾個(gè)方面做起：認(rèn)真審題。根據(jù)要表達(dá)的內(nèi)容確定并準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯，可適當(dāng)增加內(nèi)容。6．H解析：例文Hello!Dear Amy, thank you for caring.Now I am working hard for the senior high school entrance examination. I have got good results in most of my subjects, but I am not happy with myself. I think I must spend more time on my studies.My parents are really strict with me. However, they care for me as well. Once upon a time, I failed in my physics exam and felt stressed and sad. They had a close munication with me and helped me solve my problems and cheer up again.My teachers are also ready to help us. They hope that we can realize our dreams. They tell us to try our best and not to give up. Life is always full of ups and downs. It39。用be good at doing ，用like sth./doing “My/His/her favorite + 名詞+ is …”來(lái)介紹某人的最愛(ài)。在介紹長(zhǎng)相時(shí)用“be+形容詞”來(lái)描述人物的身高、體重、身材等；用“have/has + （straight/curly） hair / （big/small） eyes/nose/mouth”來(lái)描述頭發(fā)或五官。內(nèi)容可以是介紹自己也可以介紹他人，包括姓名、年齡、外貌特征、興趣愛(ài)好，有時(shí)也可以包括日?；顒?dòng)。另外在寫(xiě)作時(shí)可以適當(dāng)使用一些連詞，使之上下連貫，合乎邏輯。我們要做的就是用正確的英語(yǔ)句子來(lái)組織這些材料，在描寫(xiě)外貌和性格時(shí)，會(huì)用到系表結(jié)構(gòu)，注意主謂一致關(guān)系。根據(jù)題目要求可知，人稱以第三人稱為主。5．F解析：My best friendFriends are very important in our life. They always help us when we are i